Posted June 25, 201114 yr How can I sleep When I know I'll just dream of you Of you and me Of what could be Of what won't be Of what I want us To be That won't be? How can I sleep When I know You'll just brush off The feelings That I set free By just saying "Aww that's cute" or "Aww that's sweet," Instead of telling me What you really think Of me Of my feelings Of my spirit Of my heart? How can I sleep When you just Sit there Seeming to enjoy this Enjoying me Being hurt? You say you don't Want to hurt me But you hurt me Still How can I sleep When you Won't tell me How you feel About me?
June 25, 201114 yr Author If any of you guys can figure out how I can turn this into a song....I'll be your best friend, and I'll LUV you forever
June 25, 201114 yr I would say maybe this would be a slow song and have a slow guitar going with the lyrics and at the intervals have a slow sad violin
June 25, 201114 yr Author I would say maybe this would be a slow song and have a slow guitar going with the lyrics and at the intervals have a slow sad violin Ok....that's a good idea....thanks
June 28, 201114 yr Author http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=4bsXRqI1WbI Unrelated, but this is the first thing I thought of when I saw the title. WOW!......I LUV JESSE MCARTNEY!
July 26, 201114 yr I would say maybe this would be a slow song and have a slow guitar going with the lyrics and at the intervals have a slow sad violin You are right... But.... Start it with piano thats better then slowly bring guitar and then start to sing... maybe if you like to make it POP music bring Drums and if pop-rock bring drums with electric guitar... HEY some thing goes in my mind right now I MAY CAN MAKE YOU A SONG... I will send you a massage if I could make the song...
August 3, 201114 yr Author You are right... But.... Start it with piano thats better then slowly bring guitar and then start to sing... maybe if you like to make it POP music bring Drums and if pop-rock bring drums with electric guitar... HEY some thing goes in my mind right now I MAY CAN MAKE YOU A SONG... I will send you a massage if I could make the song... Okay.....LOVE IT.....DO IT......U'll B My Best Friend
August 4, 201114 yr You are right... But.... Start it with piano thats better then slowly bring guitar and then start to sing... maybe if you like to make it POP music bring Drums and if pop-rock bring drums with electric guitar... HEY some thing goes in my mind right now I MAY CAN MAKE YOU A SONG... I will send you a massage if I could make the song... Then I would be on the drums since it's what I do for a living
August 4, 201114 yr Author Hey Thnxs Guys.....and Gals........I REALLY like Y'alls Ideas <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3 xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox Thanks ALOT
How can I sleep
When I know
I'll just dream of you
Of you and me
Of what could be
Of what won't be
Of what I want us
To be
That won't be?
How can I sleep
When I know
You'll just brush off
The feelings
That I set free
By just saying
"Aww that's cute" or
"Aww that's sweet,"
Instead of telling me
What you really think
Of me
Of my feelings
Of my spirit
Of my heart?
How can I sleep
When you just
Sit there
Seeming to enjoy this
Enjoying me
Being hurt?
You say you don't
Want to hurt me
But you hurt me
Still
How can I sleep
When you
Won't tell me
How you feel
About me?