Evil-Ven-the darkness king 5 Posted September 13, 2010 CONSUMED Created by: Absolhunter251/Evil-Ven Disclaimer: I do not own the KH world or its characters. They belong to their original creators and so on. But I Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Space Cowboy 1,392 Posted September 14, 2010 This is good, I can see you took time with writing this. The only thing is..you don't need to make separate threads for each of your chapters. Just put all of your chapters on your original thread. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Evil-Ven-the darkness king 5 Posted September 14, 2010 This is good, I can see you took time with writing this. The only thing is..you don't need to make separate threads for each of your chapters. Just put all of your chapters on your original thread. oh really? wow, okay^^ i hope all my friends can see that i updated the story. if you like this story, i'm very greatful.^^ if you like the story, maybe you can give me iedas for the next chapter if you want to. I have a roleplay going around for people to join, but its up to you.^^ thanks for reviewing my story. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zexion's_Lover_46 76 Posted September 17, 2010 You wrote it very well. I can't wait to read chapter 3. Keep up the good work Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Evil-Ven-the darkness king 5 Posted September 18, 2010 You wrote it very well. I can't wait to read chapter 3. Keep up the good work good!!x3 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
heartless101 83 Posted September 19, 2010 Nice I like it The only thing is that you should put all your chapters into one thread so that it won't take so long to look for it Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
WolfTheDemon 414 Posted December 7, 2010 I think it's a very awesome story! Good job!^_^ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
