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Flashback:


 


-Hollow Bastion, 9 years ago-


 


The town buildings were set on fire and everywhere was plagued by black liquid ooze like substances from which Pureblood Heartless had spawned from, Leon, 18 years old back then known, as Squall was the last remaining task guard member still standing trying to survive the onslaught of Heartless, as he battled one after another countless numbers of them, he was struggling to remain standing with everything going on both in front and around him, just then, appearing in front of his very eyes was the sorceress, the sorceress known, as Maleficent, the evil fairy, Squall tried to confront the evil fairy before she could begin her complete hostile takeover of the entire World but unfortunately, Squall was no match for her evil magic and just when it seemed like he was about to fall in battle, just then, a certain familiar Mouse had appeared wielding the Star Seeker Keyblade, using his Keyblade, he saved Squall and teleported him elsewhere to safety, the small Mouse then proceeded to confront Maleficent alone of whom was then seen lastly cackling very evilly to herself.


 


Back in the present, Riku helps awake Leon from his sudden flashback:


 


"...On...hey! Leon!"


 


said Riku, Leon awoke from gazing into the sky, as he replied:


 


"!? Huh, what!? oh, sorry about that, Riku..."


 


"...Its okay, if anything, i understand, you lost, a lot, didn't you? you and everyone else..."


 


"...Yeah, we did, we lost our homes and, we lost our friends, we ended up in Traverse Town after the World fell into Darkness and we didn't know what to do at all being in a new setting like we were, we were all panicking, especially Yuffie who was the youngest of us at the time, however, just when we thought that we were doomed with no help whatsoever, we then found ourselves lucky, for we had, a certain, friend..."


 


"Huh?"


 


"Well anyways Riku, i'm hoping that this little story of mine was insightful, perhaps?"


 


said Leon, wondering if he has help encouraged Riku in any way whatsoever at all, Riku replied with the words after coming up with his answer:


 


"...To be honest, i'm still having trouble adjusting to other people, outside of both my friends and family, all my life, i thought of new ways of how me and my friends could leave our home islands and go wherever it is we wanted to, we dreamed of exploring new Worlds, although, the end result that we got in the end wasn't quite what we had exactly pictured and now, i'm on a journey, a journey to reunite with my friends and return with them back to our home, for no matter how small it is, no matter how plain it may look, home...is where the Heart is, after all, right?"


 


said Riku, Leon was happy with Riku's answer, saying:


 


"...Good answer, it looks to me, as long, as you keep Light burning strong within your Heart, anything is possible, take a look at us, we're a good example if you don't mind me saying that and i hope, Riku that if you are ever in trouble, both wherever and whenever, just remember one thing: you have friends and allies everywhere you go, i'll gladly lend you my Gunblade if you so ever wish to take up arms with it."


 


Riku was surprised but happy by Leon's comment, replying:


 


"!? ...Heh, thanks, but no thanks, i've...got my own style."


 


said Riku, making a joke with Leon before then saying:


 


"...I've made up my mind, let's work together, Leon."


 


"You sure? i thought you weren't keen on it before."


 


"True, i wasn't but still, like you said, i have friends and getting help now and then isn't so bad...isn't, so bad, huh..."


 


said Riku, as he then looked at his hand and had recalled his previous argument with Mickey before further remembering what Mickey said to Riku after helping him when he finally defeated Ansem back at Castle Oblivion, Riku clutched a fist with his hand and thought to himself the words:


 


"...Mickey...i'm..."


 


suddenly, just then however, Leon interrupts Riku's thought process, saying to the latter:


 


"!?!? Riku! watch out!!"


 


"...Huh? !? WHOA!"


 


Riku dodges an attack meant for him by a giant Guard Armour Emblem Heartless, it had tried to rocket punch Riku only to fail, Riku summons his Soul Eater sword whilst Leon draws his Gunblade Revolver Griever against the Heartless, as Leon says to Riku:


 


"...You ready?"


 


"A mere Heartless like this? won't even be much, of putting up a fight."


 


said Riku to Leon who just smiles, afterwards the two proceed to fight the Guard Armour within the highly packed in bailey, during the fight, Leon notices that they won't be able to properly fight the Guard Armour unless taking the fight elsewhere, Riku agrees and so the white haired youth decides to shoot a Dark Firaga up into the corridor passage of the bailey's roof to provide more room, that way both he and Leon could fight the Guard Armour above the bailey instead of inside it, outside above they had more room and it was here that Leon had unleashed his special technique against the Guard Armour, the Renzokuken, Leon multiply slashes the Guard Armour one after the other until leaving Riku to deal the finishing blow by shooting a Dark Firaga aimed directly at the Guard Armour's head, the head is then knocked off the Guard Armour's body, forcing the rest of the body to retreat whilst leaving its head behind, its head comically tries to run away after its body by turning invisible to avoid being detected both Riku and Leon, either way it didn't matter, the battle was won although it came at the expense of the slight destruction of the bailey, Riku says to Leon:


 


"Sorry about ruining your rooftop."


