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Chapter 2 John made some hot chocolate for Robbie. He sat down with him. “Tell me,” John said. “What did you see?” “I saw what I could remember.” Robbie said. “I saw myself being captured by the hoodie.” “What else?” “He held a knife against my neck.” “Anything else?” “Your friend, Blake.” Robbie said. “He was killed that night and we saw the whole thing.” “You were scared.” John said. “You covered your face.” “Oh,” Robbie said. “He also said to keep me safe.” “That he did.” John said. “Is he after me?” “Not just you...” John replied. “Every single policemen.” “Why?” “I...” John said. “I don’t know...” They were quiet. “We both had a dream about what happened that night.” “Really?” Robbie wondered. “Was it the same?” “Not too much...” “What was it?” “Your mother.” “How mom died?” “Right.” “I think I heard an explosion right before he took me.” “That explosion,” John said. “Was telling us that she was killed.” “What?” “You mother,” John continued. “She wanted to help. I said no. But she gave me those eyes that I couldn’t say no to. I shouldn’t have let her.” John began tearing up. “It was my fault.” “No, dad...” Robbie said. “It wasn’t!! It was the hoodie’s fault.” “I let her stay!!” “She wanted to help...” “I told her it was dangerous!!!” John kept saying. “ She didn’t listen!!! It’s my fault... my fault...” “You can’t be blaming yourself for this!!!” “SHE DIED BECAUSE OF ME!!!” “She died while she was trying to help you!!” John calmed down. They were quiet again. “He’s back, isn’t he?” Robbie said. “Yeah...” his father replied quietly. John walked his son back to his room. “I’m taking you work tomorrow.” “Why?” he said. “I have a test tomorrow.” “After your test.” his dad replied. “I want you to know what we do. Call me when you are done.” “What if they don’t let you?” “Son,” John said. “I’m a cop.” Robbie laughed. “Night.” “Night.” They both went back to bed. It started to rain. On the other side of town, a man wearing a red rain coat walked inside a strange looking building. “It’s pouring out there!” he said. He hung up his rain coat. He bowed down to the boy. He motioned him to get up. “I hear from Jameson the plan had worked.” “Yes,” “Excellent.” “I had short circuited the wire that was coming from the scanner and it didn’t show the results.” “Good...” “What do we do now?” “I fear that he will be bringing his son to his work soon.” “Ok?” “John will obviously be showing him how to track down criminals.” “What do you want me to do?” “Simple.” the boy said. “Hack into the chief’s account and delete the program.” The man nodded. “Oh, wait...” the boy stopped him before he could leave. He turned around. “You’re doing quite well, Travis...” “Thank you, sir.” He walked out. “What is our next order?” “Patience, Tyrone.” the hoodie said. “For now, we wait.” The next day, John dropped his son off at school. “See you soon!” John told him. Robbie went into the school. There waiting for him, were Ryan and Andrew. “What’s up guys?” “You were acting odd yesterday.” Andrew said. “Yeah?” “We were wondering,” Ryan said. “If you were OK.” “Of course I am okay!” Robbie said. “Why wouldn’t I be?” “You seemed out of it.” “I just had something on my mind.” “What was it?” Robbie slammed his locker shut. “It’s nothing that should be bothering you.” “We’re friends here...” Andrew said. “You can trust us.” “I got to go...” Robbie walked away. He walked into his english class. “We need to figure out what is wrong with him.” “Do you think the guidance counselor would tell us?” “No...” Andrew said. “She has to keep it private. She won’t tell a soul.” They both walked into the English class room. “Thank you, boys...” a strange voice said. He picked up a walkie talkie. “There is someone else that knows about you.” “Kill the person...” They hung up and Tyrone walked into the counselor’s office. She looked up. Tyrone shut the door. “Can I help you?” was the last thing she said before screaming. Tyrone climbed out of the window and ran off before anyone can see her. The bell rang. Everyone walked out of the classrooms to see a lot of people by the office. Robbie and the two boys walked over to see what all the commotion was about. “Jessica,” Robbie whispered. “What happened?” “The Guidance counselor,” she said. “She was killed.” All of the boys’ mouths dropped opened. There was a lot of murmur. “What the hell?” Andrew said. Robbie backed away. He walked outside. The cops finally appeared. “Thank god!!” his father said, walking up to him. “You’re okay...” “She was killed...” “Who??” “Ms. Worthington.” “Your guidance counselor?” “Yes...” John ran inside. He walked into the room. Travis followed. “What happened here?” “A murder.” “Inside a school?” “Seems so...” John replied. He went over and told everyone to back away. He blocked off the area with yellow tape. He went back to Travis. “Broken glass...” Travis said. “The window’s broken.” said John, walking over to the window. “Suspect must’ve broken in, killed her and ran away before he was noticed. John walked away. Travis looked outside and saw Tyrone. Tyrone gave him a thumbs up. Travis nodded back. He walked away from the window. “The victim was stabbed multiple times by a knife.” John studied. “Multiple?” Travis asked. “Multiple.” John confirmed. They kept walking around. “I’m going to go walk around and ask questions.” “I’ll stay here.” Travis said. John walked out. Travis chuckled to himself quietly. “Fool...” John asked some people some questions. He asked how many kids would visit her, if she got any threats, and other things. After he was done, he talked to the principal. “I am going to need to take my son out.” he said. “Of course...” the principal said. “Thank you.” John walked away. He walked back outside. He saw him talking to Ryan. “I told you!!” Robbie said. “I can’t tell you.” “Why not?” “It’s a personal matter!” Robbie said. “This can’t worry you.” “You seem so depressed.” “Well,” Robbie said. “I have too much on my mind.” “Tell me!!” “Robbie...” his father finally spoke up. The both looked up. “I have to go...” Robbie got up and walked towards his father. He looked back at Ryan. “I’m sorry, Ryan.” Robbie said. “I just can’t tell anyone else.” The walked away. They got into the cop car and drove off. Ryan got up. Andreew walked up. “Did he say?” “Nothing...” Ryan said. “He said he couldn’t tell anyone else.” “What does that mean?” “I don’t know...”

