soo not sure if this would be with personal but o well...

Here's part two to axels sucky life (if i miss commas sorry but not my top priority) i followed some advice given to me by somone (cant rember who) but they said to stop being jumpy... and that was my goal in this one but im not sure if i did good on that... (no crap about how axel died this was my theory)

 

 

Axel's Sucky Life Part 2: The Heartless

 

He, I'm back! If you don't remember who i am or what I'm talking about then I'll say it again. Hi, I'm Axel, got it memorized? This is my sucky life...

 

It happened when I turned 23 (I'm 25 now). It was very dark out and there were strange black creatures with Yellow eyes lurking about. The strange creatures consumed many townsfolk. I ran through Radiant Garden searching for Isa hoping he was still alive.

 

"Isa!" I scream.

"Isa, where are you?"

"Over here!"

I search frantically... Then I spotted him curled up in a corner, surrounded by the strange creatures. I freak out and dash to him.

"Are you ok, Isa?" I asked.

"Ya, just get those thing away from me!"

 

I run to the srange creatures and bring out my frisbies.

I light them on fire.

"AAAAAAAHHHHH!!"

I charged at them and threw my flaming frisbies. They turned to ash!!

"What just happened?" asked Isa.

"I... Don't know."

The creatures twitched then jumped onto us. Next thing i knew we were consumed...

 

The only thing i remember from that point on is waking to a strange man with silver-ish hair, dark skin and golden eyes. He appeared to be grining...

 

End of part 2 ill make part three later im to tired.

chapter updates should continue in the original story thread.

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