(Hello everyone, I am Dimensionslayer, but you can just call me Arch. Now, I'm not too experienced with writing or too good with spelling, so expect a few mistakes here or there, or a mediocre story. Now then, when I grow up, I anna make video games. So, I've been thinking of multiple ideas for games. So here, I'm going to give you the main story of a game I want to make. I'll start with a bit of an opening prolouge, and see what you guys think of it. Now then, enough blabbering, let's get this started!)

 

 

  Welcome to the world of Kalodia! A world treaded by 9 different races. The ever-versatile Humans, the nature-loving Elves, the enslaved magic users, Servers. A long lost race, now roaming the world as the Undead, the man-built Mechs, the humanoid rhinos, the Rhinocyllan, the crocodillian race with the lost name, now called the "Snappers", the impish and trick-loving Demons, and the governers of Kalodia, the winged Angels. The world of Kalodia is made up of 9 continents, each homeland to the 9 races. At first, the races all lived in solitude from each other, afraid of what the other was. Now, they all live in harmony, helping each other out, and being as happy as can be. However, as of recent, monsters on all continents have been going out of control, without giving anyone the slightest clue as to why the monsters were attacking. Now, it's up to the Angel by the name of Tesse to go out into the world, and find out what's causing this!

 

(Kay guys, hope you enjoyed this! Honestly, I really hope I get to make the game I want. Anyways, thanks for reading, and I'll make Part 1 in the nearby future!)

 

http://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/999:_Nine_Hours,_Nine_Persons,_Nine_Doors

NEIN NEIN NEIN NEIN NEIN!!

http://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/999:_Nine_Hours,_Nine_Persons,_Nine_DoorsNEIN NEIN NEIN NEIN NEIN!!

Yeah, I was worried people might be mentioning this. Yes, I am well aware of 999. However, I have zero intention of even trying to reference that in this story. If I accidently reference it, it's by accident, because I've never played 999 yet. I'll get around to playing it at some point, but until then, the title stays as it is.

(Hello everyone, I am Dimensionslayer, but you can just call me Arch. Now, I'm not too experienced with writing or too good with spelling, so expect a few mistakes here or there, or a mediocre story. Now then, when I grow up, I anna make video games. So, I've been thinking of multiple ideas for games. So here, I'm going to give you the main story of a game I want to make. I'll start with a bit of an opening prolouge, and see what you guys think of it. Now then, enough blabbering, let's get this started!)   Welcome to the world of Kalodia! A world treaded by 9 different races. The ever-versatile Humans, the nature-loving Elves, the enslaved magic users, Servers. A long lost race, now roaming the world as the Undead, the man-built Mechs, the humanoid rhinos, the Rhinocyllan, the crocodillian race with the lost name, now called the "Snappers", the impish and trick-loving Demons, and the governers of Kalodia, the winged Angels. The world of Kalodia is made up of 9 continents, each homeland to the 9 races. At first, the races all lived in solitude from each other, afraid of what the other was. Now, they all live in harmony, helping each other out, and being as happy as can be. However, as of recent, monsters on all continents have been going out of control, without giving anyone the slightest clue as to why the monsters were attacking. Now, it's up to the Angel by the name of Tesse to go out into the world, and find out what's causing this! (Kay guys, hope you enjoyed this! Honestly, I really hope I get to make the game I want. Anyways, thanks for reading, and I'll make Part 1 in the nearby future!)

I took the time to read it... I like it. Basically there's 9 character Classes Human, Demon, Angel, ... "Snappers", etc.I look forward to reading more about this because PEACE AND HARMONY I NO LIKE >: D

sounds legit i wanna read more

(Hello everyone, I am Dimensionslayer, but you can just call me Arch. Now, I'm not too experienced with writing or too good with spelling, so expect a few mistakes here or there, or a mediocre story. Now then, when I grow up, I anna make video games. So, I've been thinking of multiple ideas for games. So here, I'm going to give you the main story of a game I want to make. I'll start with a bit of an opening prolouge, and see what you guys think of it. Now then, enough blabbering, let's get this started!)

 

 

  Welcome to the world of Kalodia! A world treaded by 9 different races. The ever-versatile Humans, the nature-loving Elves, the enslaved magic users, Servers. A long lost race, now roaming the world as the Undead, the man-built Mechs, the humanoid rhinos, the Rhinocyllan, the crocodillian race with the lost name, now called the "Snappers", the impish and trick-loving Demons, and the governers of Kalodia, the winged Angels. The world of Kalodia is made up of 9 continents, each homeland to the 9 races. At first, the races all lived in solitude from each other, afraid of what the other was. Now, they all live in harmony, helping each other out, and being as happy as can be. However, as of recent, monsters on all continents have been going out of control, without giving anyone the slightest clue as to why the monsters were attacking. Now, it's up to the Angel by the name of Tesse to go out into the world, and find out what's causing this!

 

(Kay guys, hope you enjoyed this! Honestly, I really hope I get to make the game I want. Anyways, thanks for reading, and I'll make Part 1 in the nearby future!)

Nice concept! Keep this idea with you and build on it. I'm sure if you try hard enough you can come close, if not create this game. I'm very interested, I would definitely play it!

Ooh, this is the one you told me about. Sounds great so far, keep it up!

Wow...people seem to like this so far! And I'm only scratching the surface...obviously. Alrighty then! The actual story, Chapter 1 will be coming your way...as soon as I get some business done in the real world first.