Chapter 2 coming soon.

I know there is a Shakespeare to English site out there, but I am not a huge fan of Shakespeare. So no, I haven't read Hamlet. But I did read Macbeth. Wasn't too fond of it. Anyway, since you guys are giving me advice, I was thinking about rewriting the prologue. You were right. Her death was cliche. So I'm may rewrite that part. I will also edit the chapters a little more as I go on.

That is something I have to work on.

You don't have to give a rating. I just like some constructive criticism. The stuff you are giving me is pretty good. I will say though, from time to time, you will see that the father will become obsessed with finding the boy. Thank you for the advice.

It's my first time really writing a Mystery/Horror story. I thought I would give it a shot. I know the mother's death wasn't as good, but like I said, it's my first time writing in this kind of genre. But, I'm glad you liked it. Here is Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Present “Robbie...” his dad said. “Robbie... it’s time to get ready for school.” “Five more minutes...” Robbie replied. “You kids always say that.” John said. “Get up now. You need to get dressed, eat, and brush your teeth.” Robbie groaned. “I can’t be late for work!!” his dad said. He pulled the covers off of Robbie. “FINE.” he said. He got out of bed and put clothes on. He went downstairs to eat and brush his teeth. His father followed. “You ready?” “Yeah...” They went into the car. John drove his son to school. They arrived in a few minutes. “Have fun today!” “Since when has school been considered fun?” His father laughed. “Just have a good day.” “See you later, dad.” John drove off. A kid ran across the street. John stopped just in time. “Watch where you’re going!!” John shouted at him. “Sorry, sir!!” he apologized and ran off. John continued driving. He arrived at work. “There you are, John!” his boss, Chris said. “I need you to work with Travis today.” “But, I’m working on another case.” “We need to put that one off for a while.” “Why?” “There has been some weird things going on here.” “Like what?” “Weird sightings, threats, all that stuff.” “OK,” John said. He went over to Travis. “What do we have?” “Here are the suspects.” Travis handed them over to John. He looked through them. They all seemed interesting. He finally got to one that seemed suspicious. “Travis,” he said. He looked over. “Everything on this suspect says unknown.” “Oh, that guy,” he said. “Yeah, he’s very mysterious. He just appeared here not too long ago.” “What do you mean by not too long ago?” John asked. “Well,” Travis continued. “We have been getting reports that some people have been seeing this kid for some reason. It’s like he’s looking for something... or someone.” “Huh?” “I’m sure you have heard about the tragedy that happened in Central Neighborhood, am I correct?” “Yeah...” “Well,” Travis kept going. “It’s said that he began this havoc.” Travis went back to doing his job. John stared at the paper for a few minutes. He then folded the paper and put it in his pocket. He went back to his desk and took out the string they found four years ago. “I hope this works...” John said to himself. He put it under the scanner and waited for the results. A few minutes later results popped up. It said that one item has been found. “Yes!!” he said quietly. He clicked on it. On the screen, appeared a boy in a plain black hoodie. He couldn’t see the face. He took the paper out of his pocket and read the years. “This paper was printed last month.” he said, looking at the folded paper. He looked back. “But, this was posted... YESTERDAY?!?!?” All of a sudden, the computer began to short circuit and explode.The alarms sounded. John backed away. Chris ran over. “What the hell happened??” he asked. “I--I don’t know!!!” John said. “I was reading something, then it just short circuited. They were both coughing. A man was watching. He walked outside. “It worked...” “He doesn’t suspect anything?” “No,” he said. “The boy is still safe.” “Good work,” the voice said. “The boy will be proud.” He walked back inside the station. Back at Robbie’s school, Robbie was having a hard time focusing. “Robbie!!” his english teacher said. “Huh?” “What was I just talking about?” “The Pythagorean Theorem?” The whole class laughed. “Very funny Mr. Dawnson,” the teacher said. “You better pay attention if you want to pass this test tomorrow.” Robbie sighed. The teacher went back to teaching. Twenty minutes later, the bell rang. “Study for the test tomorrow!!” she said. She looked at Robbie. “Especially you, Mr Dawnson.” Robbie walked out of the class room and went to his locker. He put his english book away. His friend walked up to him. “Still thinking about your mother?” he said. Robbie looked up. “Oh, hey Andrew.” he said. “Yeah...” “Well, stop!” he said. “It’s been four years ago.” “You don’t know what else happened that day.” “What did?” “I don’t want to talk about it...” Robbie walked away. “Hey Robbie!” another friend said. Robbie just ignored him. Ryan walked up to Andrew. “What’s with Rob?” “I don’t know...” They both watched him as he left. Both Robbie and his father had a pretty rough day. John was still confused on how the computer just blew up. Robbie was still remembering what happened exactly four years ago. Finally, it was the end of the day for the both of them. Robbie took the school bus home and waited for his dad. He grabbed something to eat and began studying. Soon, his father arrived. “Robbie,” he said. “I’m home!!” “I’m in here!” he said from the kitchen. He walked into the kitchen. “What are doing buddy?” “Studying.” “Test tomorrow?” “Yeah.” “Well,” his father said. “Good for you!!” Things were quiet. “So,” John finally said. “How was school today?” “It was... fine...” John looked at his face. “Rob,” he said. “Is there something wrong?” “I’m fine...” Robbie said, not looking. “Robbie,” his father would leave him alone. “You need to tell me if something is bothering you.” Robbie slammed on the table. “I said I’M FINE!!!” He got up and went to his room. John just stared. They ate dinner without talking to each other. Soon, Robbie went to bed. John was tired as well, so he headed to his room. Robbie was having difficulty sleeping. “Daddy!!!” his nightmare echoed. “Help!!!” Robbie was tossing and turning. The nightmare took him back to the night everything changed. He saw the hooded boy again. He was being held against the boy’s chest and remembering this dad pointing the gun. He even remembered Blake being killed. He heard his last words again. “Keep him safe...” Robbie immediately woke up and starting breathing hard. His father ran in. “Robbie!” he said. “What’s wrong?” “I had the nightmare..."

