Sora not Roxas 0 Posted July 3, 2010 This will have a good amount of violence even though it is somewhat of a love story. Just to let you know. A demon Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sora not Roxas 0 Posted August 20, 2010 I am going to postpone this for a while. I want to work on my 2nd story more. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
King Riku 2,063 Posted August 20, 2010 Aww this is pretty good. I hope you'll be able to post more soon Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Godot 513 Posted August 28, 2010 Well, it's a really good story, and I hope you continue with it, but, next time, it'd be much better and easier to read if you separated your paragraphs. A lot of people get turned off towards a story if they just see a big wall of text. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sora not Roxas 0 Posted September 12, 2010 This story is coming along nicely, and its already done, but the thing is that school keeps getting in the way so it has become difficult to post stuff now. No matter I will finish it. (hopefully by December or even earlier. Most likely earlier. I was joking about the December thing lol) I also have to good to work which also takes time as well. So much to do. And one of my pets died, so I Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sora not Roxas 0 Posted September 19, 2010 It Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sora not Roxas 0 Posted October 17, 2010 Part 3-Dream Part 3-DreamThe young man is in a state of deep sleep. The realm he has enter is of another Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sora not Roxas 0 Posted October 17, 2010 Part 4-Truth Hiro: [Jumps up] Whoa! [Looks at his hand] Ravager huh? [smiles] Man that was some dream. Felt so weird though, as if, I have met that voice before. [He gets up on the couch and opens the shades and window. He looks out and sees kids playing and cars going by among other things, such as birds flying into the distance and realizes something.] Wait Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sora not Roxas 0 Posted January 23, 2011 Part 5-Two weeks later Hiro: Two weeks it has been, wow I can Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sora not Roxas 0 Posted January 23, 2011 Well I guess that's it for this story, no more postings. I will officially just most my second story on the site...for now. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites