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Sooo yeah as most of you probably don't know

 

I'm writing a story and I have trouble with the narrative 

http://kh13.com/forum/topic/54987-the-miracle-bringers/

It's somewhat active/passive from the character's viewpoint (the name in the title determines which character's mind you see from), while I feel best using that narrative since I can kind of express their thoughts as well as describe things

 

I dunno how exactly to make it work?

I mean I always feel repetitive when I just think about what I'm writing

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Switching POV's is normal, whether first-person or third-person limited.  Plenty of books do it.  If you think getting the perspective of multiple characters enhances your story, go for it.

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