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I am doing a NON KH story. Giving another story a shot. It's called "Hoodie". It is a Mystery/Horror story. Check it out!!

I am going to try one more time. I hope a lot of people like this. This is not a KH fanfic. It's a Mystery/Horror story (Yes, in time for Halloween). Hoodie Prologue This is a tale about someone always wearing a hoodie. No one knows for sure who this hoodie wearing boy is. He appeared one day and everything changed. My name is John Dawnson. I have lived in this neighborhood for over ten years now and this neighborhood was fine until the boy appeared. I have one son. Their mother was mysteriously killed in an unknown accident. We were devastated. My son was only nine when his mother was killed. Now he is in the eighth grade and is thirteen years old. I became a cop so I can investigate this “hooded stranger”. But the boss said I couldn’t, so I joined an private investigation team. I need to keep our neighborhood safe, for me, my neighbors, and more importantly, my son... Let me take you back four years ago... 4 Years Ago I had just became a cop. It was a beautiful day in Central Neighborhood. It began as a normal start. My son and I were playing catch in the yard. His mother was gardening. It was a hot day. We played catch for about an hour and went inside to stay cool. Later was dinner. Soon, it was time Robbie to go to bed. My wife and I stayed up and discussed about our jobs. She was a teacher at Robbie’s school. Soon, we went up to bed. That night was when things got weird. I didn’t hear screams from the neighborhood, but Robbie did. I told him that he was probably hearing things. Nothing bad ever happened in this neighborhood. The next morning came and Robbie was preparing for school and my wife and I were getting ready for work. Once my wife stepped out of the front door, there were cop cars and an ambulance next door. “John!!” she said. “You need to come see this.” I ran right up to her. I couldn’t believe my eyes. “John,” a co-worker said, coming up. “Thank goodness, you all are all right!” “Blake,” I said. “Wh-what happened here?” “The Harvingtons have been murdered.” “What?” we all said. “Only James survived.” Robbie ran up to his friend, James. James!!” Robbie said. “Are you OK?” “I’m fine...” he said crying. “I just don’t know who could’ve done this. My parents, my sister... they’re all... dead...” I walked over with Blake to the crime scene. “What do we have?” I asked him. “All we found was this.” Blake held up a several pieces of string from the murderer’s clothes. “All we need to do is run this through the scanner and we will learn who the suspect is.” I told to Blake. We went to the station. We immediately turned on the computer and scanner and put the string under it. It took a while, but it finally appeared. “Not found?!?!” I said. “What the hell? “I’ll try again.” Blake said. The results came and it still said not found. “Ugh,” I grunted. “Why won’t this work???” “This is strange...” Blake said. “But I feel that this murderer isn’t done.” “Me too...” “Let’s get back to work.” Blake said. We had a busy day. Calls were coming in about robberies, shootings and many things. That day, I felt there was a new evil coming, but why now. It was open house night at Robbie’s school. He came home and Theresa had to go back. I stayed home with Robbie and had pizza for dinner. “Dad?” he said. “Hmm?” “What if he comes back?” “Who?” “The guy who killed James’ family.” he continued. “What if the murderer does come back? Where will James stay?” I sighed. I didn’t want him to be nervous. “I don’t know what’s going to happen, buddy,” I told him. “But, I’m sure we’ll be fine.” Suddenly, I got a phone call from my boss, Louie. “Louie?” I answered. “John!!” he said. He sounded like he was scared. “What’s wrong??” “We just got a notice saying that there is trouble at the school!!” “WHAT?? “You need to go to the school and help Blake evacuate the school building immediately!!” I hung up. I put on my coat and headed out the door. “Dad?” Robbie said. “What’s going on?” I knelt down. “Son,” I told him. “I need you to stay here. There is trouble at the school and I need to make sure that your mom will be safe.” “I want to come with you!!” “It’s too dangerous...” “Can I at least stay in the car?” “Alright,” I told him. “But I am parking far away so you won’t get hurt.” We hopped into the car and drove off. I found a parking lot as far away as I could from the school. “Wait right in this car...” I told him. “DO NOT, I repeat, DO NOT LEAVE THIS CAR!! Understand??” He nodded. I slammed the car door and ran into the building. I saw that Blake has already began evacuating. “Where is Theresa?” “Still in the building.” he told me. I ran inside. There were a group of teachers waiting to be evacuated. Theresa was right there. “JOHN!!” she said. We hugged. “Where is Robbie?” “He’s safe in the car.” I replied. “We need to go now!!” I looked over at the rest. “The rest of you,” I ordered. “Remain calm and follow me!!” There was a loud explosion. I looked back. One room had exploded. “Hurry!!” I demanded. All the teachers ran out. “Let me help...” Theresa begged. “No,” I said strictly. “You need to leave this building now!!” “Please!!” “NO THERESA!!!” She looked at me with the eyes I couldn’t say no to. “Be careful...” I told her. We kissed. I ran out. I looked back and told her I would come back for her.” “John,” Blake said. “Where’s Theresa?” “Inside,” I replied. “She’s making sure everyone stays calm.” “NO!!” Blake said. “There will be another explosion any minute!!” I looked back. I tried to run inside, but Blake stopped me. “NO!!” Blake said. “If you go in, you’ll die!!!” “I can’t let Theresa die!!!” “You have no choice!!” There was another explosion. The whole school was on fire. “NOOO!!!” I yelled. I fell to the floor. I buried my face in my hands and began crying. “No... no...” “John...” Blake said. “I’m sorry...” Everyone was in shock. Everybody wondered who could do such a thing. I went back to the car. Robbie wasn’t there. “Robbie?” I said. I looked around. “DADDY!!!” I heard Robbie’s voice. “ROBBIE!!!” I shouted back. “Where are you?” “DADDY!!!” his voice cried out again. I turned around and saw the hooded figure within a distance. The hooded figure had his arm wrapped around Robbie’s neck. He held a knife to Robbie’s throat. I took out my gun and held up, aligned with his face. “You shoot...” the hooded figure said, in a raspy voice. “You’ll never see your son again.” “Daddy...” he said crying. “What do you want?” “I want freedom...” “Freedom?” I asked. “What?” “You know what I mean...” “No...” I said. “I don’t what I did to you!!” There was a gunshot. It shot the hooded figure right in the shoulder. He screamed in pain. He let go of Robbie and he crawled. He turned around and saw Blake. “Leave them alone....” “Or what?” he said. “Or be killed...” He began laughing. “You actually think you can kill me?” “I don’t think,” he said. “I know...” I held Robbie close once he arrived. “Blake,” I said. “Don’t do it!!” “You don’t want them,” he said. “It’s me you want.” “I want both of you...” he said. Blake kept shooting at him, but he kept on walking towards Blake. Unfortunately for him, he was all out of bullets. “Shit!!” he said. He dropped his gun. The hooded man walked up to him. “Looks like I win this round...” he said. He took out his knife and pointed it at Blake. Robbie put his head in my arm. The last thing I heard Blake said was to take care of Robbie and stay safe. Right after, he was stabbed. The hooded figure turned around. “You will be next...” He then walked away. I ran right over to Blake. He still had some life in him. “Blake...” “John...” he said. “Take Robbie and move away from here. Move as far away as you can.” “But...” “It’ll be much safer...” he said. “Trust me...” Then, he was gone. That next week we had a funeral for both Blake and Theresa. It was a very emotional week for the both of us. There were hundreds of people there, mourning for the both of them. I was remembering what Blake had told me. I decided that we should move. I talked to Louie about it and he thought it was the best idea as well. He recommended that we should move to a nice town called Greenfair. He also told me to talk to a friend of his who is the head of the police department there to get a job. So, about a month later, there was no sign of the hooded boy and no murders. We ended up moving to Greenfair. We now have a nice home in a nice neighborhood. All the neighbors were friendly and had heard about what had happened. They gave us their condolences. But, I fear that soon the hoodie will come back...

