I had this idea all of a sudden yesterday when I was at the dentist (yes I was very bored) and started writing. Here's the intro, I will post just a link since I don't know if everyone will like. Sorry if it is a bit too dark.

 

http://gizelita15.deviantart.com/

 

Please say what you think about it and if I should continue or give up.

This seems very interesting.

I really like dark stories and I can't wait to see where this goes. WRITE MOAR.

If Venny approves here we go.

http://gizelita15.deviantart.com/art/Dark-Paths-of-Life-Chap-1-173233678

I tryed to tell a bit about the past in the first chapter, what means this one isn't very dark and heavy, I'm trying to leave the conclusion of the intro to the next one.

I know no one is reading this but, whatever.

http://gizelita15.deviantart.com/#/d2vuu2o

I'll continue puting the link to my DA account unless someone complains.

I am and it's great

 

continua, est

It is a dark story. I liked reading it and I really think you should write more.

I'm sorry for the delay on this chapter, it's short because I'm using it as an introduction to a major event that will come later. And probably not in the next chapter, so sorry if someone really wants to know about it.

Dark Paths of Life - Chap. 3

Dark Paths of Life - Chap. 4

 

I'll try to put up the next chapter by this weeks, again I'm sorry that this took so long. Thanks for everyone who is reading, hope you enjoy the story.