hi everyone i'm new, and i finally figuered out how to make thread. i have written some poems about my favorite characters from KH, and i decided to post them here. hope you like them!

 

 

AXEL

 

i'm not who i once was. i used to be weak, i used to feel things. i used to laugh, love, get angry, get upset, get scared. but now, i fell notohing. who i once was, was softer, and sweeter. i sorta feel now, but it's only a hoax, only a lie. i've got two freinds, but they don't matter. one left, one died. i'm all alone, again. who i once was, was a thief, and a liar, but he still had good heart. he,he, he still had a heart at all. i sometimes wonder, if i could go back to being who i was, but i din't need to be, i don't want to be. who i was, is gone,dead. just like his freinds, just like mine. i'm not who i once was, but i don't care. i think.

ROXAS

 

i hope these moments nver end. sitting on the clocktower, eating ice cream. picking on eachother, watching the sun go down. lately though, i've been having these weird dreams. xion ran away, axel doesn't speak to me. i wonder, if i left, would xion return, would axel finally talk to me? i hear a voice, it's xion! i guesss i was daydreaming again. still i hope, that these moments, i hope they never end.

 

XION

 

what would it take, for me to be like you roxas? saix said i'm nothing more than a pupet. but you and axel, you actually seem to care. i still wonder though, if i ran awat with you and axel, would it just be the three of us, or would it be something better? i wish i knew, but what would it take for me to be like you?

 

RIKU

 

after all i've done to you, you still want to trust me? are you insane? i'm EVIL you hear? i suggest that you leave, just get outta here! i wanna go home, i wanna be free. but i cant', not the way i am now. you've seen what i've done. i walk in the dark. soon you'll have to realize, deep down in your heart, i'm not good for you. you're not good for me. i wish you saw your "freind" the way i see me. after all i've done, i just can't believe, a person like you, woul still be friends with me.

namine'

 

i'm a harmless shadow. i watch from the background.no one notices me, when they turn around. i speak in a whisper. people think i'm fragile and weak. but i'm not, never have been, and never will be. i had to take apart some things. but now, i'm putting them back. my time is up, the day has come, i go back to being a harmless shadow. but i won't dissapear, i won't go away. i'm a harmless shadow, but don't cross me, or hurt my freinds, OR ELSE.

 

KAIRI

 

don't leave me behind! i'm strong enough to fight! you would not believe how much i've missed you! deep down in my soul, i nkow, i just know i'm meant to help you. you can't just leave me behind, i'll follow you! i'll tag along! you won't get rid of me. i want to see you, to fell your embrace. you complete me, and that is something time can never erase.don't leave me behind, 'cause i'll flow you, even to my own demise.

 

 

sorry i haven't posted anything about sora yet, but keep checking, 'cause i'll have him, and some others too

Cute. But do you want to post them in separate lines for each poem? And, I know you don't really care about capitalizations or spelling too much, but if you quickly go through and fix those minor things, trust me when I say that these will look a WHOLE LOT better.

 

Besides. Typing/writing properly is a useful skill. ^^

 

I like your freestyle, by the way. Just that the "OR ELSE" at the end of Naminé's poem is just...not Naminé. x3 You could put something like "Or I'll be back."

 

By the way, who is the "you," Riku keeps talking about in the poem you wrote for him? Like I'm trying to figure out if he means Sora, or someone else.

Pretty good poems, but I really think you should work on your grammar a bit more, cuz if you won't some things will come out with no sense. Like this one I noticed:

 

but now I don't fell nothing

 

I'm pretty sure you wanted to write feel (sensing emotions) and not fell ( past form of falling down ).

 

But that's ok. Believe me, if you put enough effort in writing, amazing things can come out. And don't give up on those mistakes just keep going. Even I made a lot of mistakes at first, but with a lot of hard work I managed to write a lot of stories.

 

So, never give up just keep going!

thanks for the comments, i was hoping somebody would finally notice, and even though i did mess up thanks fro breaking it to me gentyl, instead of just saying i stink! and as for you exlon, riku is talking about sora. he means that he can't believe sora still wants to trust him. but once again, thanks for the nice crituqes! and please come back soon, 'cause i'll have one for sora, and one about ansem

hi everybody, here's the new poems i promised! hope you like them!

 

SORA

 

ecscuse me please, i think those people over theree think i'm a keyblade master or something. i admit i'd like to believe them, but i don't know if i should. what if they've got it wrong? maybe i'm not supposed to save the world. all i want is to find kairi, and riku. then the three of us can go home. before i go though, i have just one question, if i'm the keyblade master, then where did i learn to use this keyblade?

 

 

ANSEM [as in ansem the wise, the good ansem]

 

my people are very precious to me. this town, thier lives, all need to be protected. the beautiful town over which i rule, is quite a properous one. however, lately there has been strange, and dangerous things happening. glimpses of the darkness, and evil have been seen. i believe the the darkness is growing. i must find a way to protect what remains of the light. for the darkness is growing stronger, and my people are growing weaker.

 

 

VENTUS

 

as i'm lying here in bed, i hold my wayfinder in my hand. aqua gave us these tonight, under the star's twinkling light. terra's is orange, aqua's is blue, mine is green, i love it too. she said they're supposed to be made of sea-shells. but i still think it counts. still i wonder, if we if we were ever forced appart, would the wayfinders work? are they really good-luck charms?

 

TERRA

 

can darkness ever truly be tamed? or is it a force, with no real name? if it could, i wouldn't be hearing this leacture right now. i know master eraqus, i must rid myself of the darkness inside. i can't though, i wish i could. maybe, instead of killing the darkness, i ca bury it inside. i can try to hold it in. maybe i'll sucseed, and the darkness will just go away. can i hold this darkness in? or will it consime me?

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