(This poem actually made me cry)

 

My name is Kelly, I am three

My eyes are swallen I cannot see'

 

I must be stupid, I must be bad,

What else could have made my daddy so mad?

I wish I were better, I wish I

Werent ugly. Then mabe my

Mommy, would still want to hug me.

I cant do a wrong, I cant speak at all,

or else Im locked up all day long.

When im awake im all alone, The

house is dark, my folks arent home,

when my mommy does come home

ill try and be nice, so mabe ill just

get one whipping one night. I just

Heared a car, my daddy is back, From

Charlies Bar, I heared him curse, my

name is called. I press myself,

Against the wall, I try to hide, from

his evil eyes, im so afraid now, I

start to cry, he finds me weeping,

calls me ugly words, he says its my

fault. He slaps me and hit me more,

I finally got free, and run to the door,

He already locked it, and I start to

brawl, He takes me, and throws me,

hard against , I fall to the

floor. with my bones nearly broken,

and my daddy continues with more

bad words spoken, "Im sorry!" I

scream, but its now much too late, his

face has been twisted, into an

imaginable shape, The hurt and the

pain, again and again, Oh please God

have mercy, Oh please let it end! And

he finally stops, and heads for the

door, wile I stay motionless,

sprawled on the floor, My name is

Kelly, I am three, Tonite my daddy

Murdered me.

My best friend read this for oral reading and got first place. It's very powerful. But I believe the name was Sarah I think? Not sure.

I thought the name was amber lol

:blink: I would shed a tear if my sister were not in the room.

...This made a tear fall in my photoshop class..the girl next to me asked what's wrong...she shed a tear too..

Anyone like it?

-eyes wide and crying- that is so familier...my best friend read me that and he told me it reminded him of when his sis was killed by his father.......

Can I use this for a writing contest at school? This...made me sad.

Can I use this for a writing contest at school? This...made me sad.

 

Sure

*cries* that's...so..sad...

Can I use this for a writing contest at school? This...made me sad.

 

But it's not your own work.. ._.

 

This is horrible. I just started crying. It's terrible and what's even worse is that it's sometimes the case.

But it's not your own work.. ._.

 

This is horrible. I just started crying. It's terrible and what's even worse is that it's sometimes the case.

 

I know! The contest is finding the best written passage that isn't your own. ._.

I know! The contest is finding the best written passage that isn't your own. ._.

 

Oh. Weird contest. Never heard of anything like that before, all my school writing contests expect you to make something of your own.

Oh. Weird contest. Never heard of anything like that before, all my school writing contests expect you to make something of your own.

 

Not my school.

And the contest is over anyway. My friend Justin won.