Naught
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Welcome to KH13 Kingdom Crown. Hope you have fun! -
I should really be doing my assignments instead of staying on KH13, seeing as all three of them are due on Wednesday and I have only started one of them...
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"Hello Eagle. My name is Zane," he replied. He was actually quite surprised about how friendly this this Eagle person was. But then he remembered about how all the other people had been friendly to, but then they just used him. He had to be cautious around this girl, for she might do the same. "I was just looking around the school, trying to build a map of this place in my mind. It really is quite expansive." Zane waited for a reply.
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Zane finally found his room and entered it. He found that at the moment there didn't appear to be anyone sharing his room. Maybe the principal thought it was a good idea to let Zane settle in first. As Zane began to unpack his belongings, he glanced out of the window to the spot where he saw the people playing Mystical Football, to find that they had started to disperse and that the game appeared to be over. After he had finished unpacking, Zane decided he'd go for a walk around the school, to create a mental map of the place and who knows, maybe even meet someone half decent.
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Welcome to KH13! I hope you enjoy yourself.
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Well done, it keeps getting better and better BUT the grammar isn't quite right in the quotation marks. If a character isn't yelling or asking a question, there should be a period or a comma just before you close the quote. But still, your writing is progressing wonderfully. Keep it up!
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"Why settle for a quartet of queers, when there's a possiblity of a penta-poofta-piano-posse" - Tim Minchin
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Zane approached the entrance to the school and marveled at the grandeur of the school. "Wow, I never expected the school to be this large." He said. As he walked through the entrance, he heard a voice, "You do know that you are late, Zane?" It was the principal. "I allowed you to came here because of what you told me about your past, but if you are to stay here at Half-Moon, you need to be organised and try to get along with the other students. Here is your room key, I suggest that you put your belongs in your room and then go outside to watch a game of Mystical Football. It really is quite exhilarating!" And with that the principal handed Zane his room key and walked off. Zane then proceeded to try and find his room, hoping that he wouldn't get lost.
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I don't particularly like playing mediator, but I shall do what is required of me.
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Heh. I saw this awhile ago. It's not as funny as when I first saw it.
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Welcome to KH13, Varaz. I'm sure you'll get along with everyone here. After all, we all love Kingdom Hearts!
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The music is a nice touch, it creates atmosphere. I hope you don't use the same song in ever chapter though. http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/happy.png
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Zane walked calmly through the forest as he approached Half-Moon Academy. He knew he was late but he didn't really care. Suddenly he heard what sounded like fighting in the distance. He started to pick up speed and rushed to the direction it was coming from. As he approached the source of the noise, he blended into the shadows to avoid being seen. Zane finally made it to the edge of the forest only to find that it was not a fight, but a rather violent sport called Mystical Football if the chants of the students were anything to go by. Disgusted that so many people had an interest in a sport as violent as that, he turned his back on it and started to proceed around to the main entrance of the school.
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Because I shall be camping on the beach for the next few days... Happy Australia Day to all Australians! Have a good one, mates!
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Haha yes. If only had had some
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