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KH13 Chronicles : Recoded Retribution (Premium Writing)

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Prologue : A Mysterious Invitation

 

One day,Hazimie return home from school at Friday.....

 

"Man.....can't wait for Summer Vacation tomorrow!"Hazimie said as he excited.then suddenly,while Hazimie almost arrived in home,there was a man in black coat come in front of him."are you Hazimie?"the man said."yes i am,what do you want?"Hazimie answered to man's question."i see....well you see,i heard that you are a member of KH13.com and i think this is for you......well,i better go now...."the man said as he give a disk to him and began to go away from him."hmm....oh well,it's not hurt to try..."Hazimie said as he keep the disk and return home but suddenly the man who was go away from him was disappear with a fade of data.

 

In the next day,Hazimie open the computer after he finished studied.then,he tried to put the disk on the computer to try."let's see.......hmm?what's this.....a strange window?"Hazimie said as he saw a strange window.

 

KH13 PORTAL

 

NAME:

PASSWORD:

 

LOG IN

 

"okay,i'll try...."Hazimie said as he fill out the name and password.as soon as he click the Log In button,the computer screen suddenly black out."huh?strange....why it was black out?"Hazimie said as he check out the computer.suddenly,the computer screen shines with light and it engulfed all over Hazimie's room."what's this light!?AAHH!!"Hazimie scream as the light from the screen has been ended and shutting down but Hazimie is nowhere to be found in his room.

 

Someplace,Hazimie fall down in the black,wide place as if there is no light.then,Hazimie fall to the surface with big shape of circle with the color of green."urgh....owh.....where....am i?.....hey....isn't this....the station of awakening?"Hazimie said as he standing up and examine all of the place and he was at the station of awakening with the picture of Snow White.....

 

to be continued......

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Chapter 12 : Challenge at the Coliseum!

 

Records

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 24

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key

HP : 135

 

Hazimie arrive at the Coliseum from the portal he opens."I made it.....the Olympus Coliseum!"Hazimie said as he amaze that he arrive at the place where all the heroes gathers.Hazimie go inside the Coliseum and he saw Phil standing at the entrance."wow,so.....Phil was exist in this world?.....then again,without him,there's no Coliseum....umm,excuse me?"Hazimie said to Phil."whaddya want,kid?"Phil said."umm,i was wondering.....can i enter the games?"Hazimie said."sorry kid,the games has been close......but,there is a Special Event...."Phil said."what's that?"Hazimie said."it is the Layer Challenge..."Phil said."Layer Challenge?what's that?"Hazimie question again."in this challenge,there are 30 Layers,the ones who will arrive at the 30th layer and defeat the boss,you will officially become a Junior Heroes.....well,some of the Challengers has enter it,so?do you want to enter?"Phil said."hmm....alright then,i'm taking this challenge!"Hazimie said."good,and i have 5 WORDS for you,be careful out there!"Phil said and Hazimie count Phil's words and it was four.then,he forgets it and enters the Layer.

 

On the 1st Layer,Hazimie running around the place to go to the next layer."hmm....where's the next layer....huh?"Hazimie surrounded by a heartless."looks like this is what i call a challenge...."Hazimie said as he summon his keyblade and attack the heartless.after a couple of minutes,Hazimie manage enters at the 5th Layer."phew....finally....man,i dunno why,but.....my back hurts..."Hazimie said as his back hurts and he continue his journey after he rest.when he almost reaches to the next layer,it was blocked by Cerberus all of the sudden.then,Hazimie's mind scan to it.

 

NAME : Cerberus

LEVEL : 25

WEAPON : Claws,Teeths and Darkness

HP : 500

 

"Man,now i have deal with this doggie...."Hazimie said and he summon his Keyblade and attack Cerberus.then,Cerberus attacks using his teeth but Hazimie dodge it and counter it."Take this!Thundaga!"Hazimie cast of Thundaga on Cerberus and it actually works on it.then,Cerberus spit out and attack with balls of flames at Hazimie."Triple Blizzaga!"Hazimie cast of three Blizzaga and has made clash against the Cerberus's flames.then,Cerberus attack with his teeth but Hazimie avoid it by jumped at his head one after another and jumped in the air."Spark Drive!"Hazimie said as he use Spark Drive as he taken out using the final blow with Lightning powers.in the end,Cerberus has been defeated."Alright,i did it!urrh..."Hazimie said as he fall down at the floor because of fatigue."Man.....this is only just the 5th Layer....what will happen if i go further?...."Hazimie said.

 

"The more further you will go,the more you will live in the Underworld.....i assume that you want this answer,no?"D-Tector said as he appear in front of them."umm,have you ever heard of 'knocking before talking'?"Hazimie said."well,there IS no door...."D-Tector."Sigh......well anyway,whaddya want now?"Hazimie said."nothing,just a little plain visit......oh and by the way,you should check out the energy radar.....goodbye for now..."D-Tector said as he disappear by using the corridors of darkness.then,Hazimie check out energy radar from his watchtrix."hmm.....acording to this radar.....there are two Keyblade energy powers.....it must be whether if it's the member.....or a Staff?guess i have to look."Hazimie said as he continue his journey....

 

Records

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 26

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key

HP : 145

 

to be continued.....

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Chapter 13 : Rivalry Challenge

 

 

Records

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 26

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key

HP : 145

 

Hazimie has reach on the 10th Layer and he was fatigue after a couple of minutes defeating the Heartless."man....wish i hope that this will finish fast!let's see....according to my energy radar....it was this Layer..."Hazimie said as he scan using his energy radar from his watchtrix.suddenly,there was a man from above at high place and he jump over the ground in front of him."You!are you here to win this Challenge?"the man said.then,Hazimie scan on this man.

 

NAME : Joemahon1

LEVEL : 27

KEYBLADE : Hero's Crest

HP : 150

 

"(it's Joe.....so he was join this challenge too...)"Hazimie thinking on his mind."if you want to win this challenge.....you have to beat me first....cuz i will win before you!"Joe said as he summon his keyblade."(oh boy....it looks like talking can't solving it.....guess i have to defeat him to make him listen...)"Hazimie done thinking as he summon his keyblade."so,you can use a Keyblade.....alright,Ars Solum!"Joe said as he using a technique and Hazimie defend it."Take this!Ars Arcanum!"Hazimie counter it by using Ars Arcanum and it he successfully attack him.

 

"Alright,Meteor!"Joe said as he cast of Meteor."Man....it looks like he was more like Terra!"Hazimie said as he dodging his Meteor."Alright.....then i have to be like Zack!Hero's Pride!"Hazimie said as he using his keyblade to perform a series of teleporting slash,leaving afterimages behind and Joe was been critical hit."So....do you want a hard way eh?Alright!Omnislash!"Joe said as he using Omnislash."Okay,Hero's Pride!"Hazimie also attack by using Hero's Pride again.they both clash each other with their attack,and in the end,Hazimie wins the match.