 


"Its okay, knowing we were fighting Heartless, it couldn't be helped-"


 


"Yes it could have."


 


"!?"


 


"...Huh? !? AH!"


 


just then, Cloud appeared, having watched the whole fight, he scolds Leon for being so reckless in the destruction of the bailey's property, saying to him:


 


"...And you say you want to restore Hollow Bastion? gimme a break, as long, as people continue to act recklessly, they endanger the lives of others."


 


"...Cloud, i..."


 


"...Is this what Rinoa would have wanted?"


 


"!?!?"


 


"Rinoa?"


 


thought Riku to himself, Cloud then decided to take his leave but not before lastly saying to Riku:


 


"...Hey, kid, i want you to know something, you may have Leon's support and everyone else's support but that doesn't mean that you have mine, as long, as you continue to wield the powers of Darkness, someone will get hurt and i will never, EVER accept you for that, just think about what i have to say, as for me, i'm going to look for that Heartless, knowing that type of Heartless, it shouldn't have wandered off too far, probably to the central plaza, when you both are ready, come find me there, that's all."


 


said Cloud with words that appeared to be advice of wisdom before taking his leave, holding the handle of his Buster Sword tightly upon his back, Riku, although a bit annoyed with Cloud and his words knew that there was truth and that Riku himself should have thought more about the surrounding properties, wondering what could have happened if someone not related to everything could have possibly wandered in by mistake at those critical moments, it was then that Riku suddenly recalled what Pitch had said to him previously, about how Riku would be the cause of someone innocent getting hurt because of Riku, Riku upon thinking about this suddenly looks down in gloom towards the ground until Leon says to Riku:


 


"...Don't let it all get to you."


 


"Huh?"


 


"...Dilly-dally shilly-shally..."


 


"...Wha?"


 


"...Dilly-dally shilly-shally, that's...what Cloud's friend Tifa always used to say to him whenever he was down in the dumps and when he felt like that he couldn't move forward, in a sense, Cloud was saying that, to the both of us."


 


"But why? also, why is he using the power of Darkness? doesn't he know-"


 


"He knows, he knows that it could possibly corrupt him, still, Cloud...he sees it, as no other way of fighting, if you want to know more, you should ask Cloud himself, only he can give you his answers."


 


said Leon, moving on ahead, as Riku stood, lastly thinking to himself:


 


"...Yeah but, Leon, what about? ...no, forget it, i'll ask him when it's the right time, right now that Heartless needs to be stopped, i won't let it run free and destroy Hollow Bastion, this World...it doesn't belong to the Heartless, anymore!"


 


said Riku, he chased after Leon who in turn went on ahead after Cloud, trying to hunt down the Guard Armour Emblem Heartless that supposedly fled towards the central plaza of Hollow Bastion.


 


(To be continued.).


Edited by Iamkingdomhearts1000

Excellent work! I like how you created a bond between Riku and Squall, and some common ground they could relate with! I also loved how you officially gave a flashback to back when Leon and the others were almost doomed to fall with their world! Also loved the Easter Eggs such as Rinoa's name drop and her last name, not to mention SeeD! That's just awesome, man! I gotta say, you know how to handle these characters very well!

 

And you're giving Cloud more dialogue than he ever had in the KH series at this point, so good job! :D

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Sephiroth will make a cameo in the story.

 

As Cloud walks towards where the central plaza is located, passing the local water fountains nearby, he thinks to himself about both Riku and the Darkness that he emits:

 

"That kid...he has a strong Darkness, almost, like..."

 

just then, Cloud had a vision of a certain man who resembled Riku exactly more or less but upon instantly recalling the evil smile on this certain man's face, Cloud thought to himself again:

 

"!? NO! i mustn't! i mustn't...think..."

 

said Cloud, trying to get the image of the certain man out of his head before then suddenly hearing a voice:

 

"...Why do you deny the Dark?"

 

"!?!? YOU!"

 

"...Yes, Cloud, me, the one you only think about, the one, you only truly care about."

 

"SHUT UP! get out, GET OUT OF MY HEAD!"

