It's somewhat active/passive from the character's viewpoint (the name in the title determines which character's mind you see from), while I feel best using that narrative since I can kind of express their thoughts as well as describe things
I dunno how exactly to make it work?
I mean I always feel repetitive when I just think about what I'm writing
Sooo yeah as most of you probably don't know
I'm writing a story and I have trouble with the narrative
http://kh13.com/forum/topic/54987-the-miracle-bringers/
It's somewhat active/passive from the character's viewpoint (the name in the title determines which character's mind you see from), while I feel best using that narrative since I can kind of express their thoughts as well as describe things
I dunno how exactly to make it work?
I mean I always feel repetitive when I just think about what I'm writing