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i think vanitas is back within ventus after there battle in birth by sleep

that's good info you've put ill have to look in to that more

yeah but as i've put down i can only see two hints

really hope KH 1.5 comes out in Europe and NA

what was your doubt on this

okay so this is just a theory I've been thinking about for quite sometime now so I thought I let you know why I think Terra is the guardian and then you people can add on to it. my first thought on this was at the end of birth by sleep when Terranort tried to remove Terra from his heart with his keyblade but instead of that happening the guardian appeared instead. Now if Terra's heart had been removed we would have seen it like we did when Xehanort plunged the keyblade into himself and when xehanort plunged his keyblade into Braig at the beginning of Dream Drop Distance. instead of this the guardian created a portal of darkness that send the amnesia Xehanort into darkness. My second thought was after the battle with Ansem the seeker of darkness the guardian reaches out to Riku as if it was Terra reaching out to him and the keyblade that Terra gave him before Riku said "strength, to protect what matters most" which is what Terra said in birth by sleep. I am still looking through the other games to see if I can find any more on this and if any of you notice anything about this and see anything that i haven't seen do let me know

okay. still this is awesome and i cant wait for the next chapter

this episode is amazing i cant wait to see who will win against ventus and Ethan. p.s just a question about what trish said about Ethan's eyes being yellow does this mean he is a xehanort clone or not.

i wonder if roxas will show up to try and persuade xion to turn to the light. keep up the good work Dark sora and i cant wait for the next chapter

I cant wait to find out who the unknown guy is

Sorry to hear about your uncle

Chapter 4 the Joining to the organization "Good tiding friend today is a very momentus occasion. i am pleased to announce that thank to Axel we now have ourselves a new member" Xemnas say as each member looks towards Naxeth as he walks into the room with Axel wearing the organization cloak that the others are wearing. " let us all welcome him as the fifthteenth member of organization XV and i hope you will help him fit in say Xemnas. Naxeth look at the members all staring at him when he stops at the seat between Roxas and a blond women to see a hooded member "hey Axel who the hooded one" asked Naxeth to which Axel replies "oh her, oh thats Xion our fourteenth member". Naxeth turn to walk off as he does this a hand places itself upon his shouder " so your the new guy guess that means there's less work for me. says the mullet haired guy who smiles at Naxeth as his hand is pulled backwards by another member with a eyepatch on his right eye and a jagged scar on his left cheek. "annoying the new kid Demyx" Asked the nobody who twist Demyx arm behind his back " AH no no Xigbar i was just being friendly to him you know me" say Demyx who finally gets his arm back form Xigbar. " hm as if you are just a little chicken now run along little chick" says Xigbar as Demyx vanishes through a portal of darkness. Naxeth turns and look at Xigbar who smiles and retreats through a portal. Axel then looks at Naxeth and smiles as Naxeth looks at Xion as she walks through a portal of darkness with Roxas." so where are they going" ask Naxeth as Axel opens a portal "ll show you" replies Axel as both he and Naxeth both walk through the portal. as the portal closes Marluxia steps out of the shadows and talks to the blond haired girl "so Larxene what do you think of the newby" ask Marluxia to which Larxene smiles and electric sparks come out of her fingers tips " i find him fasinating and he could be useful to our plan". "I couldnt agree more my dear" says Marluxia as both he and Larxene vanish through two portals.

this just keeps getting better and better as i read it and cant wait for the next chapter. keep up the good work Dark Sora.

Chapter 3: the tour... kinda Naxeth walked through the castle on his way to The Round Room with Axel to be introduced to the leader of the organization. "So exactly how many other members are there besides you, me, Saix, Roxas and the leader asked Naxeth as they passed a room filled with Cards. " well before you got here there was fourteen members soon some of them will be going to another castle that we have called Castle Oblivion. The members that you don't know about ill introduce you later but first I got to take you to see Xemnas the leader of organization XIV well XV if you join us" replied Axel. Before Naxeth could speak two shadowy figure appeared behind him " so who is this nobody that smells of light and darkness" asked one of the figures to which Naxeth turned to see a blue haired member and a tall blonde hair member. "Hello Zexion and how are we this fine evening" said Axel to which the blond hair member looked at Naxeth and began to smile in a sinister way " And I see your eyeing up the new member huh Vexen" said Axel in a joky manner. "how dare you be rude to me as you are aware that in this organization you are number VIII I am number IV and i will not have you talked to me in such a manner Axel. besides i am admiring this nobodies power" said Vexen who went from angry to calm. "what do you mean" asked Naxeth who was more confused then interested "you my dear are a nobody who has both light and darkness inside you when we get time I will need to run some 'test' that you can help me with said Vexen who along with Zexion vanished in a portal of darkness. " well looks like you made a friend and at a good time" said Axel kindly "but we better get going don't want you to be late to see Xemnas". Axel and Naxeth both continued to see Xemnas but unknown to them a Flamed haired girl in a green dress watched them as they walked off to which she then pulled out and answered the phone "he is here with them".

