The Bracelet(Prolog)To begin our story we look at a 17 year old male who lives in a world where the Val Victorian age never left the world. Now this males name is Zack Strife with light green eyes that change color depending on his mood, 6 inch long black hair and being the tallest in his class being 6’3 and wears a bracelet that he got from his uncle roughly 10 years ago. Now his bracelet looks really dated and has weird indentations all around it as if it lacks something….Zack rides a hover board that is 4 feet long and 2 feet wide with a chair and a steering while on it, the chair is a really old warn leather. Now when he goes to school it houses some of the most advance technology, with even a brain helmet that allows for instant learning but can only be used 2 times a week otherwise it will crash the brain from the information over load.In an ever going society where everyone wants to evolve technology and sustain world peace, people live on the moon and on the rest of the plants in the solar system. Technology has evolved so far that humans can live forever, but technology could not save any other species of life. Although humans did save the DNA of every species and inject copies into bio genetically altered “Templates” that is a blob of goo that can turn into any kind of creature that you inject the DNA of your choosing, because of this the creature can live forever. Zack has a good friend he’s known since he was very little, she’s named Luna who has light blue hair as clear as the moonlight, eyes as dark as the cold dark ocean and a height of 5’9.(End Prolog)It was a warm summer day In the Grand City of Valhalla. “Just another day” thought Zack who was heading home from school with Luna. On his way home riding his hover board Zack stopped and landed it on the ground. For no reason he fixed his eyes at his wrist and glared at his bracelet for a while. Luna looked at his puzzled and asked him “what was wrong?” Zack stopped and looked at Luna and replied “Oh nothing just wondering why there are indentations in my bracelet.” Luna replied “Ah ok, But Zack we need to get to your house and finish our project for our Bioengineering class.” Zack nodded and turned the hover board back on and flew it to his house. When they arrived at his house, while crazy grandpa was fast asleep on the couch. “GET UP LAZY BUMM!” Zack screeched. Startled, Grandpa jumped off the couch like he was gonna pass out from fear and glared at Zack. “What do you want?” Zack then replied “I just want to know everything you know about my bracelet.” Crazy Grandpa told him everything he knew about it and that he found it in a secrete passage under the house. Curious Zack took Luna to search for this passage. Before long he had found the opening to this strange and mysterious path that he did not know where it went. But with out hesitation grabbed Luna’s hand and proceeded forward not knowing what to expect. They approach a weird room with odd shapes on the wall all in black and white resembling wolfs. Questioned they both looked around and found a small indentation on the wall and pushed it. Suddenly they were both rushed down from this strange room to an even bigger room. Luna and Zack both explored this strange room, it was surprising to find that it was lit with these odd lights, exploring the room until they found some strange jewels on the ground. Luna picked them up and without a thought put them into Zack's bracelet. As she did the bracelet started to glow different colors, kinda worried Zack took it off and it started to float. They both stared at it and it started to glide to the middle of the room and landed in an odd shaped hole on the floor. The whole room began to light up different colors and a gust of wind blew past them. The bracelet pulled up a weird control like panel, Zack looked at it and realized it said his name and Luna’s name on it, in old English. Zack Gulped and began to read it out loud:”To the wearer of the bracelet you are the chosen one to lead all of mankind to perfection and peace for good, but if you fail to do so the bracelet will let out a terrible fate for you.....” Shocked Zack stood like a statue for 10 minutes, Luna not sure what to do shook him and tried to snap him out of it. “ZACK” She cried. Zack looked at her then the bracelet “Luna what do I do?” Luna glanced at him for a second “I dont know....” Zack looked at the bracelet and put it back on his wrist. “What ever happens at least I will have you by my side” Zack smiled and hugged Luna. “Lets go”Luna told him. They both left the room without a second thought. The bracelet still glowing turned pitch black. And then everything around them changed to a violet color and all life paused around them. Zack and Luna were both speechless as they looked around them. The bracelet shook Zack's arm with rage and fear screeching: FOOL FOOL FOOL YOU DENYED BRINING PEACE TO MANKIND NOW YOU SHALL SUFFER AN ETERNITY IN A RIFT WHERE TIME STANDS STILL. The bracelet shook harder and broke into tiny pieces. Zack looked at Luna and asked “I should have done what that weird thing wanted me to do and bring peace to mankind with it....I'm such a fool” Luna looked at him and grabbed his hand. “Well at least it's eternity to figure out how to bring peace to mankind right?” Zack nodded in response “Of course we have all the time to figure that out, but for now a good rest would do us good.” They both fell asleep for eternity never to awake. Unfortunately for them time played a cruel role and eventually caught up with them aging their bodies so quickly they became dust. But the bracelet went back together and transported itself back to the regular world and went to Crazy Grandpa. He laughed at it and said to himself “One of these days someone will choose to help others rather themselves and face the rest of their live together.....I wrote this story to inform who ever reads this to help others and not themselves first. We humans are so selfish sometimes it's sad....we need to learn to love others and help them not because we have to but for the kindness in all our hearts that we share. Even as we age and grow we still need to help others before ourselves. These 2 friends were confused and helped themselves before choosing to help the world become at peace finally. For this tale I could have ended it a different way where they both helped mankind obtain peace, but whats the fun in that when crazy grandpa is the keeper of time seeing who will finally unselfishly help others before themselves and bring hope for all of man kind.Tell me what you guys think of it