 

"Man,i can't beat you.....just who are you,anyway?"Joe said."Hazimie,member of KH13..."Hazimie said."I see....no wonder your strength is far compatible to mine--huh!?"Joe and Hazimie was been surrounded by a couple of Heartless."Man,they come at a good time,huh...."Joe said."well then,Joe!lend me you strength!"Hazimie said as Joe know what he was saying and he agree."Equip!Joemahon1 Style!"Hazimie said as they fuse together and Drive.

 

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 40

MODE : Strike Mode

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key and Hero's Crest

HP : 215

 

"Advance!Strike Mode!"Hazimie said as his clothes turns into Blue Garments with yellow lines designs and have Green Wings on his back."Take this!Hero's Pride!"Hazimie using Hero's Pride as they make them darted off in the air."Alright!Omnislash!"Hazimie said as he ended by using Omnislash.After the battle,they revert to their normal selves."Man,i never thought that i lost and been helped by you....alright,as my defeat,i will join you!"Joe said to Hazimie."really?you mean it?"Hazimie said."Of course!after all,you owe me a Battle..."Joe said."Okay....let's continue after we rest...."Hazimie said.And so,their quarrels has become a co-operation.

 

Records

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 27

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key

HP : 150

 

to be continued....

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Chapter 14 : Let's take out that Titan!

 

Records

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 27

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key

HP : 150

 

Hazimie and Joe has gone many layers and they haven't arrived at the 30th Layer,since he was at the 13th layer."man if this keeps up,who knows if one of us are in danger here..."Hazimie said as they running and find the portal to the next layer with Joe."even if our bodies fatigue,but our hearts still stands!"Joe said as he encourage Hazimie and himself and keep moving forward.when they arrived at 15th Layer,they ended up at a BIG ARENA."this place differents than the others...."Hazimie said."wait....Hazimie,in KH Re Coded,what's the boss on 15th Layer again?"Joe question him as he seriously curious."!?,it was....HUH!?"Hazimie and Joe feel the earthquake and they face an unexpected challenge."As i thought.....ROCK TITAN!"Hazimie said as both of them summon their Keyblade and Hazimie's mind scan on Rock Titan.

 

NAME : Rock Titan

LEVEL : 30

WEAPON : Rock and Strength

HP : 1000

 

"his HP....it's more than i imagine..."Hazimie said as he shivers with almost panic to himself."I know how you feel.....but there's no point but to defeat it by ourselves!Let's Go!"Joe said as the both approaches him."Sonic Blade!"Joe said as he use Sonic Blade at Rock Titan's feet and it tumble down to the ground."Now's your chance,go!"Joe said as Hazimie run at Rock Titan's Arm,approaches to his head."Take this!Fire Edge!"Hazimie said as he attack by using the Fire Edge and it works.suddenly,Rock Titans begins to stand up and grap Joe with his hands."Urgh.....ARGH!"Joe shouts as Rock Titan begins to crush him.

 

"Leave him alone!Strike Raid!"Hazimie throw his keyblade with a spinning attack and attack it's arm and Joe has been release and falling."Alright,Omnislash!"Joe said as he fly off from falling with his one black wings on his back and attack using Omnislash."Take this,Hero's Pride!"Hazimie said as he also attack by using Hero's Pride.they both slash and clash the Titan,leaving many damage to it."FINAL BLOW!ZANTETSUKEN!"they both launching their attacks by using Zantetsuken and in the end,Rock Titan was defeated by struck down with a millions of damage that has been done by them.

 

"Alright,we won!"Hazimie said."see?nothing can defeat us!"Joe said as he encourage Hazimie."oh really?you really have that confidence?what a bold..."D-Tector said as he appears in front of their eyes."D-Tector....what do you want this time?"Hazimie said as they prepare with their battle pose."nothing....just checking whether you're not dead,at least..."D-Tector said."well this is the first time that the villain worry about me..."Hazimie said."And....instead of checking,how bout we just Fighting!"Joe said as he begin to attack D-Tector but the attack didn't affect it because his body can move right through it."I'm sorry for your impatience,but you won't lay a touch on me with that attack..."D-Tector said."COWARD!!"Joe said as he attack him many times but it's just right through it."Please....instead of losing your energy,maybe you should just rest.....after all,there are many challenges awaits besides that Titan.....i'll be looking forward to it..."D-Tector said as he disappear."Damn it,he's such a Coward..."Joe said."leave him be....for our matters,we have to continue to move after break..."Hazimie said as they rest...

 

Records

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 32

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key

HP : 175

 

to be continued....

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Chapter 15 : The King's Challenge

 

Records

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 32

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key

HP : 175

 

Hazimie and Joe continue their fight to the Layer challenges and they arrive at the 20th Layer.Then,they began to search the portal to the next layer."hmm...where is the portal?...hey wait,what's this?"Hazimie check his map radar from his watchtrix,and he saw an energy from this layer."it looks like there's another user...i wonder who it is..."Joe said.suddenly,they were ambush by an unknown guy."Thundaga!"the guy said but Hazimie and Joe evade the attack."another challenger,huh....bring it on!"Joe said as he attack him countless times but it missed and the guy counter it with his keyblade."man,you're tough..."Joe said."you too...."the guy said.Then,Hazimie scan the guy wielding a keyblade.

 

NAME :Keyblade King 12

LEVEL :35

KEYBLADE :Olympia

HP :190

 

"it's Keyblade King 12.....are you here to win the challenge,King?"Hazimie said to King."yes and i want to surpass you two!"King said as he attack Hazimie but he defended by Joe."have you forgot that i'm the one tough cookie?"Joe said as he counter King."Hazimie stand back,this fights between him and me..."Joe said as Hazimie agree."Thunder raid!"King throw his Keyblade with voltage of Thunder."heh,take this!"Joe casting off a meteor and it land with an explosion."you're good....Thunder Dash!"King attacks Joe with Thunder Dash."Oh yeah?Sonic Blade!"Joe counter it and clash off with his Sonic Blade."alright then....Thunder Ray!"King said."Not so that easy to defeat me! Omnislash!"Joe using Omnislash and it comibines with darkness and lightning explosion of this battle.

 

In the end,King has been defeated."I'm sorry....please punish me as my defeat...."King said."Hazimie?"Joe said to Hazimie wanted to say."Okay.....your punishment is.....to make you as our ally..."Hazimie said as King shock and confuse by that conclusion."but.....why?"King said."because....all KH13 Members are my friends....i won't punish you...after all,we're friends right?"Hazimie said and King feels happy and he feels that he was needed."Thank you....from now on,i will help you no matter what the cost is..."King said."me too,friend....me too...."Hazimie said as the three continue to move on...

 

Records

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 32

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key

HP : 175

 

to be continued....