 

"And why should i? face it, Cloud, this is just, as much, as my head, as it is yours, we share the same mind, we share the same body and we also, share the same Heart, that's why you use the Darkness, you depend on it, you crave it, you can't stand living without it, without...me...accept it Cloud, i am the one who guides you, now, and forever."

 

"SHUT UP!!!!"

 

shouted out Cloud before suddenly falling to the ground, as he grips his arm, thinking about the certain man who he identifies, as in the following:

 

"...Sephiroth...damn you!"

 

said Cloud before proceeding to get back up off his feet and continue onward to the central plaza.

 

not too far behind were both Riku and Leon, as they tried to catch up with Cloud, they had to fight with Pureblood Heartless standing in their way, Riku says to Leon, as they fight:

 

"Leon! are we almost there!?"

 

"Yeah! we should be! Cloud should be just up ahead but be careful! there should be more Heartless stronger then these weaklings!"

 

"Yeah, no kidding!"

 

said Riku, acknowledging Leon's words, at the central plaza, Cloud was standing in the exact center, waiting for the Guard Armour to make its appearance of which it did, both it and Cloud proceeded to battle one another with Cloud slicing off its head with a clean clear cut, thinking he had won the battle, Cloud wipes off the Darkness stains on his Buster Sword before realizing that ooze was spilling out from the Guard Armour's remains, it was just then that the Armour of the Heartless had exploded and had revealed a completely new and entirely different Heartless altogether, one that catches Cloud by surprise, this Heartless was called a "Dark Slime" and it was purely made of nothing but liquid substance formed completely from Darkness, using its complete water composed like body, the Dark Slime had knocked Cloud straight back into a wall and had proceeded to strangle him, by knocking him into the wall, he dropped his Buster Sword and is now unable to defend himself, Cloud was being slowly strangled, as Sephiroth's voice pops into his head again:

 

"...Why won't you use the Darkness? is it because, your afraid that i will take over? ...your being foolish Cloud, you know that you need me, you need my help, you need my Darkness to help end all your struggles once more, without my Dark, you'll be left with no strength to fight with, nothing to keep you going, only...emptiness."

 

said Sephiroth, Cloud openly declared his opposition to Sephiroth:

 

"...I won't, i won't give into you, no matter how many times you try to sway me, no matter how much you try to wrest control of my body, you'll NEVER have it! NEVER! one more thing, Sephiroth...your Darkness, i don't need it, i'll rely on my own strengths, my own powers, my own...Darkness and if that is not even enough...then so be it, let it be my fate...to end here, at the very least, you'll end here with me and that, brings me joy more then anything..."

 

said Cloud with seemingly no one around, the Dark Slime used one of its tentacles to pick up Cloud's Buster Sword and had prepared to slit his throat with it, Sephiroth lastly says before disappearing from Cloud's mind the words:

 

"...Hmph, nothing, but a puppet..."

 

Cloud merely smiles at Sephiroth's dismay before calmly closing his eyes and having a vision of someone, someone very close to his Heart, it was a young woman around Cloud's age who spoke to Cloud:

 

"...Sigh, dilly-dally, shilly-shally, honestly Cloud...why won't, you wake up?"

 

"...Tifa?"

 

As Cloud partially opened his eyes to see the Dark Slime about to strike him with his own sword, it was then suddenly, in a bright flash that Riku appeared! saving Cloud but in the process shattering his Buster Sword, Riku says to Cloud:

 

"Hey, you giving up? after all that talk about me and the Darkness, your going to let THIS thing get the better of you, no way, not going to happen, not until i show you...the Road, to Dawn."

 

said Riku lastly, catching Cloud greatly by both shock and surprise, especially by Riku's mention of the Road to Dawn.

 

(To be continued.).

Ooh, what awesomeness! I loved how you weaved Sephiroth into the story like that! It was a good representation of the struggle within Cloud and the darkness he wields, and the fact that Sephiroth is a part of him! Great work, man!

Yeah, i'm just about to confront Sephiroth in the final boss battle of FFVII on the PS4.

 

Sweet! Good luck with that! :D

I've defeated JENOVA Synthesis and Bizarro Sephiroth, now i'm just stuck on Safer.

 

Good luck on the final stage, man! Make sure not to spoil me, though, since I'm playing through the game for the first time! X3

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Good luck on the final stage, man! Make sure not to spoil me, though, since I'm playing through the game for the first time! X3

 

Seriously? you've never played FFVII? well your in for a well deserved treat if anything, trust me, that game will not disappoint :].

Seriously? you've never played FFVII? well your in for a well deserved treat if anything, trust me, that game will not disappoint :].

