Yay for stereotypical dreams! And if you are asking, then yes, I wrote this poem. I was in a very stressed state and I was sick of everything that I couldn't bear to stay in reality for a second, so I always end up distracted and swimming inside my inner thoughts and fantasies. I sound weird you say? Well, gimme something new, bro!
I am very happy with this poem, I think it's my 4th maybe? I am a beginner at this and I might be bad at it but I won't give up till I ace this
If you have any opinion (Or critique, I need that btw ) or noticed something wrong with it please go on. I don't mind any kind of opinions even if they were negative, I don't like people saying stuff just to make me feel better so be honest
Everyday is the same
The same lame game
Stressing me to the max
Making me ditch reality and relax
Closing my eyes to find
Another world in my mind
A world full of fantasy;
The world of dreams
I sit there on a chair
With wind blowing my hair
On an island looking at the sea
As I climbed a coconut tree
I saw a beautiful rainbow
I jumped to the sky
And flew up high
I touched a cloud
And heard the birds sing aloud
But I knew this won't last long
The sun was going down
I slid on the rainbow with a frown
So I knew my time here is ending
I sat back watching the sun setting
Then I woke up and wished
That the day would end
For me to go back to that place
And escape from the human race
And to release my heart
And forgot everything hard
I will never forget the day
I went there and saw the light ray
I will be back to that world someday
The world of dreams
Yay for stereotypical dreams! And if you are asking, then yes, I wrote this poem. I was in a very stressed state and I was sick of everything that I couldn't bear to stay in reality for a second, so I always end up distracted and swimming inside my inner thoughts and fantasies. I sound weird you say? Well, gimme something new, bro!
I am very happy with this poem, I think it's my 4th maybe? I am a beginner at this and I might be bad at it but I won't give up till I ace this
If you have any opinion (Or critique, I need that btw
) or noticed something wrong with it please go on. I don't mind any kind of opinions even if they were negative, I don't like people saying stuff just to make me feel better so be honest 
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