Posted October 18, 201114 yr Who do i see. Looking at me. With brown eyes. And brown hair. A smile that is fake A word that she wish she said. A song she wish she sang. Who is she? Turn back a few year ago. A girl with. Blue eyes. Blond long hair. A smile that is fake. She did something. She wish she never did. But she didn't want to do it. But now she fixing that. She doin her best. And look at that. She help the boy she hurted. Now back to the another girl. She shows a fake smile. Every day. She just wanted to look like. Miley cyrus. Sing like Demi lovato. And have hair like Taylor Swift. She wanted to make her family happy. She had one dream. She wanted to sing. As much as she can. But as time went by.. That dream.. Became nothing but a lost one. A lost dream. I reach for the girl with the brown eyes and brown hair. Then I see..That the girl..Was no longer then. That girl..Is gone? No can't be. She just.. Out there.. Looking for her self.. I'm sure..She'll come back. I had nothing to do.And this was made Hope you liked it. Have a nice day.
October 18, 201114 yr I agree with rikunobodyxiii! http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/happy.png
October 18, 201114 yr Edited the grammar a bit for a bit easier reading and edited a few words in to make a bit more sense. Who do I see? Looking at me? With the brown eyes. And the brown hair. A smile that is fake A word that she wish she said. A song she wish she sang. Who is she? Turn back a few years ago. A girl with Blue eyes. Blond long hair. A smile that is fake. She did something. She wish she never did. But she didn't want to do it. But now she is trying to fix that. She's doing her best. And now she's doing different. She helps the boy that she hurt. Now back to the other girl. She shows a fake smile. Every day. She just wanted to look like: Miley Cyrus. Sing like Demi Lovato. And have hair like Taylor Swift. She wanted to make her family happy. She had one dream. She wanted to sing. As much as she can. But as time went by... That dream.. Became nothing but a lost one. A lost dream. I reach for the girl with the brown eyes and brown hair. Then I see..that girl...is not there. That girl..is she gone? It can't be. She's just... Out there... Looking for her true self... She'll come back. I know it.
October 18, 201114 yr Author Edited the grammar a bit for a bit easier reading and edited a few words in to make a bit more sense. Who do I see? Looking at me? With the brown eyes. And the brown hair. A smile that is fake A word that she wish she said. A song she wish she sang. Who is she? Turn back a few years ago. A girl with Blue eyes. Blond long hair. A smile that is fake. She did something. She wish she never did. But she didn't want to do it. But now she is trying to fix that. She's doing her best. And now she's doing different. She helps the boy that she hurt. Now back to the other girl. She shows a fake smile. Every day. She just wanted to look like: Miley Cyrus. Sing like Demi Lovato. And have hair like Taylor Swift. She wanted to make her family happy. She had one dream. She wanted to sing. As much as she can. But as time went by... That dream.. Became nothing but a lost one. A lost dream. I reach for the girl with the brown eyes and brown hair. Then I see..that girl...is not there. That girl..is she gone? It can't be. She's just... Out there... Looking for her true self... She'll come back. I know it. Thanks for helping but.ASK! Me before you go and fix my grammer Thank you
October 18, 201114 yr Oh, lol, sorry. I just love fixing grammar and spelling. I won the spelling bee last year and I want to win it again.
Who do i see.
Looking at me.
With brown eyes.
And brown hair.
A smile that is fake
A word that she wish she said.
A song she wish she sang.
Who is she?
Turn back a few year ago.
A girl with.
Blue eyes.
Blond long hair.
A smile that is fake.
She did something.
She wish she never did.
But she didn't want to do it.
But now she fixing that.
She doin her best.
And look at that.
She help the boy she hurted.
Now back to the another girl.
She shows a fake smile.
Every day.
She just wanted to look like.
Miley cyrus.
Sing like Demi lovato.
And have hair like Taylor Swift.
She wanted to make her family happy.
She had one dream.
She wanted to sing.
As much as she can.
But as time went by..
That dream..
Became nothing but a lost one.
A lost dream.
I reach for the girl with the brown eyes and brown hair.
Then I see..That the girl..Was no longer then.
That girl..Is gone?
No can't be.
She just..
Out there..
Looking for her self..
I'm sure..She'll come back.
I had nothing to do.And this was made
Hope you liked it.
Have a nice day.