amazing drawing of Aqua I just finished using the muro thingy on deviantart ^.^

http://khoathkeeper13.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d32q8cd

Critque plz!

I gave it a...1000/10 nice drawing! thats a really good Aqua pic:3 I love the way you did the BG to. Great work;3

The transitioning from neck to back bothers me, her skin is too dark, and her face looks irregular for some reason. It's probably the way the smile is positioned.

 

Keep practicing though.

thx

and the face did kinda look messed up and I was trying to make it look like the neck was kinda in the shadow of the head so thats why its darker, I was trying to make the color slightly darker >.<

thx

and the face did kinda look messed up and I was trying to make it look like the neck was kinda in the shadow of the head so thats why its darker, I was trying to make the color slightly darker >.<

 

I thought it looked fine. I got ya on the neck shadow thing, I see alot of people do that trick(cept for myself:p). If I tried drawing Aqua, well...Lets just say she wouldn't look like herself(I don't do females very goodxD). You going to draw Ven and Terra to?

I can finally! draw Ven but idk about Terra I'll have to try. I'll upload some of my other drawings in a day or 2 if I don't forget >.<

Sounds coolx3 I'll be waiting to see more~ got it memorized?;3 lol. Good luck!

looks cool

The main problems I find are the anatomy, proportioning, and perspective. Aqua's arm is essentially just a straight line. You can't really see where her arm joins with the rest of the body, and it needs to be higher. The smile should be a little further to the left. As for proportioning, it's just her boob. Aqua's definitely not as flatchested as that, so it wouldn't hurt to increase the size of them. For the perspective, Eraqus symbol from the side view should be flat, yet we're seeing a lot more than we're supposed to. The wayfinder should be getting smaller on the left side, since she's holding it in her palm, which isn't facing the camera.

 

/critique.