We stand together,

Our eyes brought to the light of the future,

Only through foggy eyes,

We think not of consquence or equality beyond our oblivious mask,

That even we are ignorant of.

 

Through our eyes we see only the selfish temporary,

Not paying attention to our ever changing world,

Living in yesterday, ignoring the future of tommorows children,

We hog beauty and give them a degrading eternity.

 

 

please enjoy and comment, also open to criticism : )

 

 

I liked this! Very good poem without a rhyme scheme - rhymes can get a little meh sometimes, y'know?

 

I like this and NOT GONNA LIE it sorta reminded me of Majora's Mask.

 

Also note I tried liking this but apparently I've already reached my quota ;(

I liked this! Very good poem without a rhyme scheme - rhymes can get a little meh sometimes, y'know?I like this and NOT GONNA LIE it sorta reminded me of Majora's Mask.Also note I tried liking this but apparently I've already reached my quota ;(

lol i have too yesteerday thats a good thing ;D

A true picture of selfishness, we all tend to think about what happens here and now a little too much, while sometimes, we need to think about the future---and what the world will be like in the generation beyond. Well done, friend.