hey everyone i made more poems tell me what you think ^_^

 

Hurt

 

no matter what you do

i cant hurt you

you can hurt me

but i cant be mean

cause i was taught the right way to be

no matter how hard i try

i cant be the bad guy

so ill say goodbye

cause this is not worth my time

 

summer

 

shining sun

under the ocean

making faces at the fishes

mermaid style swimming

everyone loves swimming

really summer is the best season ever

 

sea

 

i jump

with a sound of a splash

i go deep deep down

to the bottom of the ocean

i look around and what do i see

hundreds of fishes staring at me

i make a face and they scatter

which gave a good laughter

but as i swim forward

i feel so free

so i know i at peace with the sea.

 

silence

 

silence

its pure

and sweet

it helps me think

but it usually gone in a wink

i miss my silence

because it so quite

and i like it

pure silence.

 

blame

 

they always blame me

they are nothing but mean

i am not loved

i am always forgotten

i am the cause of everything

is this why im mean

is this how ill will always be

you tell me

 

walk away

 

what am i suppose to say

when you walk away

i cant make you stay

cause that ain't the right thing to say

so go on and walk away

cause i ain't gonna run after you and say stay

even though i don't want you to go

i know you want me to feel alone.

hey everyone i made more poems tell me what you think ^_^ Hurt no matter what you doi cant hurt youyou can hurt mebut i cant be meancause i was taught the right way to beno matter how hard i tryi cant be the bad guyso ill say goodbyecause this is not worth my time summer shining sununder the oceanmaking faces at the fishesmermaid style swimmingeveryone loves swimmingreally summer is the best season ever sea i jumpwith a sound of a splashi go deep deep downto the bottom of the oceani look around and what do i seehundreds of fishes staring at mei make a face and they scatterwhich gave a good laughterbut as i swim forwardi feel so freeso i know i at peace with the sea. silence silenceits pureand sweetit helps me thinkbut it usually gone in a winki miss my silencebecause it so quiteand i like itpure silence. blame they always blame methey are nothing but meani am not lovedi am always forgotteni am the cause of everythingis this why im meanis this how ill will always beyou tell me walk away what am i suppose to saywhen you walk awayi cant make you staycause that ain't the right thing to sayso go on and walk awaycause i ain't gonna run after you and say stayeven though i don't want you to goi know you want me to feel alone.

Very nice! ^^ I personally like the Sea and Silence ones

I like them all.

Please do make more.

http://kh13.com/forum/topic/62167-random-poems-i-came-up-with/?do=findComment&comment=1228068

 

this is the other topic with more poems i made from before.