tick tock tock goes mr grin, this crocidile is trying to eat captain hook again!hooks hand was so tasty he just wants more,croc1 hook zero thats the score...

 

tinkerbell is a fairy her jelousy can be scarey,but shes loyal to her freinds sticking with peter untill the end

 

captain hook and mr smee used to be pirates sailing the sea. but soon they got stuck in pirate cove, hooks always trying to kill peter the boy he most loaths. hooks always scared of mr grin so now hes running once again

 

peter pan the cocky boy is flying high in the sky. never avoiding a adventure even if hell die, hes not afraid hes cocky thats why.

lol, an interesting summary of neverland indeed. It would help though if you put your rhymes into better stanzas. But this way is new to me, new to sight, to everyone's mind they are not afright. I suggest you keep this up with good poetry, for it tis, the way, of them and me.