February 19, 201015 yr Its interesting. I was a bit confused on the characters and background story but I feel it rolls itself out. The queens of darkness and light are fighting, you are controlling over the element of fire, etc. etc. it sound SO interesting! But I have no idea who or what your talking about. Give history on everyone and everything important to the story. -this has been a brutal review (rofl)
February 21, 201015 yr that's really good! I would never have been able to come up with smoething like that!
here is the quick sample of the book im writing!