Recap from My Character Designs (http://kh13.com/forum/topic/20530-my-character-designs-8/):

 

Basically the story is about some kids have their pets can turn into monsters so they go to an adventure to defeat evil force

 

Sorry it's rough, this was made in about 4-5 hours only and supposedly made for colors to distinguish things but I didn't have time to Usual real world thing, exam coming up

I plan to make the finer version afterwards.

For those who have trained eyes to see beyond all that, or used to read 'name' (manga sketch) please comment. That'll be used in making the complete version. Thanks!

WARNING: Heavy bw killer (loong spoiler contents)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

COntinued... 8P

Me: Well, I'd work on the form and details

Me: just make it alot less messier

Me: then if you have time, it's always good to color.

Me: if you make the lineart and the details more clear, it's easier to tell whats going on

Me: and try typing it out instead of handwritting it

Me: Because it's either shading or coloring

Me: both, when done correctly, are helpful so people can help distinguish backgrounds and details

Me: the quality of the lineart just makes the thing look quite rushed, so you need to work on it

yeay! i love your style it seems wet.. no no.. flows your lines are flowoing but precize ands neet they look verry fluid and relaxed i love the story