Best line in trailer 2: "Why do I fix everything I tough??" LOL!! I love that line!!

Th official announcement is tomorrow!!

Seeing a KH character in this movie would be awesome. But, what if Disney is saving it for a KH movie itself? Lol. A guy can dream, can't he?

Can't argue with that logic. IGN is pretty harsh with things. It's like they expect too much.

Gamespot is under IGN?

What is the best video games news site? I am getting tired of IGN. IGN is getting annoying. So, where else can I check video game news?

I own a Wii. I have been with Nintendo since I was young. I hope to get a Wii U within the first few weeks it's out.

Chapter 6 Rowe was still shocked from the story. Kyra couldn’t even believe it. “I-I-I--” Rowe stuttered. “What you have just heard, Rowe,” Rex said. “Everything is true.” “But...” Rowe said. “I don’t even know how to fight!!” “It’s in your blood.” Ty said. “But...” “You need to do this...” Rex said. “You will learn on the way.” Rowe was silent for a few moments. He sighed. “Alright,” he finally said. “I’ll do it.” They all got up and prepped to leave. “Thank you, Ty.” Rex said. “You really did help.” “You’re welcome.” Ty replied. Rex gave him a hug. “Good bye, Ty...” Afterwards, he left out the door. Ty watched them leave. As soon as they disappeared, Ty called King Mickey. “He’s on his way to beginning his adventure.” “Thank you Ty.” Mickey said. “You may now go.” He hung up. He began packing again. His next destination was Sandy Isle. Loke’s Castle “Tell me Cole,” Loke said. “How do you know General Twang?” “Oh,” Cole said, smiling. “We go back.” “We used to work together.” Twang said immediately. “Where?” Loke asked. “Winchill’s Labs.” Cole replied quickly. “What made you guys leave?” “We felt we weren’t wanted.” Twang said. “After we did all of our research, we left.” “What did you two do there?” “We created new technologies.” Cole said. “For the war.” “For what side?” Loke seemed to be getting more curious about their past lives. “The bad side.” Twang said quickly. “We were always evil.” “I see...” Loke said, scratching his chin. “Well, we better get ready to attack Mickey’s castle grounds.” They went back to preparing their attack. Cole looked over at Twang. “I feel he’s already suspicious.” “Why?’ Twang said. “We have already told him the truth.” “Yeah...” Cole said. “But, sooner or later, he will find out the whole truth about us and the Organization.” “We will kill him before he finds out the truth about us.” Twang said. “Soon, Kingdom Hearts will be all ours to control.” They walked out. “Are we all set?” Loke asked. “Yes...” Twang replied. “All the soldiers are prepared to attack.” “My group will meet us outside the castle grounds.” Cole said. “Excellent...” Loke said. “We will soon rule two castles!! And the keyblade will be ours!!” They all left. King’s Castle “Clem,” the King said. “Are all the soldiers ready?” “Yes, your majesty.” he replied. “Good, good.” King Mickey said. “They will be attacking this castle any day now.” In the castle grounds, a guard stood watch. He was waiting for them to come so he could warn the King. He took out his telescope. He spotted a big group. The sky was also getting gloomier. He ran inside to inform them all. “Your highness!” the watch guard said. “They are coming.” “Thank you.” he replied. The guard left. “Let’s go...” Mickey said. They left to the other soldiers. “Everyone ready?” Koto asked them once he went in. “YES SIR!!!” they all said. “They’re all yours...” “Actually, Koto,” the King said. “I am allowing you to be their general.” “Me?” “Yes.” Mickey replied. “You did so well in the war when you were in there, so I’m letting you lead them.” “What about you?” he asked. “Don’t you need protection?” “I have plenty.” King Mickey smiled. “I have Clem and my keyblade.” ‘OK,” Koto said. “Good Luck and stay safe.” “You too, majesty...” The parted ways. Koto led the soldiers out and Mickey and Clem walked out the back. Mickey and Clem got out of the castle safely. They looked behind them and saw darkness hover over the castle. Mickey looked sad. “They will be fine, my king.” Clem said. “Koto will lead them to victory and you will have your castle.” “I sure hope so...” Mickey said looking sad. They both put their hoods on and continued