Chapter 1 part 1 "Ethan wake up you'll be late meeting your dad". the voice leads us to Ethan's room where Ethan is still sleeping in his room sort of like Roxas from kingdom hearts 2 except there was no voice that led us to Roxas but lets not go there now. Ethan awakes and sits up on his bed as he does this he sees a tall strange creature wearing a black robe. "who are you and how did you get in my room" said Ethan confused. The strange creature said nothing but smile and started laughing as if Ethan had said something funny. "what's so funny" Shouted Ethan but all the creature did was point at him. "Shinigami Eyes" said the creature with an evil grin which freaked Ethan out a bit "Shini-gami eyes" said Ethan who then looked outside his window to see his sister Alison walking with her boyfriend Luke. "him again why does she even like him" thought Ethan who then turned to see the strange creature had disappeared. Ethan left the house and went to go meet his dad.

it had been 7 years since the defeat of Master Xehanort and the end of the Heartless threat and everything was back to how it should be. we find our hero Master Sora all grown up and teaching others how to wield a keyblade and married to Kairi who is teaching others how to use magic with two kids, a 8 year old boy called Ethan and a 6 year old daughter called Allison. Riku has left the islands in search of a way to control the darkness and bring back king mickey. 10 years later ....

really good script. cant wait for the next bit

i changed the writing form from an advice i got

Chapter 2: Saïx meets the newby Naxeth and Axel exited the portal the first thing that was seen was a castle with a giant heart shaped moon which made Naxeth speechless. “That is a castle and its floating” asked Naxeth surprised as Axel walked beside him. “Yep what do you think of it” replied Axel but he got no reply from Naxeth as he was gobsmacked to see the castle floating. Axel then began to go forward towards the edge of the path which made Naxeth nervous “Don’t you’ll fall” said Naxeth trying to stop him from taking another step to the edge. Just then a blue see-through path appeared from the castle and reached the edge to which axel walked on it. “You coming or what” asked Axel who continued to walk towards the castle. “Sure” said Naxeth who then ran to catch up with Axel As they entered the castle there were approached by a blue haired man with a X on his forehead “hello Saïx said Axel. Saïx looked at axel then turned to Naxeth “and who is this” asked Saïx “ah now he’s Naxeth I found him when i was exploring Twilight Town with Roxas” replied Axel. “And where is Roxas if he was with you before you met Naxeth” asked Saïx who stared at him which made Axel nervous “uh I’m gonna take Naxeth to see Xemnas see ya” said Axel as he dragged Naxeth away leaving Saïx on his own. “so Saïx that was the new member” said a pink haired man. “Yes Marluxia it is and you and larxene will have the right mind you’d leave him alone if you know what’s good for you” said Saïx turning to face Marluxia and teleports away. “Oh we will don’t worry” said Marluxia with an evil grin before walking off.

if anyone has any advise for me on how to make my story better i would appreciate it

thanks for the advise i'll be sure to remember your advise and use it in the future

chapter 1: birth of a Nobody A nobody awakes in twilight town at the sandlot he knows nothing about himself or where he came from he began to explore the city. He then finds himself at the tram staion where he sees someone standing on top of the clock tower he thought he was going to jump. Nobody: oh my god what do i do if i shout up to him he might freak out and lose his footing. ???: well looky what we got here the nobody turned around to see the a red spiked hair man with green eyes and black tears under his eyes and wearing a black cloak. Nobody: who r u ???: the names Axel got it memorized Nobody: sure Axel: and who r u as the nobody began to answer he then placed his hands on his head and began to remember things. in the vision he saw himself on a beach with a couple of friends one percificly was a red haired girl with blue eye that sat on the beach and began to talk but the only word heard was Ethan after that the vision fades. Ethan: Ethan , my name is Ethan Axel: really. now let me check something Axel looked around Ethan and then looked into his eyes then stood up with a smile. Axel: yep just as i expected your nobody Ethan: that's not very nice just then Ethan's name appeared floating around him and then spun around him till axel freezed the word the name was different for it had been changed Ethan: my name is... Axel: yep Naxeth. the newest member in the organization as Naxeth looked up his eyes changed from blue to red then back to blue again Axel put out his hand Axel: lets go Naxeth: okay Axel: that quick no questions at all Naxeth: nope Axel looked at him a bit then smiled Axel: i think you and i are going to get along just fine naxeth Naxeth: i hope so axel Naxeth grabbed Axel's hand but then looked up at the clock tower to see the boy who was up there was gone. they then disappeared through a portal

i know i had it that naxeth joined while xion was still in the organization and everyone thought she was a nobody. in this story there are 14 members

hey every one ive just started a story known as naxeth the 15th member. i hope u like it

prologue: a distant memory Naxeth opened his eyes as Axel moved closer to finish him off. it seemed long ago that he, Xanthe, Xianda, Axel, Roxas and Xion were friends so long since they eat see-salt ice cream together on top of the clock tower and it seemed so long since Naxeth began to plot against his own fellow members but as Axel finally reached him and was ready to end their friendship Naxeth new there was no way out of it...