Chatper 1 The talk With Riku

 

''Listen i don't know who you are,but you are in the way of me getting my friend's memory back''.said Riku as he bought out Soul Eater.Kotu was the person who was in his way.''Riku just hear me out i can help you get Sora's memory back''!yelled Kotu.Riku putted away his Soul Eater and said''Wait your trying to find Sora's memory too''?said Riku.Kotu got up and putted away his sword.''Yeah im trying to repay him for getting my world back'',said Kotu.Riku opened a portol to Twilight Town.''Come on i can take you to Sora''.said Riku.Kotu and Riku went into the portol.DiZ was working on his computer.''Riku it seems you founded Kotu''.said DiZ.''Wait you been looking for me''.said Kotu.After Kotu saw DiZ he passed out on the ground.Riku sae Kotu fall to the ground.''Hey do you think he's remebering DiZ''.said Riku.''I don't know but put him somewhere he won't stop us''.said DiZ.

Kotu's mind was going back in time and was getting his memory back.

I dont get the plot and besides, please use better grammar

That spacebar located at the bottom of your keyboard, use it please.

 

Plus, you just start the story off, no introduction to the setting or the characters. I have no idea who Kotu is.

Chapter 2 The Past Of Kuto

 

Kotu mind was going back in time.Okay Kotu lost his memory when his world was destory long ago.After that his world was reborn thanks to Sora.When he came back all he remeber was trying to get sora's memory back.While he was finding it he encouter Riku and DiZ.After he saw DiZ he passed out.Now he is getting his memory back before his world was destory.

 

''Kotu''.said voice.Kotu looked behind and it was Yamoto.Yamoto is his best friend since they were little and they have a strong bond.''Oh hi Yamoto''.said Kotu''So are you ready for school''?said Yamoto.''yeah''said Kotu.While they were walking they saw a man coming to them.''freeze give your money''.said the man.Kotu was just standing there looking at him,but Yamoto ran toward's him ready to fight.

it was ok and also next time you write a story, I recommend you explain the plot more before you post chapters and also give a more detailed summary of the characters

You still haven't told us where the story takes place or anything -_-

like SoraKing said, you should tell us where the plot is taken place and all that