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Chapter 16 : Freeze VS Blaze

 

Records

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 32

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key

HP : 175

 

Hazimie,Joe and King have manage to arrive at the 30th Layer.When they arrive,the area was like a big arena."I think the last boss will be challenging!"Joe said as he excited."You know it was Ice Titan,right?"King said as he spoils him."I know that,that's why we have to succeed,no matter what!i won't be lose to anyone!"Joe said."Umm...aren't you have been beaten by me?"Hazimie said as Joe embarrassed for what he said.Suddenly,there's a huge earthquake as if that there's a giant monster's footsteps sound."Here it comes!"King said as they ready to prepare for anything.Then,some huge ice monster come from arena by stomping the wall of Olympus.Then,Hazimie scan the monster.

 

NAME : Ice Titan

LEVEL : 40

WEAPON : Ice and Claws

HP : 2000

 

"It looks like our battle will be freeze as glacier!"Hazimie said as he and the others summon their Keyblades and attack the Ice Titan."Guys,attack pattern A with fire!"King said as he giving strategies while they attacking."Fire Raid!"Hazimie use Fire Raid on Ice Titan while it use an Ice needle on them but they manage to avoid but it was the Titan itself was been hit by Hazimie's Fire Raid.

 

"I can't learn using fire,but i learn destroying stuff!Meteor!"Joe said as he cast of a Meteor from the sky and attack the Ice Titan and it's working.Then,the Titan use Deep Freeze the whole area and all three of them are frozen.Luckily,King,however,cast Firaga while on frozen state."Okay,take this!Mega Flare!"King said as he cast of a powerful flame at whole area."Now,Hazimie!i lend your strength!"King said as Hazimie agreed."Equip!Keyblade King 12 Style!"Hazimie said as he combine his powers with King.

 

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 45

MODE : Rebuke Mode

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key and Olympia

HP : 240

 

"Advance!Rebuke Mode!"Hazimie said as his clothes become Yellow garments with Golden lines and begin attack Ice Titan."Rebuke Slash!"Hazimie slash the Titan's arm with golden flames."Rebuke Spiral!"Hazimie spins with blistering golden blaze and knock down the Titan in the ground."This is the end of you!"Hazimie said as he jump really high in the air."Chaotic Phoenix Rebuke!"Hazimie said as his body fill with golden flames and becomes a Phoenix and attack the Titan from below.In the end,They manage to defeat the Ice Titan."Yes!I did it!"Hazimie said as he revert back to normal."Man...i thought i could beat that monster...oh well,next time,i will give it my all!"Joe said."Oh,give it up already,how much stamina you have?"Hazimie said."I think he doesn't know about stamina or anything..."King said as they began to laugh except Joe as he tried to argue with King...

 

Records

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 38

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key

HP : 205

 

to be continued...

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Chapter 17 : Storm vs Tornado

 

Records

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 38

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key

HP : 205

 

At the 1st Layer where Hazimie,Joe and King will go back to the Coliseum after the fights between the Ice Titan,something it's not right."This is strange...why the portal through the Coliseum did not open?"King said as he figured out why."Well....let's just say that i'm the Trigger..."D-Tector said as he appears behind them by using the corridor of darkness."I thought that it was you...what do you want this time?"Hazimie said as they begin summon their keyblade."Well...i'm just giving a present...."D-Tector said as he summon a giant heartless known as Behemoth."You could say it was a KEY to go back to the Coliseum,heheh..."D-Tector said as he leaves.Then,Hazimie scan the Behemoth.

 

NAME : Behemoth

LEVEL : 42

WEAPON : Horns and Legs

HP : 2500

 

"Shit....we just defeat the Titan..."Joe said as their condition is low.Suddenly,the Behemoth charge using his horn and create a powerful Thunder in whole area and the three of them got beaten."Damn...at this,rate...we'll screwed..."King said as he try to get up but he can't same as Hazimie and Joe.Suddenly,there was a big Tornado knock down the Behemoth on to the ground.As soon as the Tornado has stop,There a man from the sky and landing it in front of Hazimie and the others."Phew....that was close..."The man said as Hazimie begin to scan him.

 

NAME : IamKingdomhearts1000

LEVEL : 40

KEYBLADE : Guardian Soul

HP : 215

 

"Iam! you're here?"Hazimie said to Iam."Yep,thanks to the Watchtrix given by Arrow.And i assume that you guys need help...and you know what,Hazimie i'll lend you my Strength!"Iam said as Hazimie agrees to."Equip!IamKingdomhearts1000 Style!"Hazimie said as he began emerging his power with Iam.

 

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 50

MODE : Aerial Mode

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key and Guardian Soul

HP : 265

 

"Advance!Aerial Mode!"Hazimie said as his clothes turn into Green Garments with White lines and Hazimie began to fly off in the air."Aero Tornado!"Hazimie cast of the Tornado and make the Behemoth fly off in the air and taking damages."Alright,this is it!X-Wind Raid!"Hazimie said as he throw his two blade and make an Cross Slash to the Behemoth and knock it on the groundand defeated.As soon as Hazimie lands,he revert himself back to normal."Alright!we did it!Hazimie said as Iam,Joe and King happy that it was all over.

 

Then,the portal to the Coliseum has open."Look,the Portal has open,let's go before it close!"King said as they go into the Portal.As soon as Hazimie tries to enter the Portal,D-Tector appears behind him."Well,well...You become stronger than i expected...."D-Tector said."Well yeah....that's what you want it,right?....want me to become stronger so i could face you..."Hazimie said."Maybe....maybe not....indeed,you need to become strong if you want to face me....but it's also a dangerous thing if you ask me..."D-Tector said."What's that supposed to mean?"Hazimie question him."You'll find out soon..."D-Tector said as he disappear by using the corridor of darkness.Then,Hazimie go back and enters the Portal to the Coliseum....

 

Records

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 40

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key

HP : 215

 

to be continued...

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Chapter 18 : A long way to become a Hero

 

Records

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 40

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key

HP : 215

 

After they arrived safely at the Coliseum,Hazimie and the others has officially become a Junior Heroes.Outside,they began to chat each other."Man!i really can't wait to become a true hero instead of Junior..."Joe said as he frowning."Well,i get the feeling you wouldn't if you don't use your minds..."King said as he taunt him."What do you say?Okay,how bout a rematch?one day,i will beat you,anytime!anywhere!"Joe said as he challenges him."Okay,challenge accepted....but not today,i got a business to take care off....the next time we meet,i'm not gonna easy on you..."King said as he began to leave....

 

"Okay,how bout you,Iam?want a rematch with me?"Joe said to Iam."I think i'll pass....anyways,what are you gonna do now,Hazimie?"Iam said to Joe then he turns to Hazimie but Hazimie was lost in thought after he heard D-Tector's words back then."Yo!you heard what Iam said?"Joe said as Hazimie began realized."Oh,sorry....just...i have something to take care of.....well,i think it's i have to explore more worlds then...."Hazimie said as Iam and Joe agree for what he said."Well then,i hope you're safe on your journey..."Iam said as he praise him."Okay,Hazimie!next time,we will have rematch!and don't ever think that you will lose easily on me when the next time we meet!"Joe said as he encouraging him."Yeah....thanks,Iam....and Joe,i have to become strong....and besides,i have a lot of matters to protect..."Hazimie said.