The Bracelet(Prolog)To begin our story we look at a 17 year old male who lives in a world where the Val Victorian age never left the world. Now this males name is Zack Strife with light green eyes that change color depending on his mood, 6 inch long black hair and being the tallest in his class being 6’3 and wears a bracelet that he got from his uncle roughly 10 years ago. Now his bracelet looks really dated and has weird indentations all around it as if it lacks something….Zack rides a hover board that is 4 feet long and 2 feet wide with a chair and a steering while on it, the chair is a really old warn leather. Now when he goes to school it houses some of the most advance technology, with even a brain helmet that allows for instant learning but can only be used 2 times a week otherwise it will crash the brain from the information over load.In an ever going society where everyone wants to evolve technology and sustain world peace, people live on the moon and on the rest of the plants in the solar system. Technology has evolved so far that humans can live forever, but technology could not save any other species of life. Although humans did save the DNA of every species and inject copies into bio genetically altered “Templates” that is a blob of goo that can turn into any kind of creature that you inject the DNA of your choosing, because of this the creature can live forever. Zack has a good friend he’s known since he was very little, she’s named Luna who has light blue hair as clear as the moonlight, eyes as dark as the cold dark ocean and a height of 5’9.(End Prolog)It was a warm summer day In the Grand City of Valhalla. “Just another day” thought Zack who was heading home from school with Luna. On his way home riding his hover board Zack stopped and landed it on the ground. For no reason he fixed his eyes at his wrist and glared at his bracelet for a while. Luna looked at his puzzled and asked him “what was wrong?” Zack stopped and looked at Luna and replied “Oh nothing just wondering why there are indentations in my bracelet.” Luna replied “Ah ok, But Zack we need to get to your house and finish our project for our Bioengineering class.” Zack nodded and turned the hover board back on and flew it to his house. When they arrived at his house, while crazy grandpa was fast asleep on the couch. “GET UP LAZY BUMM!” Zack screeched. Startled, Grandpa jumped off the couch like he was gonna pass out from fear and glared at Zack. “What do you want?” Zack then replied “I just want to know everything you know about my bracelet.” Crazy Grandpa told him everything he knew about it and that he found it in a secrete passage under the house. Curious Zack took Luna to search for this passage. Before long he had found the opening to this strange and mysterious path that he did not know where it went. But with out hesitation grabbed Luna’s hand and proceeded forward not knowing what to expect. They approach a weird room with odd shapes on the wall all in black and white resembling wolfs. Questioned they both looked around and found a small indentation on the wall and pushed it. Suddenly they were both rushed down from this strange room to an even bigger room. Luna and Zack both explored this strange room, it was surprising to find that it was lit with these odd lights, exploring the room until they found some strange jewels on the ground. Luna picked them up and without a thought put them into Zack's bracelet. As she did the bracelet started to glow different colors, kinda worried Zack took it off and it started to float. They both stared at it and it started to glide to the middle of the room and landed in an odd shaped hole on the floor. The whole room began to light up different colors and a gust of wind blew past them. The bracelet pulled up a weird control like panel, Zack looked at it and realized it said his name and Luna’s name on it, in old English. Zack Gulped and began to read it out loud:”To the wearer of the bracelet you are the chosen one to lead all of mankind to perfection and peace for good, but if you fail to do so the bracelet will let out a terrible fate for you.....” Shocked Zack stood like a statue for 10 minutes, Luna not sure what to do shook him and tried to snap him out of it. “ZACK” She cried. Zack looked at her then the bracelet “Luna what do I do?” Luna glanced at him for a second “I dont know....” Zack looked at the bracelet and put it back on his wrist. “What ever happens at least I will have you by my side” Zack smiled and hugged Luna. “Lets go”Luna told him. They both left the room without a second thought. The bracelet still glowing turned pitch black. And then everything around them changed to a violet color and all life paused around them. Zack and Luna were both speechless as they looked around them. The bracelet shook Zack's arm with rage and fear screeching: FOOL FOOL FOOL YOU DENYED BRINING PEACE TO MANKIND NOW YOU SHALL SUFFER AN ETERNITY IN A RIFT WHERE TIME STANDS STILL. The bracelet shook harder and broke into tiny pieces. Zack looked at Luna and asked “I should have done what that weird thing wanted me to do and bring peace to mankind with it....I'm such a fool” Luna looked at him and grabbed his hand. “Well at least it's eternity to figure out how to bring peace to mankind right?” Zack nodded in response “Of course we have all the time to figure that out, but for now a good rest would do us good.” They both fell asleep for eternity never to awake. Unfortunately for them time played a cruel role and eventually caught up with them aging their bodies so quickly they became dust. But the bracelet went back together and transported itself back to the regular world and went to Crazy Grandpa. He laughed at it and said to himself “One of these days someone will choose to help others rather themselves and face the rest of their live together.....I wrote this story to inform who ever reads this to help others and not themselves first. We humans are so selfish sometimes it's sad....we need to learn to love others and help them not because we have to but for the kindness in all our hearts that we share. Even as we age and grow we still need to help others before ourselves. These 2 friends were confused and helped themselves before choosing to help the world become at peace finally. For this tale I could have ended it a different way where they both helped mankind obtain peace, but whats the fun in that when crazy grandpa is the keeper of time seeing who will finally unselfishly help others before themselves and bring hope for all of man kind.Tell me what you guys think of it
Edited by VENROXAS