 

Yep, dead serious, this is the first time that I'm playing the game! I've heard and read and seen stuff regarding the game forever, and I've played Crisis Core and seen Advent Children, but now is when I'm really getting into the original FFVII, ya know? So I'm excited!  I am very much liking what the game has offered so far in my 15 hours of gameplay! :D

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Yep, dead serious, this is the first time that I'm playing the game! I've heard and read and seen stuff regarding the game forever, and I've played Crisis Core and seen Advent Children, but now is when I'm really getting into the original FFVII, ya know? So I'm excited!  I am very much liking what the game has offered so far in my 15 hours of gameplay! :D

 

Whereabouts are you on the game need any help?

Whereabouts are you on the game need any help?

 

Where last I was, I believe that it was in Corel Prison. I was just wandering around and about there, talking to the NPC's. And it's alright, I shall trudge through on my own, and journey to become stronger! :3

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Where last I was, I believe that it was in Corel Prison. I was just wandering around and about there, talking to the NPC's. And it's alright, I shall trudge through on my own, and journey to become stronger! :3

 

Okay but just a heads up, things will get tougher obviously from after that point.

Okay but just a heads up, things will get tougher obviously from after that point.

 

Sweet, I'm looking forward to the challenge! I already have my party up to almost their mid twenties! I think I could have them nearing their 30's before switching to Disc 2, ya know?

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Sweet, I'm looking forward to the challenge! I already have my party up to almost their mid twenties! I think I could have them nearing their 30's before switching to Disc 2, ya know?

 

Disc 2 won't be until after the Forgotten City, i won't say any spoilers but its just that's the last level of Disc 1, that's not a major spoiler is it?

Disc 2 won't be until after the Forgotten City, i won't say any spoilers but its just that's the last level of Disc 1, that's not a major spoiler is it?

 

No, no, it's all good. You just mentioned the place, but you didn't mention any story related things regarding it or what goes down there, so you're good, no need to worry! You managed to inform me of this without spoiling any story content, so thank you! :)

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No, no, it's all good. You just mentioned the place, but you didn't mention any story related things regarding it or what goes down there, so you're good, no need to worry! You managed to inform me of this without spoiling any story content, so thank you! :)

 

You sure? i mean i only wanted to give you a heads up was all.

You sure? i mean i only wanted to give you a heads up was all.

 

Yeah, don't sweat it, it's all good! Now I know where Disc 1 ends! I'll just level grind a bit more, probably to get my characters into their 30's before starting Disc 2, ya know?

Yeah, level grind to at least 35 i think.

 

Alright then, will do! Also, when will you update this story?

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Oh, you want me to continue it? well, last time we left off, Riku saved Cloud but at the process of his Buster Sword being smashed into pieces.

 

I've been writing the Dissidia Manga/Anime story for the meantime, i've already completed both the prologue and 4 chapters so far.

Oh, you want me to continue it? well, last time we left off, Riku saved Cloud but at the process of his Buster Sword being smashed into pieces.

 

I've been writing the Dissidia Manga/Anime story for the meantime, i've already completed both the prologue and 4 chapters so far.

 

Yes, I want you to continue! I've been waiting on the continuation of this story, alongside X/XIII, the XV crossover and Darkness Of The XIII! And I've still yet to read the X and MCU parts of the anthology! :)

 

Oh right, you said you were making a Dissidia story! I have a lot to catch up on! xD

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Yes, I want you to continue! I've been waiting on the continuation of this story, alongside X/XIII, the XV crossover and Darkness Of The XIII! And I've still yet to read the X and MCU parts of the anthology! :)

 

Oh right, you said you were making a Dissidia story! I have a lot to catch up on! xD

 

Maybe i should slow down on the stories, a quick question though, which story would you like to see continued first?

Maybe i should slow down on the stories, a quick question though, which story would you like to see continued first?

 

Well, I'd say in the chronological order that you wrote them! So that'd mean from X/XIII to where you're currently at. So you can finish the other stories and then keep writing your current ones, ya know? :)

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Well, I'd say in the chronological order that you wrote them! So that'd mean from X/XIII to where you're currently at. So you can finish the other stories and then keep writing your current ones, ya know? :)

 

Yeah, okay then, though i'm currently on writer's block for Ansem's speech at his trial in X/XIII, i know that exactly sounds like an excuse but truthfully and honestly, i'm having trouble thinking up the speech of how it will reflect Radiant Garden's beginning, as a whole.

 

Okay, i'll do that for the KH stories but i'm currently fascinated by my Dissidia story and so i was hoping that i could write both at the same time.

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