 

Then,Hazimie summon his Keyblade and opens the gate of the Lanes Between."Well,i hope i will see you guys again,bye!"Hazimie said as he run towards the portal and the two of them wave them happily and Hazimie began enters and exploring worlds.Meanwhile,at the arena of the Coliseum,D-Tector stands at the middle of the battle arena."Hmm....it seems that it has according to my plan....but then again,some are doesn't....well,let's see what lies ahead on his journey....after all,i'll be looking forward to it...."D-Tector said as he disappear by using the corridors of darkness....

 

Records

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 40

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key

HP : 215

 

to be continued...

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Chapter 19 : The city of Dessert

 

Records

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 40

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key

HP : 215

 

As soon as Hazimie go out of the portal of the Lanes Between,he arrived at a new world,Agrabah."The city of dessert....i wonder if there is a User of KH13 around here..."Hazimie said as he start looking at the Plaza.As soon as he arrive at the Main Street,he realized something strange on the area."This is weird...this place is quite....TOO quite....huh!?"Hazimie suddenly was surrounded by a couple of heartless of Bandits."Me and my big mouth....oh well,it's better than no one's around..."Hazimie said as he summon his keyblade and began attack the Heartless."Strike Raid!"Hazimie throw his keyblade that turns spiral move and attack the Heartless then return to his."Sonic Blade!"Hazimie charges his power and attack the heartless with full speed.

 

After couple of minutes,Hazimie has defeat some of the heartless at the Plaza and the Main Streets."Phew....things get tighten for sure...i wonder what's going on in this world...."Hazimie wondering to himself."Maybe the atmosphere of the city..."D-Tector said as he appears behind Hazimie's back by using the Corridors of Darkness."It's you again....are you also have something to do with this city?"Hazimie said as he summon his keyblade back and prepare to fight the D-Tector."Maybe....but it such a waste of time to fight against me....after all,there are some times that another one will need you..."D-Tector said as he disappear."another one will need me?....!?,of course!"Hazimie check to his Watchtrix and see a radar that there are two Keyblade energy around the city."Looks like i have to save them AND the city too...it's a tough job,but i can't back out yet..."Hazimie said as he search around the city...

 

At the top of the building at the Palace Gate,D-Tector appear and sit to watch the City."It's such a beautiful city though....but sadly,i'm the one who did all this..."D-Tector said.Then,D-Tector tried to raise his hand and summon his Keyblade but he only summon a Wooden Keyblade."Soon....very soon...."D-Tector said as he revert the wooden keyblade and continue to watch the city...

 

Records

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 42

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key

HP : 225

 

to be continued...

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Chapter 20 : Kinode to the Rescue!

 

Records

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 42

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key

HP : 225

 

As Hazimie examine and search the town,he's at Aladdin's House."Hmm....since Aladdin doesn't here,i guess i need this place as an hideout..."Hazimie said.Then,Hazimie look outside at the house and he saw a couple of heartless at the Alley."Looks like i spot the danger..."Hazimie said as he jump out of the house and land over Plaza and headed to the Alley.

 

When Hazimie arrive,a couple of heartless appear and attack Hazimie but he manage to avoid them."It looks like it was harder than it thought..."Hazimie said as he summon his Keyblade.After couple of minutes,Hazimie defeat some of the heartless but yet it doesn't end."This will be take forever...."Hazimie said as he began to fatigue.Suddenly,a Fat Bandit heartless knock down Hazimie over the wall."Damn....it's too soon to be defeat..."Hazimie said as he try to stand up but he can't.As soon as the Fat Bandit launch a fireball come from his mouth,it was knock down by an unknown figure from the back.Then,Hazimie's mind scan to the figure.

 

NAME : Kinode

LEVEL : 45

KEYBLADE : Three Wishes

HP : 240

 

"Kinode...it was you?"Hazimie said as his eyes began blurry and began to unconscious.Then,when he wakes up,he was at Aladdin's house with Kinode."Kinode....thanks for saving me..."Hazimie said as he thanked him."No problem,after all....it's a good thing that i arrive just in time."Kinode as Hazimie began to stand up."So...what brings you here?"Hazimie asked."Well,to tell you the truth,this City has been cause a serial damages every hour..."Kinode said."What do you mean by 'every hour'?"Hazimie asked again."Well,every hour,there will be huge sandstorm that will envelop the city.After the sandstorm,a heard of heartless will come from the sandstorm.I tried to defeat all the heartless after the sandstorm but then i realized that the sandstorm was been created by a heartless and i think that it still in this city..."Kinode said."I see...well then,we should find one of the heartless that creates the sandstorm....oh wait,how many times left when the storm comes?"Hazimie asked."45 minutes left.!?,there's a couple of heartless at the Bazaar,let's go!"Kinode said as he saw from outside and both of them go to the Bazaar.

 

When they arrive,Hazimie and Kinode are surrounded by a couple of heartless at the Bazaar."Well then,let's get this things ended fast!"Hazimie said as Kinode agree and began to defeat the heartless....

 

Sandstorm countdown - 40 minutes

 

Records

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 43

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key

HP : 230

 

to be continued...

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I'm going to keep this nice and short: grammar.
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I'm going to keep this nice and short: grammar.

 

dang,girl....oh well,thanks for the warning...
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Chapter 21 : Race Against Time!

 

Records

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 43

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key

HP : 230

 

Sandstorm countdown - 33 minutes

 

Hazimie and Kinode defeat the Heartless one by one but yet there's still more coming."Something's not right...how can a herd of heartless in this area be so many?"Hazimie said as he continue attacking."Hazimie!Up there!"Kinode and Hazimie look up and they saw a Pot Centipede heartless crawling through walls."It him!we must defeat it before he brings more heartless to another area!"Kinode said as Hazimie immediately kill all of them by using Thundaga."Alright let's go!"Hazimie jump through walls as Kinode catch up and they go to the Main Streets.As they arrive,they manage to search and surrounded the Centipede.Then,Hazimie's mind scan to the Centipede.

 

NAME : Pot Centipede

LEVEL : 48

WEAPON : Pots and Lightning Voltage

HP : 650

 

"Here goes nothing!Blitz!"Hazimie perform a technique called Blitz and destroy one of the pots from the Centipede.Then,the Centipede begins to attack Hazimie but shield with Aero casting by Kinode."Tornado!"Kinode said as he began to cast Tornado and sent the Centipede fly in the air and receive heavy damage."Now,Hazimie!"Kinode said as Hazimie jump in the air."Firaga!"Hazimie cast off Firaga and all of the Pots from the Centipede has been destroy and land with massive blow."We did it!"Hazimie said as he has landed on the ground and cheer."!?,not quite!look!"Kinode and Hazimie saw that a couple of Pot Spider appear and gather at the Centipede and made it's body back."We must defeat all the Pot Spiders before all of them are gather at the Centipede!"Kinode said as they defeat a couple of Spiders.

