Did this for an English project- hopefully I get extra credit for the drawing! haha

This is a repaint of this drawing : 

 

http://edmund.typepad.com/.a/6a00e3982249d08833015433d73df8970c-800wi

 

I tried to make it more dark and brooding and confused? (The Sora drawing was practice for that) 

Criticism is welcome!

 

 

(Fixed version above)

Edited August 10, 201312 yr by Noby Raghavan

Why does it look like a woman to me?

Why does it look like a woman to me?

-forgot to define his cheekbone-  I just fixed it. I'll try and update the picture.

Edited August 10, 201312 yr by Noby Raghavan

ah! It looks pretty good! Still reminds me of a woman, but it's still good!

ah! It looks pretty good! Still reminds me of a woman, but it's still good!

haha thanks