walking. “Where are we going anyway, sir?” “You’ll see...” They walked into their portals. The fight at Mickey’s Castle has begun. Destiny Island Rex and Rowe were busy packing. Kyra was told to stay by Ty. It was for her own protection. He hesitated to listen, but Rowe and Rex talked to her about it. She finally accepted. She watched them as they packed. She was devastated that she had to stay. Ty walked out. “Are you two ready?” he asked them. They both nodded. “Before you two leave,” Ty continued. “There is someone here who wants to wish you luck.” They all went outside. There stood King Mickey and Clem. They walked over to them. “My king,” Rex said. “What are you doing here?” “Can’t I say good luck to the new heroes?” Rex and Rowe smiled. “I am also here to give you both something.” the King said. Clem took out a sack. “This sack will teach you many thing on your adventures.” King Mickey said. “What’s in it?” Rowe asked. “Magic...” Rex replied. “Correct.” Mickey said. “Magic will help you a lot on your adventure, especially on difficult tasks.” “But,” Clem added. “You are not allowed to open it until you have reached a certain point.” “Where’s that?” “The sack will give off a bright light when you have arrived at the point.” Clem continued. “If you open it before you reached the point, terrible things will happen.” Rowe gulped. “I guess that’s it for now.” King Mickey said. “You best say your goodbyes and be on your way.” “Thank you...” Rowe said. “Rex,” Mickey said. “A minute?” Rex followed Mickey to the ocean. “What’s up?” Rex asked. “Thank you for keeping everything a secret until now.” Mickey said. “I know it’s been hard for you.” “Anything for the one who helped my father escape from the darkness.” Mickey smiled. Then he looked away. “Is there something bothering you?” “Huh?” Mickey said. “Oh, no... I was just thinking.” “About what?” “Nothing that should worry you right now.” Mickey said. “It’s time for you to go anyway.” “What are you going to do now?” Rex asked. “I have some other things to take care of.” he replied. “Good luck too...” Rex told Mickey. They hugged and walked back over to the others. Ty already gave Rowe the keyblade and explained to him on how to use it. Kyra walked up to them. “Well,” she said, beginning to tear up. “I guess this is it.” The three of them looked at each other. “I’m going to miss you guys!” she said, crying. “Please stay safe.” “We will, Kyra.” Rex told her. They all hugged each other. They let go and Kyra watched them leave through a portal that King Mickey set for them. “Ready?” Rex asked Rowe. “Ready...” he replied. “We’ll go together.” Rex said. They looked back one more time and waved good bye to everyone. Then, they went through at the same time. The portal disappeared. A few seconds later, they appeared at a place that was familiar to Rex. They were Hollow Bastion. “We better get started.” Rex said. They walked around. Back at Destiny Islands, Kyra sat down. She was still crying. Ty walked up to her. “Before I leave,” he said. “I want you to have this.” He handed her a charm. “My mom’s good luck charm.” “She gave that to Sora as good luck on his journey.” “I know...” Kyra said. “She told me. But, why didn’t you give it to one of the boys?” “Because,” Ty said. “Where you will be going is somewhere special.” “How will this help me there?” “You’ll find out.” Kyra looked at it. She looked sad again. “You must really miss her.” “I loved her.” “She truly was a beautiful woman.” Ty said. “Ty...” Mickey said. “I better be going too...” “I’m going to miss you, Ty...” “I’ll miss you too...” he said. They hugged each other goodbye. Ty left through a portal to Sandy Isle. “You’ll be OK, Kyra.” Clem told her. King Mickey gave her a hug and they left through the portal. She watched them leave. She was now all alone on the island. She went back inside and waited until it got dark outside. A few hours has passed and it was finally dark out. Kyra made sure no one was watching her. She took off her sandals and walked in to water. She put her mother’s charm around her neck and closed her eyes. She took a few deep breaths and felt a strong wind against her face. Suddenly, she was whisked away from Destiny Islands. She opened her eyes and smiled. “I’m home...” she said.

