..before i see that way back home.. say that u never forget me tell me that so il know i have a friend i can go back to i just want to know u be there for me cuz i don't have anthing but u i see the way back to home u see the way back to town il be here waiting il be there for u and u be there for me

u see the way to the town u see my hearts wen i leave it will break in two and il say goodbye and il look at sky

u see the way back and il be happy and i know u be ther for me

il be there for u forever u know il be there but we r soo far away

and il pray for some day we meet.

 

i know it sucks sorry

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YA NO

I'm not really sure if this is a poem or not. The format makes me feel like it's a short story but the theme and what it says (from what I can actually understand) seems more like poetry. Not too terrible, considering your age, but when writing, you have to use spellcheck, no matter what. Don't use 'u' for 'you' and don't forget to capitalize what you need to and ect. If you're going to write also, you must be willing to take criticism and not get offended when some tells you what to fix, which in this, you need to fix the formatting and the spelling.

I was always told that when you write, you want people to take you seriously. One part of that is if the person reading your writing can understand your words. That... really isn't possible in this case. Mostly because of your spelling. If you want people to take your writing seriously, then they're going to stop reading it if they see writing mistakes constantly throughout your piece. Try using spell check, or proof read your work yourself. Try not to abbreviate simple words such as "you" for "u" or "because" for "cuz". Sure, you're ten years old, but eventually you're going to learn to spell correctly.