Posted April 13, 201213 yr Not now. Not now. Don't leave me now. Not here. Not here. I need beside me. I need you. I need you. Don't leave me. Alone.All alone... You where there. When nobody else was.Nobody else was. Luan wouldn't care. Only you only you. Then you left. Why boy? Why boy? Tell me. Are you alright. Now tell me.Now tell me. Why would you walk away. Why would you leave. Without saying goodbye. Long story. Wrote this hoped you liked?
April 13, 201213 yr Curious, is the repeated lines supposed to be a chorus or just repeated lines? Other than that I thought it wasn't half bad. :]
April 13, 201213 yr Author Curious, is the repeated lines supposed to be a chorus or just repeated lines? Other than that I thought it wasn't half bad. :] Chorus. I'm not good at making songs lol.Thank you.
April 13, 201213 yr This is good This is good Very good Its alright, but needs more swag :-D Get yo Swag on 4Everbee =D Edited April 13, 201213 yr by KeybladeWielder_
April 13, 201213 yr Author Its alright, but needs more swag :-D I got no swag so... Yea Perfect for the mood I'm in. It's great. Now you need someone to petform it. Lol thanks. This is good This is good Very good Thank you very much.Very much
Not now.
Not now.
Don't leave me now.
Not here.
Not here.
I need beside me.
I need you.
I need you.
Don't leave me.
Alone.
All alone...
You where there.
When nobody else was.
Nobody else was.
Luan wouldn't care.
Only you only you.
Then you left.
Why boy?
Why boy?
Tell me.
Are you alright.
Now tell me.
Now tell me.
Why would you walk away.
Why would you leave.
Without saying goodbye.
Long story. Wrote this hoped you liked?