Chapter 5 “Let’s begin...” Ty said. “We’ll begin from twenty five years ago from today.” Ty’s Tale We have finally restored peace to all of the worlds. Kingdom Hearts was still safe. All the bad guys were defeated. Maleficent and King Pete could not be found. Organization Thirteen was no more. Castle Oblivion was now a tourist attraction where people could learn about its history and How Sora and Riku defeated some members of the Organization. Yes, everything was back to normal. All thanks to Riku and Sora. After being crowned heroes of the worlds, there was a big party. Everybody was there. Characters from the sea to characters from space. It was a big celebration. Hollow Bastion was back to its original self. Sora, Riku, and Kairi moved back to Hollow Bastion. We all thought nothing like that would happen ever again. But, we were wrong. While we were celebrating in Hollow Bastion, Master Xehanort was planning something more diabolical than before. “Wait, wait...” Rowe interrupted. “Who’s Master Xehanort?” “He was a very diabolical person.” Rex answered. “His dream was to conquer Kingdom Hearts. You do know what Kingdom Hearts is, right?” “Somewhat...” “Kingdom Hearts is made up from all kinds of worlds.” Ty answered. “If someone evil take control of Kingdom Hearts, they become ruler of all worlds.” “OK,” Rowe said. “Back to the story.” “Where was I?’ Ty wondered. “Ah, yes. The part of Master Xehanort.” Master Xehanort was on top of a mountain, afar from the celebration. He was watching us as we celebrated the success of saving Kingdom Hearts. He was angry. He was angry because Xemnas had failed him. Xemnas was the leader of Organization thirteen. An organization that was also bound to take control over Kingdom Hearts and rule the Darkness. Xemnas was a nobody to Xehanort in his apprentice days. He was an apprentice to Ansem the Wise. After Ansen sacrificed himself, I came along. I was the King’s long time friend and guard. He promoted me to head guard five years before I retired. I was taught to protect him at any cost. He taught me everything I needed to know. I was aware of Sora’s tale and all about Riku. But, Mickey cleared everything up for me. One day, King Mickey gave me the day off. I went for a walk to enjoy the fresh air. As I was walking, the King’s dog, Pluto, had a letter in his mouth. He dropped a letter in front of me and sat there, watching me open the letter. The letter was from Sora and Riku. They were talking about their time in the war. At that time, the war has just begun. “So,” Rowe said. “Master Xehanort began a war in order to regain Kingdom hearts?” “Yes...” Rex said. “He never gave up.” “Until that unfaithful day...” Ty said. “It’s hard to forget that day...” “What happened?” Rowe said, getting anxious. “It will be told later on in the story.” Ty explained. “Back to where I was.” I brought the letter to King Mickey. He was happy to finally hearing from Sora and Riku. It had been a long time since we heard from them. They told us that great things were happening. Then, from Sora, we heard great news. We learned that Sora’s wife was pregnant. He said that he had to go home temporarily to take of his wife. He waited for our permission. King Mickey was glad to grant his wish. He immediately dispatched a carrier pigeon to inform him he may take a break. The letter arrived to him successfully. Riku had told us a few days later that Sora had left to go home. About a year later, we received more news from Sora and Riku. It had warned us that there was a new threat rising. They have learned that from a very dangerous mission they were given. They were the only two who have survived. One went missing. That one was Leon. No one knew where he went or what happened to him. Some say Leon is dead, Others say that he is still alive and hiding from the threat. “Who’s the new threat?” Rowe asked. “Team Loke.” “I never heard of them.” Kyra said. “They were formed in the when it was the middle of the war.” “Who are they?” Rowe asked. “Not much is known about them.” Ty answered. “They just became famous to us about a year ago.” “Oh,” Rowe said. The threat had killed many soldiers. Team Loke was lead by an evil man named Loke. Along side with Loke, was his best general, Twang. Twang was evil as well. Rumors were said that he too was planning to takeover Kingdom Hearts and kill Master Xehanort. As soon that was found out, Mickey sent Riku and Sora out to to capture him and imprison him for life. They did, but three months later, he escaped. Twang escaped by the help of a soldier who was sent by Lord Loke to have him join the team. Twang gladly accepted. Mickey was furious when he found out. He sent me out to look for the group. At that time, I was training my nephew, who was going to replace me when I retired. My nephew was born. I had to leave the castle to help my son and his wife with their child. I received the letter saying that it was urgent. I explained to them I had to leave on the King’s orders. They understood. I packed my bags and left immediately. I searched for the team for two years. I couldn’t find them. I looked in places where they have been, but it seemed that they have left before I could capture Twang and the team. I finally gave up. I reported back to the castle to tell Mickey of the news. There, I learned that a new group has rose. They successfully killed Master Xehanort and planned to continue the war. No one knows the name. Not even Mickey did. But, I feel that was the group Twang was in before he joined Team Loke. I retired ten years after all that commotion has caused. During my last ten years, I spent my time training my nephew. He was to replace me after I retired. I also learned that Riku had a son. Rex walked towards the window and stared outside, “Who’s Riku’s son?” Rowe asked. Kyra and Ty looked over at Rex. Rowe looked over too. He was shocked. “REX???” Rex turned around. “Yeah,” he said. “I am his son.” “YOU???” Rowe said, getting up. “YOU’RE his SON!?!?!” “I know it’s hard to believe...” “It is!!” Rowe said. He seemed excited. “I’m friends with a legend’s son!!!” “We’re friends again??” Rex said. “We always were...” “But,” Rex said. “Why didn’t you want to talk to me for a few days?” “I was frustrated.” Rowe admitted. “You weren’t telling me anything.” “I was told to keep secrets from you.” “That’s what I don’t get.” “The story is almost finished.” Rex said. “You will learn more.” They sat down. Riku’s son’s name was Rex, as you already know. Not much has happened after. Both kids grew older. Sora’s son had a son. Rex had just became three years old. “What does this story have to do with me?” “Wait...” Ty said. He continued. When you were seven years old, your father was approached by two cloaked men. Before you were born, he had told Mickey that he wanted no part in this long war. He told the King that he wanted to focus on you and you only until you have reached a certain age. That day, when you were seven years old, he had no choice to join the war. That’s when we all pitched in and watched you grow. We became your family after both your parents left. Five years ago, your father was destined to be the next keyblade holder to end this war, but now that he is gone. It’s your turn, Rowe. It’s your destiny to end this war and end these two groups once and for all. Rowe’s mouth dropped. “SORA WAS MY GRANDFATHER????”

Thank you! I just to let everyone know that the next chapter will soon be up (tomorrow). Also, some places will be made up. Most places from the series will be in here.

What do you think of it so far? Please be honest.

