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Lexi's Paper of Reasons of Why She Believes What She Believes is True

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DISCLAIMER: Please do not start an argument over this. These are my views, and are for a paper I am handing in a school. Criticism on only how the paper is written (grammar, spelling, ect.) is all I want help with.

 

The paper isn't complete yet, and isn't due for another week, so I want some early help, just to be sure the final product is good~

 

Nowadays, there is a lot of argument on the "real truth" of what happens after death. I believe that there is an almighty God who lives in Heaven, watching over us and waiting to welcome us into Heaven with him. I have divided this paper in a few sub-headings to define my points.

 

How we know God is real:

 

The world is so complex, isn't it? Beautiful and absolutely perfect--I mean, the actual Earth is so precise. It's exactly the right size, with exactly the right amount of water and nessecary gases, and the right distance from the sun.

 

Saying that this happened on its own is fairly impossible. The Big Bang Theory suggests that the world came from particles that exploded, and ended up as our modern day universe. Riddle me this: where did those particles come from? No matter how you answer, eventually you won't have an answer any more. Those particles, according to atheism, just popped out of thin air.

 

One atheistic scientist said this: "The Universe flashed into being, and we cannot find out what caused that to happen." Summed up, Robert Jastrow is saying that the only possible way the universe could exist without a God, is if it magically appeared out of thin air. That's like saying we have cities, because they appeared out of thin air. No, they did not; hard-working builders had to create them. Something had to make them real.

 

Another reason why I know God is real is that we have a conscience. If there is no God, then there is no "right" or "wrong". That means it is perfectly okay to rape, kill, and torture people, and that there is no need for law enforcement, jails, or even the actual laws. If there was no God, then the world would be a place of chaos.

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You have a lot of really good points, especially in the first couple of paragraphs. The only part that I would work on is the last paragraph; it needs a bit more explanation. How is God our conscience? How does help us determine what is right or wrong? etc. etc. etc.

Other than that, great job and good luck on the rest of the essay. (:

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Thanks, Demmy. (:

Yeah, that part's not entirely done yet. ^^;

Thanks! <3

-Trying to hold back personal opinion on subject- I think it is very well written. Flows smoothly, good language used, use of quotes. I particularly like the second last paragraph, good analogy.

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