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Ok this is not the first story I have written but it's the first one I ever posted on this site!

I'm sorry if it's horrible or something please tell me if you like it or not.

 

 

Hi, I'm Alessa.

I am 11 years old in the forth grade.

Today was the first day of the fortht grade which was the worst day ever for me! I was so nervous today. I didn't know any of the people that were in my class. I felt like a complete outsider the whole day today. I wish I knew someone that was in my class. But there was one kid that looked familiar to me. It was a boy about my age maybe. He had kinda long dark brown hair. Brown eye's and he was a little bit taller than me. He kept saying "Hi Alessa!" to me all day today. It was weird. I don't know who he is but he sure does know me I wish I knew how he knew me or have I met him before? I don't remember but I just hope I can find out what his name is soon. Well anyway other than that the first day of first grade sucked. Hopefully tomorrow will be better than today. Maybe I can find out his name too! I should come up with a plan on how I can find out what his name is!

That's what I'm going to do tomorrow. I'm going to find out what his name is if it's the last thing I do!

 

I hope you liked it. Please tell me if I should finish writing about it or I should stop.

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this is weird but good at the same time.

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When I got home I went upstair's to my room. I oened he note I found in my locker again and read it over and over again. I didn't know what it meant or anything.

I kept thinking about him. I was wondering why he ran off like that all of a sudden when I asked him what he wanted to talk to me about.

This wasn't making any since. Not one bit. This was giveing me a headack just thinking about it. My mom walked into my room and sat down on the bed next to me. I didn't know she as there till she said something.

"What are these Alessa?"She asked as she read the note.

"Is this a love note from a boy at school?"She asked me curiously.

"No! It's not a love note mom!"I said as I snached the note out of her hand and put it on my nightstand.

"Do you want to talk about it?"She asked me.

I guess I had no other choice but to tell her most of this.

"Mom this guy at my school left a note in my locker today saying he needed to talk to me about something but he ran off when I asked him what he need to talk about today and two day's ago He put a note in my locker saying I was annoying ad stuff. What does that mean mom?"

"It mean's he like's you sweety."

I was shocked to her what my mom had just said. Why would he like me? He doesn't know me at all. Well beside my name but still. He doesn't know what kind of thing's I'm into or anyting!

"Thanks mom."I said to her.

"No problem."She said and walked out of my room. I laid down on my bed an looked at the ceiling. This still wasn't makeing any since to me at all."Alessa...."I shot up when I heard the voice it was his voice. "Alessa..."I umped out of bed and I saw him. He was in my room.

probably was hiding somewhere, i cant wait to read more

O.O He's a weird ghost kid!

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"What are you doing here? How did you get into my room?"I asked looking shock. Before I knew it he was really close to my face. It was like he had super powers or something.

He got closer to my face. He was maybe a inch or two away from my face.

"Why are you here?"I asked him with a shaky voice.

"This..."He said and kissed me on the lips.

 

I woke up breathing hard and sweating. "I was only asleep...."I said.

"It was just a bad dream... a bad dream..."I said over and over to myself.I fell back to sleep after that dream.

It was so weird. Why did I dream that?

I woke up again at 8:45 a.m. and got ready for school.

I did the same as the morning before I met m mom at the car and looked out the window. I got out of the car not saying anything to my mom. I Walked straight to Mrs.Lee's class and sat at my desk. I wasn't looking for him really I looked ever once in a while to see if he was here yet but that was about it really. It was 9:00 and class started. But he wasn't here yet. 'It wasn't like him to be late like this.' I thought to myself.

When it was time for lunch I walked over to his table but he wasn't there. STILL.

So I put my lunch down and sat at his table alone. The day was weird not having him here or anything.

When the ball rang again it was time for us to go home. I went to my locker to grabe a book I needed and left out of the school building. As I walked home I heard something but I couldn't tell what it was. I kept walking and then I heard it again. It was more clearer this time the voice said. "Alessa...." I turned around t see him behind me wih a crazy look face. I blinked couple time's to make sure I wasn't asleep or anything. He was still there. I started to run s fast as I could. He started to ru aftr me when I was running. I ran home and ran into th house and slamed the door and fell to the ground behind the door. I was breathing really hard. What's going on with him...?" said out loud to myself.

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I got up after a minute or two and walked up into my room. I locked the door and sat on my bed and looked out the window. He was right outside my window just looking up at me.

