This is an essay written by a 10 year old and got "The best essay that beaten 12 year olds" or something like that
That morning, the morning the week. The weather is cold enough to reach the freezing temperature. That is why I am not a bath tub because the water in the tub became ice and the water in the pipe was frozen. That morning I had breakfast with my family in the camp-fire for because we can't stand the cold. After that, my mother asked me to accompany her to the market. But I do not want to.
After my mother poked my belly with a fork several times, I agreed to follow her. We walked as far as 120 kilometres because the market was located 128 miles from home. Another 8 kilometers to the market I saw a lorry with a speed of a bullet coming from behind.
He knocked my mother. My mother was thrown into the ravine. She shouted "Adoi!". Then my mother was up again and chase the truck. I was also running in the back of my mother because I'm afraid my mother will be knocked by the truck again. The lorry driver saw us catching up. He was accelerating faster than the speed of light. We are forced to expected to run twice the speed of light. My mother caught front wheels of the lorry. The lorry skidded and hit the road divider and then collided with a ferry. The ferry split in two.
More than 100 passengers on the ferry died. The ferry driver was very angry. He was turned into Ultraman and fired the truck driver. The lorry driver hit the special button in his truck and the truck turned into a Transformer robot. They fought in the air. My mother is not satisfied. She went and rent a helicopter from Genting Highlands and flew it to the accident site. She knocked the ferry that had transformed into Ultraman.
The ferry driver was shocked and to turned back to his original form, hit the road and crashed. The ferry was broken. The lorry driver was afraid after seeing the incident. He apologized to my mother. He wanted to shake hands with my mother. But my mother was still angry. She tilted the helicopter and cut off the hands of the driver with the helicopter propeller. The lorry driver shouted "Adoi ..!" and fell to the ground. Mother sent the helicopter back to Genting Highlands. When she returned to the scene, she continued to hit the truck driver with her handbag as he scolded the driver of the lorry in English language.
The lorry driver was unable to answer because my mother was speaking the language of western people. Then the truck driver died. Not long after the police car arrived. She made a report to the headquarters police about the horrific accident. All police officers in the police office was shocked and died. People swarmed the scene and wanted to know what had happened. Police on duty tried to disperse the people by shouting the story at the loudspeakers. The public was shocked and everyone died.
After that, my mother took me to the market to prevent more people from dying. In the market, my mother told the incident to the butcher. Butchers and dealers nearby who heard the story was all shocked to death. Me and my mother kept running back to the house. Because we are too tired, we died at home. Those were the most horrific accidents I've ever seen before I died.
...The original Malay version was so much more better
Okay this is translated from Malay to English
This is an essay written by a 10 year old and got "The best essay that beaten 12 year olds" or something like that
That morning, the morning the week. The weather is cold enough to reach the freezing temperature. That is why I am not a bath tub because the water in the tub became ice and the water in the pipe was frozen. That morning I had breakfast with my family in the camp-fire for because we can't stand the cold. After that, my mother asked me to accompany her to the market. But I do not want to.
After my mother poked my belly with a fork several times, I agreed to follow her. We walked as far as 120 kilometres because the market was located 128 miles from home. Another 8 kilometers to the market I saw a lorry with a speed of a bullet coming from behind.
He knocked my mother. My mother was thrown into the ravine. She shouted "Adoi!". Then my mother was up again and chase the truck. I was also running in the back of my mother because I'm afraid my mother will be knocked by the truck again. The lorry driver saw us catching up. He was accelerating faster than the speed of light. We are forced to expected to run twice the speed of light. My mother caught front wheels of the lorry. The lorry skidded and hit the road divider and then collided with a ferry. The ferry split in two.
More than 100 passengers on the ferry died. The ferry driver was very angry. He was turned into Ultraman and fired the truck driver. The lorry driver hit the special button in his truck and the truck turned into a Transformer robot. They fought in the air. My mother is not satisfied. She went and rent a helicopter from Genting Highlands and flew it to the accident site. She knocked the ferry that had transformed into Ultraman.
The ferry driver was shocked and to turned back to his original form, hit the road and crashed. The ferry was broken. The lorry driver was afraid after seeing the incident. He apologized to my mother. He wanted to shake hands with my mother. But my mother was still angry. She tilted the helicopter and cut off the hands of the driver with the helicopter propeller. The lorry driver shouted "Adoi ..!" and fell to the ground. Mother sent the helicopter back to Genting Highlands. When she returned to the scene, she continued to hit the truck driver with her handbag as he scolded the driver of the lorry in English language.
The lorry driver was unable to answer because my mother was speaking the language of western people. Then the truck driver died. Not long after the police car arrived. She made a report to the headquarters police about the horrific accident. All police officers in the police office was shocked and died. People swarmed the scene and wanted to know what had happened. Police on duty tried to disperse the people by shouting the story at the loudspeakers. The public was shocked and everyone died.
After that, my mother took me to the market to prevent more people from dying. In the market, my mother told the incident to the butcher. Butchers and dealers nearby who heard the story was all shocked to death. Me and my mother kept running back to the house. Because we are too tired, we died at home. Those were the most horrific accidents I've ever seen before I died.
...The original Malay version was so much more better