 

After couple of minutes,They were outnumbered by several Pot Spiders."If these keeps up,i'll never end!"Hazimie said."I'll help with that!"A man said as he appear right in front of them and cast Thundaga at the whole city.Then,Hazimie's mind scan to the man.

 

NAME : Naroco

LEVEL : 47

KEYBLADE : Wishing Lamp

HP : 250

 

"Naroco!you here!?"Hazimie said as he excited that he was here."Yeah,i'm here alright!just defeat the Centipede,now!"Naroco said."Alright,Kinode!lend me your strength!"Hazimie said as Kinode agreed."Equip!Kinode's Style!"Hazimie said as he fuse his power with Kinode.

 

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 52

MODE : Warrior Mode

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key and Three Wishes

HP : 275

 

"Advance!Warrior Mode!"Hazimie said as his clothes change into golden garments with silver line."Okay,here goes!"Hazimie began to kick the Centipede in the air and Hazimie began to jump above him."Take this! Zantetsuken!"Hazimie said as he perform Zantetsuken on Centipede."This is the end!Blitz!"Hazimie ended the final blow with Blitz and the Centipede land with the massive blow and finally,it has been defeated and destroyed.

 

"We did it!"Naroco said as Hazimie began to revert himself back to normal."So...is it over?"Hazimie said.Suddenly,The CIty has been shaking after the defeats of the Centipede."This is wierd!what's happening!?"Kinode said."Look!"Naroco said as they saw a giant sandstorm at the outside of the city and began to move forward to the city."The Sandstorm!we gotta stop it!"Hazimie said as he run through the outside the city as well as Kinode and Naroco....

 

Sandstorm Countdown - 21 minutes

 

Records

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 45

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key

HP : 240

 

to be continued....

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Chapter 22 : Time Runs Out!

 

Records

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 45

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key

HP : 240

 

Sandstorm Countdown - 15 minutes

 

Hazimie,Kinode and Naroco arrive at the outskirts of Agrabah and prepare to stop the Sandstorm that headed to the city."Guys,what else we have to do to stop the storm?"Kinode said."Base on my Watchtrix,there's a heartless who manipulating the Sandstorm inside.My guess is that we have no choice but to go through the Sandstorm and attack the heartless!"Naroco said as he instruct them for what they gonna do."Okay guys,LET'S GO!!"Hazimie said as they enter the Sandstorm.When they enter,they saw like a battlefield of sand surrounded by a couple of sand pillars."According to my watchtrix,this place was control by a heartless energy and covering with the storm.So we have to find a heartless who sent the a herd of them and the sandstorm..."Naroco said as he look his radar in watchtrix."Umm.....about the heartless that we have to find.....what if it's behind us?"Kinode said as they turned their backs and saw a giant heartless and attack by using it's sword but they manage to dodge."What was that!?"Naroco said.Then,Hazimie's mind scan to the heartless.

 

NAME : Kurt Zisa

LEVEL : 70

WEAPON : Swords and Magic/Attack Seal

HP : 4000

 

"It's Kurt Zisa!"Hazimie said as they summon their Keyblades."Wait,wait,wait....THE Kurt Zisa!?"Kinode said as he startled."I don't care if it is,let's beat that thing fast!we don't have much time!"Naroco said as they began to attack.Suddenly,Kurt Zisa jump in the air and spin with his sword and attack them and receive damage."Manthat hurts!"Kinode said as Kurt Zisa began to use tornadoes on them."Strike Raid!"Naroco said as he throw and cut the tornadoes."Thanks,man!Aeroga!"Kinode said as he cast off Aeroga at the party.Suddenly,Kurt Zisa began to use the Attack Seal."Damn our attack's has been sealed...Alright then,Thundaga!"Hazimie cast off and it breaks off the barrier."Alright,now's the chance!"Hazimie said as Naroco use Fire Dash and Kinode using the Ars Arcanum.

 

Then,Kurt Zisa began to stand up after being passed out and using the Magic Seal."Great,he seal our magic.How can we continue like this?"Kinode said."There's only one way....Hazimie,i lend your power!"Naroco said to Hazimie."Wha--really?is it okay?"Hazimie said."A OKAY!we only have 3 minutes until the sandstorm comes!"Naroco said as he agrees."Equip!Naroco Style!"Hazimie said as he began to Equip with Naroco.

 

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 50

MODE : Wishing Mode

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key and Wishing Lamp

HP : 280

 

"Advance!Wishing Mode!"Hazimie said as his clothes turn into Silver Garments and have Gold Lines on the clothes.Then,when Kurt Zisa spins with swords,Hazimie began to use Stun Impact and make a shock to it.Then,Kurt Zisa cast off the Attack Seal."Wishing Volley!"Hazimie said as he cast off a hundreds of meteor shower and attack the Kurt Zisa's Attack Seal Barrier and Knock out on the sand ground."Kinode,NOW!"Hazimie said as Kinode use Ragnarok and shoots many beams to the Kurt Zisa,who began to stand up after being knock out and escape from the attack and began to cast with Magic Seal.

 

"Oh no you don't!Wishing Spiral!"Hazimie said as charge off with Meteor power and break of the barrier the second time and knock out again."This is the end!Wishing Star!"Hazimie begin to cast one beam at in the sky and make a rain with full of meteors and attack Kurt Zisa and defeated.Then,the sandstorm begins to stop moving and begin to disappear including the pillars and the battlefield."We did it!"Hazimie said as he revert himself back and celebrate with the others.

 

Somewhere on the Dessert,where the location of the Cave of Wonders,Master Keeper walking around the area and and use his power to summon the Tiger Head from the sand ground."Excellent,Keeper......Now all that's left is to put these in the cave..."D-Tector said as he appears behind him and give him a Black Lamp."So you want me to put this Lamp hidden in the Cave of Wonders......but why these lamp?is there a genie inside?"Master Keeper."It's not a genie....you could said it was a TIME BOMB that will make this world sink into the darkness...and not just that,it could be a prize of darkness whoever holds it...."D-Tector said."If so....when will it be exploded or founded by someone?"Keeper said."Someday,but not for long.....you could say it was during HIS second visit...."D-Tector said as someone approach behind D-Tector."You mean him?"Keeper said."Yes....i think he qualifies for time comes..."D-Tector said."You really have plan this out..."Keeper said."Well,Plans always have a script..."D-Tector said to Keeper and the unknown figure next to him as Keeper begins to hid the Lamp inside the Cave....

 

Records

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 48

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key

HP : 255

 

to be continued....

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Hey, your story's falling short of the writing forum's standard for grammar. Please add puncuation and capitalize letters where they need to be capitalized. Basically just clean it up a bit.

 

If you need an example, here's an edited version of one of your paragraphs in the latest update.