I didn't say anything to him and he didn't say anything to me. I shut the blinds and didn't look back at him.I laid down on my bed and looked at the ceiling. "Why was he chasing me? Why is he outside my window right now...?"I said to myself in my head. There was so many question's that didn't have a answers to them yet.I laid there for about a hour or so till I got up and grabbed a book that said 'Dark Secrets' on it with a picture of a weird key on it.After I grabbed the book I left my room. I walked outside and sat on the porch of the house. I opened the book to page 210 and started to read. Then someone sat right next to me but I didn't look up to see who it was but I kinda too a wild guess. Erik.

"What you read Alessa?"He asked me looking at my book.

"Dark Secrets part one."I said not looking at him."Cool, I heard the ending was horrible." He said smiling at me.

"Hey! The ending is not horrible! I read this book 5 time's already and I love the ending!"I said clearly mad and shut the book and got up about to walk into the house to get away from him. "Wait don't go!"He said and got up really fast and grabbed my hand to stop me. I turned around slowly and looked at his and and mine. They were touching. I looked up at him and didn't say anything to him. My face started to get hot because this was really awkward for me. I'm not sure how long it took,But I went back over to him and sat down next to him.

"I'm sorry I said that."He said looking a little sad."Um, It's ok."I said to him.

"Can I ask you something...?"He asked me.

 

 

Sorry if this chapter wasn't to good or anything.

How does he get into her house? Please don't tell me he's a stalker like Edward Cullen -_-

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Wow I'm guessing your on Team Jacob lol and he's not in her house he's on the poruch and he was looking at her in the window. Yes thats so true Nick 8D

You're stories are awesome, you should become a story book writer and write short stories for little kids ^_^

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"Um Sure go ahead."I said kinda curious on what he was going to ask.

"I'm sorry I can't! It's not the right time!"He said and ran away from me.

"Wait Erik! What was it!?"I yelled to him but he was already half way down the block.I got up and grabbed my book from the ground and went back inside. I went back into my room and sat down on the bed."Why did he run away again...? Why does he act like this around me all the time...?"I said out loud to myself. I looked at note I had on my nightstand and read it over and over again. This still wasn't making much sense to me at all. "This was a puzzle that I don't think can be solved soon." I said to myself in my head.Then I remembered that my dad didn't know anyone with a kid named Erik and that Erick said that his dad and my dad worked together. I kept forgetting to ask him why he lied to me about that. Why would he lie to me about that? I'm going to ask him tomorrow at school or in this case if he's not in school I'll go home look out my window and see him and I'll ask him then. I had to find out what was going on here now. This keeps giving me a headache just trying to figure this out all on my own. I opened my book and a piece of paper fell out of it. I picked the piece of paper up and opened it.

 

 

 

Aww! Your not going to sell me?! *Hugs DarkLunatic*

 

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I opened up the piece of paper and in it was a poem. There wasn't a name on the page. All there was the poem."Cream and silk as one

How I long to taste and touch The Moon watched us."

I read the poem over and over again. I didn't get what it meant.

"Who was this from? Who wrote this and put it inside my book?" I said out loud to myself. "Wait could he have written this and slipped it in the book when I was looking? No it could have been him. It couldn't. I don't even think he knows how to write a poem anyway.

I put the poem on my nightstand next to the other notes I have gotten already. I looked at all of them and there was about five of them there. But I had six. I picked the pile of note's up and read each one. The one I was missing was the one that said."Your really annoying Alessa. Stop asking me questions all the time ok." And that one was from Erik.

I wonder what happened to it. I know I didn't leave it at school and I know I didn't throw it in the trash. I put the notes back on my nightstand and laid down in my bed. I looked at the ceiling and then I heard a noise by my window. I sat up and looked outside my window. It was Erik. He had something in his hand. It looked like some kind of book. I opened my window and put my head outside it.

"Hey Alessa! I got you a book! Here!"He said and tossed the book up into the air to my window. I reached for the book and grabbed it just in time. I looked at the book and my eye's widened. It was Dark Secrets 2. I haven't read this book yet. I don't even have it, But how did he know I wanted to get this book? I put my head outside the window to tell him thank you for the book, but he was gone. I looked around and he wasn't there I pulled my head back in and shut the window. I looked at the book and there was a note inside it. I took it out and started to read it. "Hey I know you've been reading the first book over 5 time's so I thought I would get you the second one so here you go! I hope you like it. Erik."

 

 

(BTW I did use the poem from the House of night series book 2 Betrayed Poem to Zoey RedBired from Loren Blake)

wow so nice of him

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Yep and don't ask why I'm haveing her get so many notes ok Because I dont know why I'm haveing her get them really

Awesome I love the second house of night book.

