This is a sequel to the story of riku's story. I don't own nothing of KH and Bleach.

Intro

'' I'm coming sister.''said Riku's nobody before disappearing to Riku's body.

A girl saw him going into Riku.'' No why brother.''said the girl. Riku saw her and started to come outside. The girl ran and hid behind a tree. Her name is Iukxr. She is Riku's heartless. She has long white hair, Black eyes, And she was wearing a coat. She then ran to the town. She made it to the city, but when she got there she saw Xigbar.'' Hello girl. You must come with me.''said Xigbar.

A heartless version? Expected and yet unexpected. Riku has a strong heart so seeing this doesn't surprise me. Although wouldn't Riku not be here if their was a heartless and Nobody of him? Also how did the nobody Riku learn of his sister the heartless of Riku? Why is it a chick? Just curious.

Nice.This is going to be good.Please,write more.

Chapter 1

'' So he founded out about the heartless vezion of you Riku?''asked namine.'' Yeah. I'm only here because of my bond with Sora. Aslong Roxas is here or you are here then i will never fade away. Thats how I'm here.''said Riku.'' I see. We must tell DiZ.''said Namine as they both walked away.

 

In the city. I was looking at Xigbar.'' I see so you know about me.'' I said i as bought out way to dawn.'' Yes and you must die.''said Xigbaras he bought out his arrowguns and started frieing at them at me. I dodged them the best i could and i then put a cut on Xigbar.'' I see you can wound me. I see i have to go all out. MERGE.''said Xigbar as he put his arrowguns together and mad a bow.'' You see I'm the only one who can transform their weapons without going into limit break form.''said Xigbar ashe fried a arrow at me.

Oh,this is great txa.PLEASE write more!

Meh, plot's pretty good I guess. I would advise to make a little longer chapters

Chapter 2

I dodged the arrow and i then rushed to Xigbar. He fried a few more. dodged a few more. He then appeared behind me and I saw a arrow go though me. I fell on the ground. I then removed the the arrow and threw back at Xigbar. He tryed to dodge it, but i got his eyepatch.'' After what that keyblade master did to me. I trained me right eye to be stronger. I call it my target eye.''said Xigbar. His target eye was stange. It was only a + and a . in the center. He then fried a few more arrows. I didged them and i grabed one arrow. It dameged my hand while doing so. I then threw back to him and he was stabed by it. I looked at him. He was siptting out blood. He then got up.'' I'll make you pay heartless. I can't die yet. SHOOT HIM, LOS LOBAS.''said Xigbar as he was ingulped by a storm. He then came out looking different then before. He then came out different then before(Is like Stark's release form, but the eye part is coving his right eye.)'' Now lets get started.''said Xigbar as he appeared behind me and shot a blast out of his gun onto me.

awesome TxA

Chapter 3

I fell on the ground. I then got up and slashed Xigbar on his chest.'' Okay lets do this.Los Abut.''said Xigbar as wolves came out. I then rushed to Xigbar. i destoryed the wolves. When i touched them They then blew up on me.'' My wolves are made up from nobody blasts. When they or you touch them then they blow up.''said Xogbar. I then destoryed the last wolve and rushed to Xigbar. He made enegry blades. Me and him started to clash.'' Oni,Grey.'' i said. He then got a cut on his arm.'' What was that?''asked Xigbar.'' You see my way to dawn is different. Once i call a color out and you have it. The more of it's on you the more damege you get.'' i said. Xigbar then rushed to me.'' BLACK.''said Xigbar, but i then took off my coat and then rushed to him.'' WHITE.''i yelled and he got a big slash on him. He thne fell on the ground.'' Few i won.''i said. then A man with blue draggers came in front of me.

I like it that chapter was really good.

Chapter 4

I saw the man. I rushed to him and clashed weapons.'' You must come with me. You must bring your brother back.''said the man.'' I don't have a brother. I am a heartless. Theres no way i could have a brother.'' i said. I backed away. I saw the man and i started to pass out. I fell to the ground.'' Grim....'' i said as i passed out.'' I see you remeber who you are, Heartless of Riku.''said the man.