 

Hazimie ,Kinode and Naroco arrive at the outskirts of city and stand in front of the Sandstorm Tornadoes that are approaching[? i'm not entirely sure of what you're trying to say here]

"It looks like we do not have a choice, do we?" Naroco said.

"Of course, after all... we have to protect the city at all costs!" Kinode said.

"Okay guys, LET'S GO!" Hazimie said as they enter the Sandstorm. When they entered, they saw what seemed like a battlefield of sand surrounded by a couple of sand pillars.

 

It's hard for me to even edit this due to the fact you keep jumping between past-present-future tenses. At points it's impossible to actually understand what the story is saying.

 

If you have more questions or need any help, go ahead and ask. I don't want to scare you off from writing, I want you to become a better writer and keep writing.

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Chapter 23 : What i Wish for

 

Records

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 48

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key

HP : 255

 

Hazimie,Kinode and Naroco are taking break at the Palace Gate after all the events in the dessert."You know,Hazimie...next time,please don't make jokes about sand,i'm getting sick after we through so far..."Kinode said to Hazimie after he making jokes."heheh,sorry....anyways,what are you guys gonna do now?"Hazimie questioned them."Well,we decided that we want to repair this place into new ones after all the commotion that have been through..."Naroco answer to Hazimie's question."Yeah,what Naroco said.Still,what really bug me is that why the Staff Members of KH13 has been sided with D-Tector.....we knew,even the Staff knew,that he's behind all of this yet the Staff obeys him....i just want to know why..."Kinode said as the three of them in the moment of silence.

 

"Well,we can't help....let's just say that D-Tector has already plan this out.....i wonder,what face behind his hood anyway.....i just want to know who he is...."Naroco said."Well,it can't be help,but we will find out someday..."Hazimie said."Yeah,i guess you're right.....so then,what are you gonna do now?"Naroco question Hazimie."Me?well....i have to explore other worlds though....after all,lots of players needs help..."Hazimie answers."heheh,you're one of a kind,Hazimie..."Kinode said."Of course,after all,that is my wish!"Hazimie said.

 

"Your wish?"Naroco said."Yes,my wish is for protecting my friends.....even if it takes everything i have..."Hazimie said."Heh,yeah.....i guess that's the Hazimie i know..."Naroco said.Then,Hazimie summon his Keyblade and use it to open the portal to the Lanes Between."Okay guys,this is it,i hope you guys safe on your own journey!"Hazimie said."Take care,Hazimie!"Naroco said."Don't forget about us!"Kinode said."I won't!see ya!"Hazimie said as he enters and the portal has been closed."You have to protect KH13,Hazimie.....that is your fate..."Naroco said.

 

Somewhere at the city in Agrabah,Master Keeper appeared by using the Corridors of Darkness to meet D-Tector,who is waiting for a long time."Did you have hidden the lamp,Keeper?"D-Tector said."Yes,i have hidden the lamp in that Cave..."Keeper said to D-Tector."And what about him?"D-Tector said."he was somewhere in this city,but he's not making his move until Hazimie's second arrival..."Keeper said."Good....now,it is time you have to make your own move on Hazimie,Keeper..."D-Tector said."Yes....and thank you,Master D-Tector..."Keeper said as his expression began to worry and he leaves by using the Corridors of Darkness."How long has it been....since i don't use the real Keyblades.....perhaps before his arrival,i guess...."D-Tector said as he wield the wooden Keyblade in hand and look up in the sky...

 

Records

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 48

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key

HP : 255

 

to be continued...

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Chapter 24 : A Place where the First Reunion is

 

Records

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 48

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key

HP : 255

 

Hazimie arrived in the world of Neverland,at the Deck of the Pirate Ship."It's Neverland...never thought that i ended up in this world..."Hazimie said as he wandering at that place."It's nice to see you....Hazimie..."Hazimie heard by a voice from his back and he saw a figure who come from the Corridor of Darkness."!?...you're..."Hazimie said as his mind began to scan to the figure.

 

NAME : Master Keeper

LEVEL : 75

KEYBLADE : Master Keeper

HP : 390

 

"Keeper!it's nice to see you!"Hazimie said as he excited that he appear."Hazimie....i'm sorry.....but i have to do this..."Keeper said as he summon the Heartless and surrounded him."!?....Keeper,you..."Hazimie said as his expression became a shock."I'm sorry....but this is Master D-Tector's orders....i can't disobey it..."Keeper said."Then.....please,please tell me why....why did you side with him?and not just that,why the other Staff Members are sided with him?"Hazimie question him."Well....all of the Staff Member has to obeyed him from the start...."Keeper said."What?What do you mean?"Hazimie question again.

 

"It all started with all of the members in KH13 has been sucked in to the KH13 Space,also known as KH13 Lanes.The first people who has been sucked in are the Staff Members itself,and D-Tector has planned this out by casting a system called Division Link..."Keeper explain about what happen to him and the other Staff Members to Hazimie."Division Link?,what's that?"Hazimie question again."Division Link is a System that divides Thirteen powers of the user and implant them on someone else in order to manipulate it..."Keeper said."Wait....don't tell me that..."Hazimie said as he began to know what it is."Yes,Hazimie....D-Tector has using the Division Link on the Staff Members including myself....so i have no choice but to obey him even i don't want to..."Keeper said as Hazimie sad about his situation."But....what about Azure Flame?he also one of the Staff Member..."Hazimie question again."Well,it depends on D-Tector whether he interest or not,so in the end,he is not.Also....he can set the Link free however he want,just as he do to Oishii..."Keeper said to Hazimie.

 

"Now,i think our time for Reunion has ended....forgive me,Hazimie...."Keeper said as he order the Heartless to attack.Then,Hazimie suddenly summon his Keyblade and defeat the Heartless that surrounding him in the blink of an eye."I know that it's painful for you,Keeper....but i will....release the dark ties within you..."Hazimie said as he begin to fight Keeper."Very well....prepare yourself...."Keeper said as he summon his Keyblade and prepare to attack.

 

Records

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 50

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key

HP : 265

 

to be continued...

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Chapter 25 : Intervention

 

Records

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 50

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key

HP : 265

 

Hazimie and Keeper are intense fighting at the Ship in Neverland."Aeroga!"Hazimie cast off an Aeroga on Keeper but missed."Pearl!"Keeper cast off an Orb of Light to attack Hazimie yet he manage to block the attack then Hazimie use counter on Keeper."Energy Blade!"Keeper said as he summon the blade made of energy beams and attack Hazimie but he manage to use Mine Shield and attack Keeper on the other hand.

