I just started writing this multi-chap fic.

 

Basically, some KH and FF characters are in high school. Unfourtuantely I only have 8 of the Orgy members in this so, I'm sorry about that....

 

The Orgy members started this 'To Do' list which causes havoc and drama through out everyone's life.

 

Rated M because of language, innuendo's. Mostly this rating is because of Axel...you'll see why.

 

So, read it and tell me what you think...

 

Here's the link....

 

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5243233/1/The_To_Do_List

lol im still readin i staretd on chapter 1 now im on 4 its really good!

Thanks, Larxene!

 

I'm starting to write the sixth chapter right now, so I'll hopefully have that up sometime this week... I really want to get this story at chapter ten by the end of this month! But I sadly don't really see this happening! I'm so angry with myself!

 

Well, hopefully you like the fifth chapter as much as the others.

i did! i thinks they;re funny!

cos i dun like yaoi, i thinks its funny!

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The sixth chapter is gunna have A LOT of RoxasXAxel fluffyness so hopefully for you AkuRoku lovers it meets your expectations!

Yeah, that was one of my favorite parts. I absolutely adore Demyx but I do feel the need to harass him once in a while.

IN DEED .. everone chold use a little hrasemeent ... ANYWAYS .. GOOD STORY .. i got a lot o good laughs out of it ..keep it a going .. OR ELS .. I KILL YOU

XDXD

HERE'S THE SIXTH CHAPTER!! Just wrote it, like, five minutes ago, guys! LoL

 

 

Link --------> http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5243233/6/The_To_Do_List

IT WAS AWSOME .

I LIkED IT .

IT WAS like awsome ..

yay .. im relly bad at revewing things ..

Haha. It's okay, I just really wanted to get people's opinion on what could be improved or what they like. I kinda needed specifics from people so I could improve the story, but it's okay, as long as know people are actually reading is good enough. Thanks for reading it!

 

I think my favorite part of this chapter was Xigbar...

i agree ... and i like how he acted to ..

that sort of what i whold of done to .. all thought i whold porbley run away then go into a bathroom stall

Well, Xigbar had to pee really bad, otherwise he probably would have run away screaming and told Saix....

not relly .. just the way you were makeng ever body act ... you make the men act just about right ...

lo, that was good! cant wait to read chapter 6

Okay, well, here's the seventh chapter! It's in Roxas' POV throughout, which I hadn't planned on AT ALL! So sorry if you guys were hoping to get other characters POV in there. I might just talk more about the party next chapter and leave Axel and Roxas out entirely for the next chapter.

 

What do you guys want???

 

Well, enough of my rambling... Here's the link to the seventh chapter!

 

 

Link ---------> http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5243233/7/The_To_Do_List

that was good, i never realised then Xion's hair was raven-like till now....

lol, well, now you know!

HELL YAY

Alice Cooper FTW

"only women bleed .. only women bleed"

ANYWAY .

GOOD STORY .

BUT

IT NEEDS MORE SMEXYNESS IN IT XDXD JK

LoL. Yeah, I love Alice Cooper, too. I just had to add him in there. Three people in my story are obsessed with eighties/seventies music, Roxas, Demyx, and Leon. So, hence Alice Cooper, and Alanah Myles (Black Velvet) playing during his party.

 

Anyway, I need your guys' opinion on the next chapter(s).

 

I have A LOT more I need to do where the party is concerned. So much crap happens during that one night, that it's gonna take a lot to write. So, I'm going to leave it up to you guys.... Do you guys want everything in one HUGE chapter, (probably twice as long as my others, if not longer) OR split it between two chapters????

 

I'm leavin' it up to you guys, you have to read the mess after all!

Poison made me jizz with happiness when I saw it in there.

proble better to split it in two chapters and relesaese one on one day and relase the other and the day after

That's what I was thinking of doing.... I'm almost done the first half so it should be up soon. I'll be splitting it up, because I can't really imagine anyone reading a twenty page chapter and the rest being about half that... So, the first half will be up soon, I'll post the link as soon as it's posted on the site.

[taps foot].. [is waiting in pashently ] ....

any time will be nice ^^

^ yeah friend is right!