okay.....this seems kinda....weird. but heres the first chappie of a fanfic im workin on...kindof stupid....but it works

 

*edit* and the reason iz kinda...weird and a lil out of character is cuz iz based off a song

 

here goes

 

In a world-in-between, there dwells beings not meant to exist.

Nobodies, the nonexistent ones, ones without hearts.

To the end they are desperately searching for

something.

 

Kingdom Hearts

 

 

 

Chapter one

 

~:Like the Moonless Dark:~

 

 

Axel stood on a large balcony attached to a white room. His intense green eyes gazed at a big, heart shaped moon that floated alone in the dark sky. There was no stars, just that big heart shape. For some reason it felt

Do you want this on the fanfiction page?

i like it! :D

@dchiuch: *shrugs* sure what the heck

 

@kairiwilson: thanx :blush:

heres another chappie(yesh im going from axel to dem from axel to dem )

 

 

 

Chapter 2

 

~:When It

wah!!! poor demyx!!!! TT^TT

*huggles demyx*

dun worreh, i like your music!!! unlike meanie xiggy! >.> *evil glares at xiggy*

everythime I hear a song .. it reminds me of a character O_o

everytime i hear a song, i picture a random organization member randomly singing to it. @.x

.. well .. that too .. or some other character

lolz same therefor these....chappies....yeah...

next chapter not as good as the other ones but hey it works

 

Chapter 3

 

~:On My Black Heart:~

 

A young, auburn haired girl stood on a small island. Her pink dress moved gently to the slight breeze that blew.

 

Axel stood a ways behind her, waiting for her to say something so that he could move on with his little spiel. He sighed and put his palm to his face. She had been standing there for about 20 minutes. Not doing anything, just standing there.

yayness! :D :D :( :D

I love Axel! You portray him so well!

HAHAHAHAH!! "if I were a kairi, where would I hide?"

 

.. I just pictured axel as a dragqueen xDDDD

lolz thanx

nother chappie dem dem dies in this one....

 

Chapter 4

 

~:Life Fell Before My Eyes:~

 

Demyx stood nervously in a large castle. For the millionth time he took out another card a lot like the one he had gotten when he had to go to Olympus Coliseum. It was basically the same kind of thing, except no striking bargains with creepy blue haired guys in togas. This time he just had to overrun Hollow Bastion with Heartless and defeat Sora.

 

But then there was that violence thing again. And also the fact that he had been beaten pretty bad last time he fought with Sora.

omg .. so saaad! ..

 

deemyyx! T_T

TT^TT

*huggles Demyx*

dun worreh, hun, it'll get better!!!! TT^TT

let's go and save him! 8D

nother one!!! this is the one before the last chapter(yeah this one isnt as good as the other ones....but it turned out okay!!!!! )

 

Chapter 5

 

~:Justice and Mercy:~

god, Kairi is such a b--

-shot for cursing-

... I reaaally like kairi! 8D

@ luzze: lolz i thought u might

@ kairi: yeah kairi sux i dun like er either

.. whaaaaaaat? (a)

 

just because she owned axel ... >_>

i know tats what i meant :blush: sorry

.. aaw .. you don't have to be sorry. you just tried to make a axel hater smile!

did it work?