 

"Curaga!"Hazimie cast of curaga after being hit by Keeper's Energy Blade."You're stronger than i expected..."Keeper said as Hazimie ready to fight head on."Ars Solum!"Hazimie attack Keeper by using Ars Solum but yet Keeper manage to Block it."My turn!Ars Arcanum!"Keeper said as he using Ars Arcanum on Hazimie but manage to Block just as the same as Keeper did and then Hazimie counter it."Take this,Meteor Crash!"Hazimie jump in the air attack using Meteor Crash on Keeper yet he manage to avoid it but the Ship has been inflicted by Hazimie's technique."You're strong....you can almost destroy this ship..."Keeper said to Hazimie."Sorry if i almost destroy it..."Hazimie said to Keeper as he jump and try to attack Keeper in the air...

 

"Wind Uppercut!"Keeper launch an uppercut with Wind elements and knock down Hazimie to the deck of the ship."Energy Blade!"Keeper cast off an Energy Blade on Hazimie who is still lying on the ground but manage to get back up and launch Ars Solum and cut off all the Energy Blade."How's that?"Hazimie said."Not bad...let's see you can handle this!Energy Beam!"Keeper said as he creating the Energy Blade and turn into beam and attack but Hazimie manage to avoid and run head on as he doing dodge roll and run towards Keeper."Aeroga!"Hazimie cast off Aeroga on Keeper and knock out in the air."Take this!Meteor Crash!"Hazimie then attack Keeper in the air by using Meteor Crash and knock down to the deck and the Ship begin to tear off little by little...

 

"Okay,try this for your size!Blazing Tornadoes!"Keeper said as he get back up and jump in the air and attack Hazimie and knock down to the ground then create three Blazing Tornadoes and moving towards to Hazimie but manage to get back up and avoid the tornadoes as fast as he can then jump in the air."Blitz!"Hazimie then launch an attack on Keeper and make him knock down again onto deck and Hazimie manage to beat Keeper....

 

"huh....huh....huh....he's....strong..."Hazimie said as he began to fatigue after the fight against Keeper who is lying on the ground but Keeper still can standing after all Hazimie attack on him."You're are strong....but this is far as you can go..."Keeper said as he pointed his Keyblade towards Hazimie.Then,Keeper's Keyblade began to charge for a final blow."Goodbye,Hazimie....Beams of Light!"Keeper cast of a powerful Beam made of Light and attack Hazimie as he prepare to Block.Suddenly,in the blink of an eye,the Beam was been reflected by an unknown reason."I think that's enough of that,Master Keeper..."The man said as he appear in front of Hazimie."You...."Keeper said as he know him.Then,Hazimie's mind began to scan to him.

 

NAME : Not-with-a-whimper

LEVEL : 57

KEyBLADE : Follow the Wind

HP : 300

 

"Not!you're here?"Hazimie said to Not."Of course,that's what people always do when someone need backup..."Not said as he began to fight."You can rest,Hazimie...i'll take care of this...."Not said as he and Keeper began to fight...

 

Records

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 56

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key

HP : 295

 

to be continued...

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Chapter 26 : The Phantom that Steals Time

 

Records

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 56

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key

HP : 295

 

After a couple of minutes,Not and Keeper are still in the middle of the fight."Triple Blizzaga!"Not said as he cast three Blizzagas and aim it on Keeper,who manage to dodge three of them."Wind Uppercut!"Keeper launch an attack on Not but manage to avoid then using Thundaga Shot but Keeper also dodge the attack."Energy Blade!"Keeper said as he cast an Energy Blade and attack on Not."Thundaga Shot!"Not said as he dodge all Blades from Keeper then attack him by casting Thundaga Shot yet it hit on him.

 

"You're strong.....i really gonna give a credit for that..."Keeper said to Not."No need!what i need is to save you,that is what Hazimie wants..."Not said as he looking Hazimie then he turns to Keeper."I see,very well then....let's end this battle...."Keeper said as both of them ready to attack each other."Sonic Blade!Thunder Surge!"Keeper launch an attack by using Sonic Blade while Not casting Thunder Surge on the other hand.The battle ends as Keeper was been defeated."how'd you like that?"Not said to Keeper who has been struck down.Suddenly,he miraculously can standing and attack Not from behind."Urgh....how's he do that?"Not said as he receive a collateral damage."Not!you okay?"Hazimie said as he run to his aid."Yeah....i'm fine,but man.....this guy's a one tough cookie....urgh..."Not said as Hazimie begins to casting Curaga on Not."Thanks,pal..."Not said as Hazimie nods then turn to Keeper.

 

"I think our fight has ended swiftly.....i have no choice....but to summon......this..."Keeper said as he summon the Heartless.Then,Hazimie's mind began to scan the Heartless.

 

NAME : Phantom

LEVEL : 70

WEAPON : Time Magic

HP : 500

 

"It's the Phantom!"Not said as both of them summon their Keyblades to prepare for an attack."Phantom,go to the Clock Tower....and put the Time Bomb on it..."Keeper said as the Phantom begins to fly off from the ship."What did you plan for?"Hazimie said to Keeper."I was been order from D-Tector....that i have to put a Time Bomb on the Clock Tower....in order to make this world fall in to the Darkness....by using Phantom who use the power of Time..."Keeper said as he explain."A Time Bomb!?we gotta stop that heartless and fast!"Not said as Hazimie agrees then Not begins to fly off by doing Glide and chase of the Phantom.Then,as soon as Hazimie try to follow Not,he begins turn to Keeper."Keeper.....are you sure you can't resist the Darkness within you?"Hazimie question him."I can't....and i'm sorry...."Keeper said as Hazimie understands and begins to leave."Hazimie..."Keeper said to Hazimie as he turn to him again."Meet me......at the Hollow Bastion.....and put an end to me..."Keeper said as he disappear by using the Corridor of Darkness."I will save you,Keeper.....that's what friends do..."Keeper said as he begins to leave the ship and fly off....

 

Records

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 56

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key

HP : 295

 

to be continued...

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Chapter 27 : Time of Darkness

 

Records

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 56

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key

HP : 295

 

Hazimie and Not arrived at the Clock Tower,meeting the Phantom,who put the Time magic on the Clock."We gotta defeat it before the Clock strikes Twelve!"Not said as they look at the Clock and it was at 11pm and both of them summon their Keyblade and fly towards to the Phantom."Then,Phantom's heart from the bottom turns into red and when Hazimie try to attack,it's not working."Hazimie,remember the colors!if you use magic on the right color,it will work!"Not said as he cast firaga on the Phantom's heart and it works.

 

"Okay,thanks!"Hazimie said as he dodge the Phantom's attack and see what color on the Phantom's heart will appear."Blue color....!?,that's it!Blizzaga!"Hazimie cast of the Blizzaga on Phantom and it works effectively."Alright!we can beat it in no time!"Not said as they continue to attack.Ten minutes has passed,they manage to get the pace up from the Phantom.Suddenly,the Phantom begins to use it's Time Magic and the Clock seems to be speed up the seconds.Luckily,Not manage to stop the Clock for a while by using Stopga."Okay!that should do it!Hazimie,Please!Equip with me!"Not said as Hazimie agreed and began to use the Equip."Equip!Not-with-the-whimper style!"Hazimie said as he merged his power with Not.

