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Well, it's a really good story, and I hope you continue with it, but, next time, it'd be much better and easier to read if you separated your paragraphs. A lot of people get turned off towards a story if they just see a big wall of text.

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This story is coming along nicely, and its already done, but the thing is that school keeps getting in the way so it has become difficult to post stuff now. No matter I will finish it. (hopefully by December or even earlier. Most likely earlier. I was joking about the December thing lol) I also have to good to work which also takes time as well. So much to do. And one of my pets died, so I

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Part 4-Truth



Hiro: [Jumps up] Whoa! [Looks at his hand] Ravager huh? [smiles] Man that was some dream. Felt so weird though, as if, I have met that voice before. [He gets up on the couch and opens the shades and window. He looks out and sees kids playing and cars going by among other things, such as birds flying into the distance and realizes something.] Wait

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