Chapter 4 Rowe went up to Ty’s door and knocked on the door. Ty answered it. “Rowe,” he said. “What brings you here?” “I need someone I can talk to and trust.” “Now’s not a good time...” “Please, elder...” Ty sighed. “Oh alright, come on in.” “Thank you...” Rowe went in. Once he got in, he saw boxes. “You going somewhere?” “I have been reassigned to a new island...” “WHAT??” Rowe was shocked. “But, why? We need you here!!! I need you!!” “You’re all getting older now.”Ty began. “You’re twelve now. Soon, you won’t be needing me.” “I’ll always need you, Ty!” Rowe said. “Especially now!” “I’m sorry.” Ty said, looking down. “It’s his orders.” “Whose orders?” “The King’s...” “Ugh!!” Rowe grunted. “I’m sick of that guy already!!” “Is that why you’re here?” Ty asked. “It’s because of him and your friends, isn’t it?” Rowe sighed. “Yeah.” Rowe explained to whole thing to Ty. Ty seemed interested. Rowe finally finished his story. “Well Rowe,” Ty said. “It seems to me that all they were trying to do is protect you.” “That’s what both Rex and Kyra said.” “They’re right.” “Huh?” “I knew too.” “You did?” “Yes,” Ty confirmed. “King Mickey has forbade both me and Rex to tell you anything.” “I don’t understand...” “It’s time for to learn your destiny.” Ty said. “Come back her later today and I will tell you everything you need to know.” “But...” “Move along now.” Ty said. “I have much to do.” Ty scooted Rowe out of his house. Rowe looked back and walked away. Castle Courtyards Koto finally arrived at the courtyards of Mickey’s Castle. He was out of breath. He bent down to catch his breath. “Koto?” a familiar voice said. “You escaped?” Koto saw Jiminy Cricket in front of him. He picked him up. “How did you escape Lord Loke?” Jiminy asked. “Magic...” he said panting. “Jiminy, I need to get to King Mickey pronto!!” “Is there a problem?” “It’s an emergency!!” “What?” Jiminy said. “What’s going on??” “Lord Loke...” Koto said, still catching his breath. “He... he is planning to takeover the castle and steal the keyblade.” “They keyblade isn’t here...” “What??” “It’s on Destiny Islands.” Jiminy said. “With Elder Ty.” “No.. no... no.” “Why no?” “Then that means...” Koto said looking up. “What?” Jiminy said, anxiously. “They’re going to kidnap King Mickey...” “Then,” Jiminy said. “Let’s go!!!” Koto ran into the Throne room with Jiminy in his hand. “There it is!!” Jiminy stopped him. Koto went in. “KING MICKEY!!!” Koto shouted. “Koto??” Mickey said. He got up from his throne. “You escaped!!!” He ran up to hug Koto. “It’s so good to see you again Koto!!’ Mickey said. “It’s good to see you too, your majesty.” Koto replied. “But, you’re in danger!!” “What do you mean?” Clem wondered. A spy from Organization Takeover was in disguise as one of King Mickey’s guards. He backed out of the room. He contacted Cole. “Lord Loke is planning to invade your castle in the upcoming days.” Koto said. “What for?” Mickey asked. “What for?” “For the next Keyblade...” Mickey laughed. “Oh, Koto,” Mickey said. “The keyblade isn’t here.” “I’m aware of that now.” Koto said. “Then,” Mickey said. “What are you concerned about? There’s nothing to be worried about.” “Actually, there is.” Koto said. “Your highness, they’re going to put you in a cell and won’t stop torturing you until you tell them.” King Mickey looked worried. “Is that what they did to you?” Clem asked. “Yes.” “Why did you give in???” Mickey asked. “I didn’t tell him!!” Koto said. “Loke figured it out himself.” Clem put his hands over his head. Mickey has a worried expression on his face. “This is not good!” Mickey said. “This is not good at all!!” “What should we do?” Koto asked the king. “We must prepare for this attack.” Mickey said. “When will he attack.” “Knowing Lord Loke for quite some time now,” Koto said. “Could be either tonight or sometime tomorrow.” “Then,” Mickey said. “We must prepare now!!” They all sat down and began discussing on what they were going to do. Later that day, Ty requested Rowe to go see him now. Rowe went inside. There he saw Rex, Kyra, and Elder Ty. “What are they doing here?” Rowe said angrily. “I told you I would need to prepare for our long discussion.” Ty said. “Rex is the best person to help. Kyra also needs to know what is going on.” “It’s time for you to learn the truth about me, Rowe.” Rex said. “Please don’t think badly about me when I tell you these things.” Both Kyra and Rowe sat down across from Ty and Rex. “Now,” Ty said. “It’s time for you to learn your true destiny.