 

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 65

MODE : Whimper Mode

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key

HP : 340

 

"Advance!Whimper Mode!"Hazimie said as his clothes turns to Red Garments yet Gold Linings.Then,Hazimie begins to fly head on to the

Phantom."Bind!Blackout!Sleep!and Slow!"Hazimie begins to cast of all the Status ailments on Phantom.Since the Phantom's hearts begins to slow down the color transformation."Okay,since,the color is only Yellow,take this!"Hazimie begins to charge his power and prepare for the attack."Thundaga 5x!Thundaga Shot 3x!"Hazimie cast of as many Thunder magic as he can and it has make the Phantom struck down and begin slowly floating in the air.

 

"Alright,we did it!"Hazimie said as he revert himself back to normal."Alright,now that the world has been--huh!?"Not said as he suddenly realized and watch at the Clock and it's still moving."It's still moving!that means..."Not said as both of them turn to the Phantom who miraculously can stand up from floating and cast of Time Magic on Hazimie and Not."It's no good!we can't move!"Hazimie said as he tried to move but it's useless."We have to do something!we only have ten minutes!"Not said as he hasn't given up.

 

Then,the Phantom begins to use his Time Magic to speed up the time on the Clock.Luckily,someone manage to Stop the Clock by using Stopga and arrive at the Clock Tower."Hey,that's!"Not said as Hazimie's mind began to scan to that guy.

 

NAME : Razorwind Keyblade

LEVEL : 60

KEYBLADE : Fairy Harp

HP : 315

 

"It's Razorwind!"Hazimie said as Razorwind cast of the Time Magic to unfreeze them."You're just in time!not bad by using a Fairy Harp..."Not said as he accusing him."Is that how you treat people who save you?"Razorwind said to Not."Heheheh,sorry....anyways,thanks though..."Not said to Razorwind as he forgive what he said."Okay guys!let's start and end this battle quick!we don't have much time!"Hazimie said as they prepare to fight the Phantom who's turning them and begin a Second round fight...

 

Records

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 58

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key

HP : 305

 

to be continued....

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Chapter 28 : The Fairy in the Star

 

Records

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 58

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key

HP : 305

 

Hazimie,Not and Razorwind fight against the Phantom with everything they had and it seems they can handle the Heartless easily."Okay Not!use Bind then Thundaga!"Razorwind said as Not do what he said and it works effectively."Okay,Hazimie!use Blackout and Slow since the Sleep Magic doesn't work!"Razorwind said to Hazimie."Roger!Blackout,Slow!"Hazimie said as he cast off to the Phantom as what Razorwind said."Okay,one last thing!Hazimie,use Equip on me!"Razorwind said as Hazimie prepare to use the Equip."Equip!Razorwind Keyblade Style!"Hazimie said as he emerged his power with Razorwind.

 

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 70MODE : Fairy ModeKEYBLADE : Kingdom Key and Fairy HarpHP : 365

 

"Advance!Fairy Mode!"Hazimie said as his clothes turns into Yellow Garments and Green Linings yet have a Green pair of wings."Let's Go!"Hazimie said as he fly off to the Phantom with a Slowing state."Fairy Volley!"Hazimie said as he shot with yellow yet powerful light in all directions and it really works."Okay,it turns out great!let's keep moving!"Hazimie said to Not as they keep attacking the Phantom.Suddenly,the Phantom's Slow and Blackout effectiveness has worn out and begins to use Time Magic on Hazimie and Not.

 

"Not a chance!Fairy Sphere!"Hazimie said as he cast off a Fairy Sphere to him and Not in order to block from the Time Magic."Okay,let's end this!"Hazimie said as Not begins to cast Slow and Blackout on Phantom once again."This is the end!Fairy Cross!"Hazimie said as the Keyblade in his hand began to glow with immense power that are drawn from the Stars in the Sky and begins to slash the Phantom with a Cross.In the end,the Phantom has been eliminated and the Clock Tower seems turn back to normal."We did it!we save the world!"Hazimie said as he revert himself back to normal and the three of them landed on the Clock Tower to get some rest...

 

Then,at the Castle Chapel in Hollow Bastion,Master Keeper appeared using the Corridor of Darkness and saw D-Tector who is waiting for him."Ah....you have arrive.so,do you prepare for your outcome?..."D-Tector said to Keeper."Yes,i'm ready for it..."Keeper said as D-Tector give him an Orb with an immense glowing."What's this?"Keeper asked."It is the power that seal the user's power to wield the Keyblade created by me.....and i think you might know who that i want you to give,no?"D-Tector said as Keeper nod then he leaves the Chapel."This world has been connected.....tied to the darkness.....soon to be completely eclipse...."D-Tector said as he disappear in the darkness....

 

Records

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 62

KEYBlADE : Kingdom Key

HP : 325

 

to be continued....

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Chapter 29 : I do for Friendship

 

Records

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 62

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key

HP : 325

 

Hazimie,Not and Razorwind talk each other for a while after they defeat the Phantom."So....what are you gonna do now,Hazimie?Keeper will be waiting for you on Hollow Bastion and challenge you to a fight.....what will you do..."Not said."Dunno....but then again,i have to,even if i rejects it......after all,what i do.....I do for friendship...."Hazimie said as he made up his mind."I see.....but i think you need friends to be with you along the way...."Not said as Razorwind agree for what he said."Well,i get the feeling that they really want me go there alone.....so i have no choice..."Hazimie said to both of them.

 

"Yeah.....but you still need friends,no?i mean,there could be a trap...."Razorwind said."I know,but.....i don't need it......i've become part of my friend's heart,including you guys....Even if i'm alone.....my friends voice will always be there for me,even if they cast me to the deepest abyss.....because my friends are my power.....they are the strength that let me to carry on,no?"Hazimie said."Yeah you're right,but remember Hazimie......even if we're far apart.......your friends will always be there for you..."Razorwind said.

 

"Yeah i guess...."Hazimie said as he began to stand."You have to go know?"Not said."Yeah,can't stay a little longer though..."Hazimie said as he summon his Keyblade and open the Portal to Lanes Between."Okay....thanks,guys......i appreciate what you did.....but i will save my friend..."Hazimie said as Not and Razorwind waving him as Hazimie enters the Portal and begins to go to the Hollow Bastion.

 

Then,at the Castle Chapel of the Hollow Bastion,D-Tector sitting on the throne,waiting Hazimie that will arrive soon."You really wanna wait for him?"A man said as he appear and talk to D-Tector."Well,i'm a patient man.....let Keeper handle this property of Dispute....however,know this.....Hazimie are one of the many roads that i might chose to take....trust me,DChiuch.....i'll make certain of that,hmhmhmhm..."D-Tector said to DChiuch as he disappear using the Corridors of Darkness and D-Tector continues to wait...

 

Records

NAME : Hazimie

LEVEL : 62

KEYBLADE : Kingdom Key

HP : 325

 

to be continued...

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