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I know right! The house of night series is awesome! Oh and Nick your close. The notes are important but I'm not saying why they are.

hes a little bugger with the notes, and instead of trying to tell her what he needs to, just write on notes for her

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After I was done reading the note that was inside my new book I put it in the pile of notes I had and opened the book to the first page and began to read it. After a couple minutes I set the book down and looked out the window. The sky was so dark you couldn't even see the stars at all."That was really nice of him to get that for me..."I thought to myself still looking at the night sky."To bad he wasn't still there after I saw what he tossed up to me. I could have said thank you to him then I guess I'll say it to him tomorrow in class."I said out loud to myself and laid down in my bed and shut my eyes."That's what I'm going to do...I'm going to say Thank you Erik for the...book..."I said then fell asleep.

I woke up and got dressed and everything and ran out to the car. I wanted to tell him thanks so bad for some reason. It's not like me to be like this but today I am. This time I beat my mom to the car. For the first time! I saw her walk out of the house and she saw me in the car already. She looked at me wide eyed and then blinked a couple of times and came to the car. I guess she thought she was still dreaming because I never beat her to the car in the morning. She started the car and pulled out of the drive way. I looked out the window like usually and waited till we were there. I jumped out of the car and ran into the building. I didn't bother to stop at my locker at all I just ran to the class room and sat down at my desk. I wait and waited till Erik finally came into class. I jumped out of my chair and went up to him. "Hey Erik!" I said and he looked at me curiously and didn't say anything at first. "Hi Alessa?"

"I just wanted to say thanks for getting me that book yesterday that was really nice of you so thanks."I said and went beck to my desk.

He stood there looking at me again and went to his desk.

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Erik

 

This wasn't like Alessa to come out of nowhere and say thank you to me. All I did was get her that book but I didn't think she would run up to me and say thank you and run back to her seat. Something must be going on with her or something. Maybe she's sick I don't know but this was really awkward for a change. I know I gave her notes in her locker but that's just me but this wasn't her. I know it. I have to find out what's going on with her now! This was really awkward for the beginning of the day. Is this really Alessa? Or not?

 

 

I'm going to do Erik's side of the story and Alessa's side of the story now and sorry I didn't post anything yesterday.

Cool I'd like to know more bout Erik :D

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Lol. that's why I'm going to do it so you guys know why he's doing this a little

u should rite more with eric as the main charecter

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Erik

 

I walked to my desk and picked up a book. I looked up to see Alessa was writing something on a piece of paper but I couldn't see what she was writing at all. I kept reading my book till the bell rang for class to start. I waited and waited for the next the bell to ring for lunch and then the next for school to get out because this day was just to weird for me and I just wanted to end it. Why did I get her that book!? I do I like her? I never really met her and I have a crush on her? The only reason I know her name and her face is because her dad and my dad were friends one time and I met her when we five years old. I'm surprised she doesn't really remember me but I remember her.

I got lost in my thought and I didn't the bell rang for us to leave class till Alessa came to my desk and told me. I must have looked like I had something on my mind because She asked me on the way to lunch. I didn't want her to know what I was thinking about so I said."I was thinking about what might happen in my book." I knew she probably wouldn't believe me so I just left after that and made sure she didn't follow me.I sat down at my table I sit at everyday and just sat there looking at the clock. I waited for it to ring. It needs to ring again so the next bell wont seem so far away from ringing again Right after I said that the bell rang. I jumped out of my seat and ran back to the class room before Aless would come and ask me why I ran off. Again. I went back to my seat and prayed that Alessa wouldn't come to my desk like last4 time and start asking me stuff. The only reason why I do that is because I don't want her to know that I like her alot so yeah that's why I run or don't say much around her. It didn't seem long till the next bell rang for us to leave. When it did I jumped out of my seat grabbed my homework and ran to my locker to get my books and coat and ran out of the doors to get home.

lol i knew it, i knew he had a crush/in-love-with/on her lol wow

I KNEW IT!!! HE HAS A CRUSH ON HER 8DDDDDDDD

To be 11 and in 4th grade, she must have either failed two grades or started late.

Not much of a description for any of the characters or their surroundings

Alot of this story is dialog.

Really short chapters.

Do I need to go on?

Well I like it. It's a great story, and idc about spelling errors or any of that. It's cool, just the way it is.

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Thanks Riku'sAngel ^_^.

-Ventus- the only reason why there's not alot of that stuff in the story is because I only have a amount of time to write things becuase I'm reallyy busy and I only wrote this for fun is all.

You're not suppost to write a story in a few minutes. Take longer time. A few days if you must.

If you can't do it, then don't write at all.

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