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Okay, this story is based off of a RP, but still read... it's just a prequel...

And, hopefully its good:

Chapter 1

Aaron watched in horror as his best friend mutated before his eyes...

His Hands Formed together to make three long, gangly fingers... his ears extended and flopped down... his skin darkened and all his features faded away...

His friend was now an Aku...

The Aku are dark creature, the originals were formed from wizards, and witches who had a few things go wrong... A Dark Lord watched over them, they followed his every whim...

No one but the Aku knew what the Dark Lord looked like... only, he was terrifiying... Aaron hated the Aku from Day One, they had murdered his friends, his family... and now they had gone to far...

Aaron looked around for anything to use for a weapon, nothing... For a warehouse, the place was pretty quiet... Aaron ran away, Aku raced behind him...

 

Aaron found cover in an old abandoned Shed which he had worked on to make his home, his old one was crawling with Aku, Aaron looked at himself in a reflection on the window pane. He wore his long silver hair back, braced by a simple head band... He had a scar across his left eye... A Scarf up over his chin, and a long silver Robe... Beneath that he wore a tunic...

He sighed...

He sat down, feet on a table... He thought out a plan of action.

"What to do... what, to, Do..."

He heard noises outside, he looked out...

Nothing, had he imagined it? Probably... as much as he hated to admit, he was losing grip on his sanity...

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Was it good? Should I continue?

If you didn't like it this chapter, Chapter 2 will have more detail and whatnot, it will be more thought over... I'm just writing this off the top of my head...

Discuss...

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woooow u like writing short chapters huh? and what about superia?!

its good though

Loved it,you should write more

  • Author

Superia, I continued... but you never went back to reply, thus leaving it dead...-_-

Lol, thanks Gizelita!

Chapter 2

In another place, far away from Aaron... sat a queenly figure, she wore a long purple robe over her formly figure... Nohting else... her name was Akui, and she was the first to ever become under the Dark Lord's control...

She acted as an overseer, a mere errand runner to him... But, she had no other choice. She was cursed, if she were to ever even Think of crossing her master, then she would drop dead.

As of now, she commanded a legion of Aku to spread out, move in the shadow, and claim more citizens into their ranks...

She sighed.

 

Aaron had fallen asleep, his hair hanging down over his eyes... He was awoke by a noise... he glanced out the window, Literal Thousands of Aku Marched past...

"An army... The Final Countdown is nearly upon us..."

Thanks,now I'm more anxious with the rest of the story,you whrite very interesting storys

  • Author

Thankies! I appreciate the input... =)

Chapter 3

After the Aku passed Aaron threw his robe back on and burst through the door...

"I gotta get to Majjiku and warn everyone..."

Majjiku was the city that everything relied on... It was the source of all power, energy... etcetera, and the Aku had an army headed right for it...

Aaron looked around for anything he could use against them... he saw a motorcycle, it was roughly two feet high, five foot long two wheels all in a compact cylinder shaped vehicle, Aaron got on it... revved it up, and took off. He glanced down at the MPH meter, he was going one-hundred.

He looked to his rearview mirror propped to the side, Aku were chasing them... well, they weren't exactly Aku per-se, but a breed of Aku...

These one's had wings sprouting out from their shoulders, and they could fly...Fast...

Great very good*clap*

nice~! i like it~ and i hab an idea if ya wanna hear it!

  • Author

^~^

Chapter 4

Aaron tried hard to outrun them, but they were faster then they looked, they were within hairs breath from him...

Aaron had an idea... he was coming up on an underpass, with a bridge cast not far above the road...

He skid to a stop, and the Aku faceplanted straight into the wall...

Aaron breathed a sigh of relief...

He drove on, he tried to stay optimistic that he would make it, but... he wasn't so sure...

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Okay, this chapter was reaaalllllyyyyyy short...

Good,what happened to Aaron then?I'm loving this story

I can't believe I didn't see this before*feels sad* forgive me. Anyway, Awesome story so far!

  • Author

Thank you for all the feedback!

Chapter 5

Aaron arrived in the city only to find... he was to late.

The Aku had attacked, and it was all over... no one saw it coming, it was death from above...

Aaron bowed his head, he stepped off the bike and walked deeper into the ravaged city, ashes fell from the sky, fire tainted the air...

Aaron fell to his knees. A small glimmer of light caught his eye.

A sword...

He picked it up...

It was around four feet long, roughly five inches wide...

And light as a feather... it was perfect for Aaron, he ripped a piece of cloth from his scarf and made a makeshift sheath for it...

He turned to find himself facing a few dozen Aku...

He smiled, unsheathed it... and charged...

niiice~! keep on adding~!

Wow, really nice! You really have some talent! :)

  • Author

Chapter 6

Aaron had thus far slashed down six Aku, but they were still coming in hordes...

He jumped on a rather large one's back, he stabbed hsi sword through it's chest, he sprung off it, landing on his feet; he swiped another one across the chest...

A flying Aku swooped down and slashed his face, drawing blood...

Aaron fell to his knees, grimacing in pain...

The Flyer came in for another slash, But Aaron was reayd for him this time, he brought his sword above his head, and cut it in half horizontally...

They kept coming...

Aaron prepared for the end, when, he heard another sword clashing, he looked over...

Another young man, about Aaron's age...

"Get outta here! I'll hold him off so you can escape!" He said, while stabbing an Aku...

"But you'll die!" Aaron replied,

"No I won't! Get Outta here!"

Aaron, hesitantly, ran away...

Very good,I loved your story

I'm loving it,very interesting,I have to adimit that you have talent

  • Author

I find myself using the same basic words pretty often though... I need a theosaurus..xD

Chapter 7

Aaron sprinted back to the shelter...

He mounted his sword on the wall and sat down...

He laid his head against his pillow and slowly started to sleep...

 

Meanwhile, in the Country of the Aku, The Dark Lord awaited a report...

"Majjiku is ours for the taking, your majesty..." Akui said, kneeling before him...

"I have a new task for you, Akui..."

"Yes?"

"I have forseen a portion of the future..."

"What did you see?"

"That is none of your concern, but it led me to believe... you must hunt down, and destroy the one they call..." He paused... "Aaron..."

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Wow, this chapter was so short... But chapter 10 onward will be much longer...

  • 4 weeks later...
  • Author

Sorry for Double posting, I have to get this going again.

Chapter 10

Aaron fleed back to his bike, which he then mounted and revved the engine to life.

He accelerated in the direction of the Fire Country.

The Fire Country lied south from Majjiku, it was filled with normal people who can control the element of fire.

Aaron had a few friends in the fire country, and he was hoping they could help him...

You write so well cookie stealer xD I wanted to write like you,my stories are nothing compared to yours

  • Author

Awwww... No I don't, I'm pretty ameature compared to...everyone really.

Chapter 11

Aaron passed the border seperating The Fire Country from everythign else, once there, He skid to a stop...

Hopping off his bike, he proceeded deeper into the town.

A small, little girl walked up to him... She tugged at his coat...

Aaron looked down at her,

"Well hello there..." He said..

"Please, why are you here?" She replied.

"Because I'm looking for someone..."

"Who?"

"I'm not sure."

"Oh..."

"You sound, disappointed."

"No. I just wish I could help you..."

Aaron then went to his knees so he could be eye-level with the little girl...

"You can help me, by going to parents and staying there, something dangerous is about to happen, and I don't want you getting hurt."

The Girl nodded, and ran off...

You're doing great!

  • Author

SHould I do Chapter 12 today?

If you want to,if you don't I can wait

  • Author

I'll do it, just it's going to start an epic battle... which will take a long time to write.

So do it,I'm here just waiting

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