Its unfinished though.

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Criticism is welcomed.

 

Oh, and should I finish it, or not?

yh u should i mean its way better than my ones lol

The timing goes well with the beats, and the overall message is cut clear (even though it is unfinished)

 

Roxas = Ven

 

Good job

nice timing, just one thing, im think that when making amvs or gmvs u should try not to use words like just throw in words like how u put "how to save a life" or "step one". i think that amvs/gmvs should speak for themselves, but besides that cool ^_^ u should finish it ^_^

the words are fine, but you might want to change the font of the last words since they're unreadable and look odd. thats my opinion though.

i love it. please finish; it's amazing and i want to see the rest. <3

I had my moment of RoxasXVen fangirlism. >.>

I'd love to see the rest of this!

It is great! But mabye some more color? Idk o thought it was going to go to color when the song picks up but it didn't. But it looks great and continue! and when be runs through twi town the job sign is colored

and when be runs through twi town the job sign is colored

 

I know right? That's one of my favorite parts!

It is great! But mabye some more color? Idk o thought it was going to go to color when the song picks up but it didn't. But it looks great and continue! and when be runs through twi town the job sign is colored

 

Its only suppost to be bluish colors colored. It makes it seem kinda sadder that way. The sign is colored because it just wouldn't stay grey ._.

 

@Cella

I can't find a good font to use for some reason. Maybe I'm just really picky >_<