November 25, 201014 yr Author Thanks Chapter 1 My name's Jim. Am I a troubled kid? Sure, you can say that. I'm not able to pay attention to what I'm supposed to be focusing on. I think my parents told me that I had attention deficit hyperactive disorder or something like that. I was born on Destiny Islands and I've been raised there ever since. There was this couple who could wield this weapon. They told me it was called a keyblade. I think that the people on the Islands lived right next to us. They lived in this weird old shack, while we stayed at a regular old cabin. I think that the husband was called Zora? Sora? Bora? Something like that. The wife's name was Kairi I think. I don't remember every detail. They died when I was around 14, the day that changed everything. When I went to the school, at 12 years old on the Islands, I was pretty much flunking. I had a F in Math, I was never good at adding and all of that mumbo jumbo, I was having a F- in History, a C- in Chemistry, and... well you get the idea. All my class mates were idiots! They were probably getting F's as well. There were only two really awesome people, who were my best friends: Jake and Tony. A bunch of weird things happened to me. I could start this story anytime I wanted to, just to prove how bad my life was, but I guess that the day when everything changed was when I was 14. The day that my neighbors died: Kairi and Sora (or whatever their names were)
November 25, 201014 yr Wow, Just WOW. Very very nice. I love the story, how original it is. This is written extremely well. Keep it up
November 26, 201014 yr Author Chapter 2: So yeah, I turned 14, yeah, you think that I had a good birthday right? WRONG!!!!!!!!!!! When I woke up that day, my parents were glaring at me, so I thought: Crap! Did they find out that I ate all of the Kit Kats??? Well... I made myself my own breakfasts. My parents didn't even say anything to me, while I was eating breakfast. Isn't that heartless or what? I said bye to my parents and left for school. I saw someone's body on the floor and another person's body on the floor. I stopped immediately and checked their pulses. They were dead. I turned their bodies around: man were they heavy! I looked at their bodies and with horror I realized who it was. My neighbors, Sora and Kairi were dead! I looked at their bodies. There was no blood. They were only 30 so it was very unlikely for them to have a heart attack. They told me they were immume to diseases. I ran over to their house and I saw a note on there and it said "To Jim" I started reading it. "Dear Jim" You are blessed. You are about to become a keyblade master. Do not be surprised of our death. We must give up our blood to the Master of Death if we can give you our keyblade. Go upstairs and find the weapon that we always carry around. Creatures will attack you as soon as you get out of our house so beware Miss you, Sora and Kairi Once I finished reading the note, I felt as if a balloon popped in my mouth. I was so deflated. I went to their house and went upstairs. I saw the weapon that Sora and Kairi were always carrying. There were two of them. Sora's weapon was more of my fit then Kairi's. I went downstairs to that there was another note. It was to a different girl. I didn't have time reading it, so I ran out of the cabin and as soon as I went outside, creatures started to attack me.