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Chapter 3 “I don’t believe it...” Kyra said. “You have been keeping secrets all along.” “I’m sorry...” “But, why?” “It’s for BOTH of your protection.” Rex said. “They all trusted me.” “What other secrets are you keeping?” Rex hung his head. “I can’t tell you anymore right now...” “Please, Rex!!” Kyra begged. “Tell me!!” “You both will find out soon enough...” Rex said. He walked away. Kyra just stood there and watched him leave. It was now up to Kyra to tell Rowe what he needs to do. She planned to talk to him in the morning. She went back to bed. Back inside Rowe’s house, it was 5:15 in the morning. Rowe had a headache from earlier. He had a lot of things on his mind. He just couldn’t fall asleep. He was thinking about his dad. He was thinking about the conversation he had with the guys. He was still mad at Rex. He was drinking some juice. The sun was coming up. There was another knock on the door. “Leave me alone!!” he told the person knocking at his door. “Rowe?” the voice said. “It’s me, Kyra.” Rowe opened the door and let her in. They sat down at the table. “How are you feeling, Rowe?” she asked. “Tired...” he replied. “Angry.” “What’s wrong?” “It’s nothing that should worry you, Kyra.” “You can tell me.” she said. “I won’t tell anyone, I promise.” “I found out something about Rex.” “What?” “He keeps secrets from us.” “He does?” “You’re right,” Rowe said. “He does lie a lot.” “Maybe he’s lying to protect us...” “Why?” Rowe said. “Why does he want to keep us in the dark?” “There are somethings not even we are ready to know about him.” Kyra said. “Trust me, I know.” “Well, that doesn’t change any...” Rowe stopped. “Wait a minute...” “What?” “He put you up to this,” Rowe asked. “Didn’t he?” Kyra didn’t answer. “Didn’t he?” Rowe asked her again. “I wouldn’t say that he...” “Of course he would ask you to talk to me about what happened last night!” “Please, Rowe!!” she begged. “He has a point.” “I never expected any of this from either of you!!!” Rowe shouted. He stormed out of the house. “ROWE!!” she shouted at him. “JUST LEAVE ME THE HELL ALONE!!!” Rowe shouted back. He went to the only person he could trust, the island’s elder, Ty. Rex ran up to Kyra. “Well?” “It didn’t go too well.” she replied. “Great...” he said. “Now how is he supposed to help King Mickey?” “What about that Clem guy?” “He is King Mickey’s High Guard,” Rex said. “He needs him...” “Oh...” They both watched Rowe storm away. “Rex,” Kyra spoke up. “What other secrets are you keeping from us?” “Don’t worry about it...” Rex said. He then walked away. Kyra just stood there. “Oh, Rex...” She said to herself. “How can we gain your trust?” Prison Cell BOOM!! the prison door opened. Koto looked up. It was the man who had captured him. “Good morning, Koto!” the soldier said. He just growled and gave him an angry look. “Well, that’s not a nice way to say hello...” “What do you want?” “I just wanted to say hi to my favorite prisoner.” Koto growled again. The soldier put a plate down in front of him. “Go ahead...” he said. “Eat...” Koto just stared at him. He didn’t touch anything. “Why are you here?” Koto finally said. “I’m sure you know why I’m here...” “No matter how many times you ask me,” Koto replied. “I’m not helping.” “Oh,” the soldier said. “But, this time you will...” “What?” The soldier told the guards to leave the room. They both left. He slammed the door closed. “You don’t want to see your son get hurt now, do you?” He looked at the soldier. “What are you talking about?” Koto said. “He’s at home. The people of our island are there with him.” “For now...” the soldier lied. He didn’t send anyone yet. It was trick. “But, there is still time to save him.” “I’m still not telling you where he is.” “I sense you don’t care for Rowe...” “Of course I do!!” “Then,” the soldier said. “Tell me where the King is...” Just then, a soldier ran in. “General Twang!!” he said. “What is it??” he looked over. “Lord Loke has found the location of King Mickey.” “Excellent...” he smiled. He looked back at Koto. “Thanks for the help...” “No...” General Twang left the prison cell. Once he left. He stood out the door to hear Koto angrily hit something. He did. The General smiled then walked away. “I need to get out of here!!” Koto said. He looked for a way out. He tried to use his magic to get him out, but they were weak. He began to work out. He began with pushups and sit-ups. He did two hundred each. He did magic again. This time, it seemed a bit stronger. But, he knew he had to more than just sit-ups and pushups. He worked hard for the next couple of days. A few days has passed since they found the location of King Mickey. He heard them upstairs in the meeting room. They were talking about how to attack King Mickey. But, all he could hear was muffled voices. “I say we just use magic.” a soldier said. “So,” General Twang said. “What we have so far is magic, weapons, and just pain kidnap the mouse.” “Looks like it...” Lord Loke said. “We’re going to have to put it to a vote.” “Whoever wants to vote just kidnap the mouse, raise your hands.” Five people raised their hands. “You’re all idiots!” the Lord determined. He killed them all. “Looks like we’re going with weapons and magic!!” They left the room. Down in the prison cell, Koto was training for his escape long and hard. He was almost ready. A guard came in, and he stopped working out. “The Lord would like to see you...” “I bet he would...” Koto said, smiling. He used blizzard to freeze him. Lucky for him, it worked. The other guards ran to see what was going on. The saw a frozen guard standing there and the cell empty. One ran over and pulled the alarm. Once Koto heard the alarm, he ran faster. “Koto...” Lord Loke growled. “STOP HIM!!!!” The soldiers ran after him. “There he is!!!’ a soldier yelled out. Koto changed directions. He saw another group of soldiers. He ran the opposite way. Again, there was a group of soldiers. He was trapped in the middle. “We got you now, Koto.” General Twang said. “I guess you do...” Koto replied. The three groups crowded him. He used fire magic to block them from capturing him again. The groups to the left and right of him flew back. General Twang was getting furious. He charged after him, but Koto did a backflip over the group in front of him. He landed on his hands and feet. “What are you waiting for?!?!” Twang said. “STOP HIM!!!!” The soldiers chased after him. He was shooting fireballs at them. “Do I have to do everything???” General Twang said. He charged at him. ‘Almost there...” Koto said. There was a door for him to escape through. Twang was getting closer. Koto opened the door and escaped. He saw Twang charging at him. “Good bye, General!” Koto said, smiling. Twang ran faster. Koto shut the door. He after he shut the door, he heard Twang’s head slam into the door. He laughed and walked away. He searched to a path that can help him escape the woods. Back inside, Twang got up. “OOOW!!!” he groaned. He rubbed his head. He stared at the door and was angry. “Perhaps I can be of an assistance.” a voice said, coming out of nowhere. “What?” Twang said. “Who said that?” He saw a dark portal appear in front of him. A tall black hooded figure walked out. “Who are you?” Twang asked. “My name is Cole.” he said. “I am the leader of Organization Takeover.” Twang smiled. “It’s about time you show up...”

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