As the description says, I have a new fanfiction and it's about Terra and Aqua. It can be found here: http://denizenoftwil...erful-266195988

 

Here's a brief summary: "Ven knew without a doubt that if it all wasn't a game to them, that they would be something wondeful together. But for them, someone always had to win. And Aqua always resorted to nastiness."

 

The story of Terra and Aqua's struggle as rivals, and how it dictates their lives. Eventually it leads them to where they need to be.

 

Fluff, humor, and angst.

 

T rating, I suppose.

 

Also, this story was hugely inspired by Subtlynice on fanfiction. This story wouldn't exist if it weren't for her Harry Potter story about Scorpius Malfoy and Rose Weasley. It's entitled "It's All Fun And Games". If you like Harry Potter, I highly reccomend it.

 

Enjoy.

 

If/when you want to find my story on fanfiction (after I post it) I'm the author eolhcsullivan452 on there.

This story is brilliant. You capture the characters' personalities perfectly and I was seriously engaged while reading it. I also love the background information you had on some of the characters. Keep it up! http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/happy.png

This story is brilliant. You capture the characters' personalities perfectly and I was seriously engaged while reading it. I also love the background information you had on some of the characters. Keep it up! http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/happy.png

 

Oh my gosh, thank you! I'm so glad you liked it so much, and thought to tell me so. This is one of the most insightful reviews I've ever gotten. Thank you. It's so helpful! I shall try to continue to write like that.

 

Thanks again!

 

-Bows-

Oh my gosh, thank you! I'm so glad you liked it so much, and thought to tell me so. This is one of the most insightful reviews I've ever gotten. Thank you. It's so helpful! I shall try to continue to write like that.

 

Thanks again!

 

-Bows-

 

You're welcome. I don't usually read or write Kingdom Hearts fanfiction (because of the ones I found were Alternate Universe or/and set in high school and quite frankly sucked) but I felt curious to see what KH13 offered and your Terra and Aqua Story was the best one I found. I used to review and write fanfiction myself so I'd usually give insightful reviews to writers' stories. I think your story is the first fanfiction and best fanfiction I've reviewed for a year so far.

You're welcome. I don't usually read or write Kingdom Hearts fanfiction (because of the ones I found were Alternate Universe or/and set in high school and quite frankly sucked) but I felt curious to see what KH13 offered and your Terra and Aqua Story was the best one I found. I used to review and write fanfiction myself so I'd usually give insightful reviews to writers' stories. I think your story is the first fanfiction and best fanfiction I've reviewed for a year so far.

 

Oh, wow! I'm speechless. Thank you so much for your kind words! And I'm glad you liked it so much! It's my dream to become a published author. I'm actually doing NaNoWriMo again, so reviews like this mean the world to me. Ones that tell me what I've done right, and what I can improve on. So I can't thank you enough!

 

And I try to leave helpful reviews on things, too. LOL. I leave really long reviews, but I never say anything mean. I suppose I could tell someone what they can improve on. But I don't know, I know other people will do that. And people aren't as nice these days, so I guess I like my review to be completely kind. That way they can always look at that one review and know they're a good writer when their doubts surface.

 

Yeah... the KH fanfictions sometimes leave a lot to be desired. I usually try to stay in-universe. Otherwise, I don't really see it as KH. Otherwise, it's not what I love and want to read. If you're going to do AU, either write an original novel, or pick a fandom where your story idea fits better. At least that's my two cents.

 

Thanks again!