My mind was going back in time.

I was in a castle and fighting a man with draggers.'' Man why can't you ever let me win girl.''said the man.'' You see Grimmlo. I am number 2 seeh.'' i said.'' I will never let you win.''said Grimmlo as he rushed to me.

Oh,this is getting really good.Please write more.

more this story is amazing

Chapter 5

I started to wake up a little. I found myshelf in a room. It had books on a the side of the bed. It also had a potch. I got up and saw that i was not wounded from my fight with Xigbar. I then put my hand on my head.'' Grimmlo.'' i said to myshelf. I saw a number 3 on my hand.'' I wonder how i got this on my hand.'' i tought. I then saw a man with draggers come in.'' I see you have been getting your memory back.''said the man.'' Its you Grimmlo.'' i said.'' Yes its me. Now i need your help. Its about your brother.''said Grimmlo.'' Brother? I have a brother?'' i asked.'' Yes hes the nobody of Riku. Hes like you but the nobody part of him.''said Grimmlo.'' So you need my help to bring him back.''i said.'' Yes its the only way.''said Grimmlo.'' Why do i have this number on my hand?''i asked.'' Its part of your old life. Before you were killed and sanked into darkness and then made into Riku's heartless when he fell into darkness.''said Grimmlo.'' I see. Will you tell me about my old life.''i asked.'' Yes.''said Grimmlo.

This is so good.Please write more txa!

Chapter 6

I listened to Grimmlo as he started talking to me and telling me about my old life.'' I see. I was a strong person a long time ago and now that power is gone.''i said as i started to cry a little bit.'' Yes. Your power is still inside you. Its just that we need to find it.''said Grmmlo.'' Now we need to find your brother. Xkiru.''said Grimmlo as he started to get up and get ready.'' Okay. I know about him. He's my brother. We need to bring him back him back to this world so we can stop organzation 13.''i said as i wiped away the tears and got ready.

The Organzation was getting ready for a war.'' Its time my friends. We need to destory Twilight town. With that world gone. We can use the hearts to make Kingdom Hearts a person once again.''said Xemnas as he was healed after his fight Xikru.'' Yeah its time to go.''said Demyx as he got his guitar.

This is good.I can't wait for the next chapter.Please write more.

Chapter 7

The organzation then disappeared.

I was walking in the town until i sensed alot of power heading for the town.'' Guess i have to fight.'' i said as i went into the air. When i got there i saw other people in the sky too. There was a man with a bindfold on and white hair. There was a mouse looking guy in a coat holding a keyblade. I saw the man with white hair.'' Thats my whole.'' i said as i started to walk up to him. Then the organzation appeared. A blast then came out of the sky and a boy then appeared.'' Mickey, He's here. He back now since my heartless is here.'' said Riku. It was Xurki. I looked at him.'' Brother.''i said. He then came next to me.'' Hey sis, We got back together.''said Xurki. Riku llooked at us and simled at us. Xemnas then made a throne seat out of ice with Vexen's help.'' Go my members. Kill these pests and we'll reborn kingdom hearts.''said Xemas as the members got their weapons out.

oh crap shits about to go down

Chapter 8

I locked blades with Xalden.'' Hello girl. Time to kill you. Wind come.''said Xalden as he summoned wind and blasted me to the ground.

Riku locked blades with Lexaeus.'' I'll kill you.''said Lexaeus as he sented Riku to the ground.

Mickey locked blades with Vexen.'' Lets see what the king can do.''said Vexen as he sented ice to Mickey.

Xurki clashed weapons with Axel and Saix.'' Lets see who wins this time.''said Axel and Saix.

Xemnas, Marluxia, Zexion, Xigbar, Larxene, Demyx, Roxas, and Luxord stood there watching the outcomes of the battles.

Riku had his way to dawn out and his soul eater.'' Lets go because after I'm done with you I;m going after Xemnas.''said Riku.

This is getting intense.Please write more.