Setting: Twilight Town, after the end of Sora's quest. At age 19, Sora lives with a now seperate person Roxas. 

CHARACTER: Roxas, Sora, King Mickey, Cecil, Zack Fair. 

MY CHARACTER: Roxas

I'm not going to lock/hide this topic, but this needs more information. A background story and a sign-up form is what most roleplays use here. How is a person supposed to know what OCs they can use? If any at all? Not everyone knows who Zack Fair is, especially Cecil. I highly recommend you put more information into this.

I'm not going to lock/hide this topic, but this needs more information. A background story and a sign-up form is what most roleplays use here. How is a person supposed to know what OCs they can use? If any at all? Not everyone knows who Zack Fair is, especially Cecil. I highly recommend you put more information into this.

Final Fantasy 4's Cecil The Paladin has come to Twilight Town in search of the King for help in nearby Traverse Town, where evil is stirring. Newly reborn Zack Fair, from Final Fantasy VII: Crisis Core comes along, weilding his sword as usual. 

With Roxas now a seperate person, after Sora gave away a year of memories to have him reborn, they lived in a small flat in Twilight Town. 

Characters for RP: Sora, Cecil, King Mickey, Zack. 

My Character: Roxas. 

Current story: Yet to begin. 

 

 

 

BETTER? 

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Character : SHAYSHAY

Gender: Both

Power: Weaveblade

Bio: A mysterious women who wields an powerful weapon known as the "weaveblade". She also has 10 children who also carry such power, there dad can too but however he is no where to be found. Shayshay, then found Roxas sitting on the curve. She then confronted Roxas and ask if he likes dark chocolate. 

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Character : SHAYSHAY

Gender: Both

Power: Weaveblade

Bio: A mysterious women who wields an powerful weapon known as the "weaveblade". She also has 10 children who also carry such power, there dad can too but however he is no where to be found. Shayshay, then found Roxas sitting on the curve. She then confronted Roxas and ask if he likes dark chocolate. 

Roxas kinda stared at the odd woman, but said: " No, only milk chocolate. Why?" 

" Milk chocolate? Wan't to meet my 3rd daughter Mai?" 

" Milk chocolate? Wan't to meet my 3rd daughter Mai?" 

Roxas considered this: Org. 13 had been ... shall we say... LOW in the female department, and he WAS 15 when the Xion thing happened. 

" Sure, ok. " 

" Cool, but she is only 12 years old you pervert" *Slaps Roxas*. ShayShay, then take out the power of the weave.

" Cool, but she is only 12 years old you pervert" *Slaps Roxas*. ShayShay, then take out the power of the weave.

Roxas sat there, cheek stinging, wondering exactly what had happened. After a while, he went home. 

 

 

ANYONE GOT CONTINUATION IDEAS? LIST OF CHARACTERS UP TOP! 

Roxas sat there, cheek stinging, wondering exactly what had happened. After a while, he went home. ANYONE GOT CONTINUATION IDEAS? LIST OF CHARACTERS UP TOP!

I think your plot is... Confused... Is that the word? I don't know. Anyway, if you want to make a big RP, you gotta think the plot through somewhat more, add in rules, maybe a sign-up sheet would help... Give us a premise of what we would be getting into, a small bio on the characters, or heck, a Wikia link works, too. TBH, this is probably one of the worst RP's I've seen in a while, and its just due to the lack of effort that was seemingly attempted. It could be good, if there was more of a reason for it to actually be in the RP section and to join...

I think your plot is... Confused... Is that the word? I don't know. Anyway, if you want to make a big RP, you gotta think the plot through somewhat more, add in rules, maybe a sign-up sheet would help... Give us a premise of what we would be getting into, a small bio on the characters, or heck, a Wikia link works, too. TBH, this is probably one of the worst RP's I've seen in a while, and its just due to the lack of effort that was seemingly attempted. It could be good, if there was more of a reason for it to actually be in the RP section and to join...

First attempt: fail. Nexr attempt: not gonna happen. Reason this sucks: My friends here are dumb. If it's savable, go ahead. 

Final Fantasy 4's Cecil The Paladin has come to Twilight Town in search of the King for help in nearby Traverse Town, where evil is stirring. Newly reborn Zack Fair, from Final Fantasy VII: Crisis Core comes along, weilding his sword as usual. 

With Roxas now a seperate person, after Sora gave away a year of memories to have him reborn, they lived in a small flat in Twilight Town. 

Characters for RP: Sora, Cecil, King Mickey, Zack. 

My Character: Roxas. 

Current story: Yet to begin. 

 

 

 

BETTER? 

What Silver said,you need to post more information on that story...

STORY: Ten years after his quest has ended, Sora is but a shell of his former self: Depression has set in over the years, as snarls of memories of Kairi and Riku all but consume him. Sacrificing a year's worth of memories, forgetting all that occured in the Dream Realm, Sora was able to give Roxas a Heart, and allow him to become a whole person. The two now share a flat in the back alley of Twilight Town, taking each day as it comes, waiting for... something.

That " something " arrives after a year: Cecil, a man from a distant land called Baron, arrives in Twilight Town one foggy night with a young man named Zack, searching for Sora and Roxas. Directed to them by Rosa Cecilineea, the barkeep at the One Winged Angel, he meets Sora in the alley while Sora trudges home.

His news is grim: The Worlds are being invaided again, but by a new threat: Amity's. A terrible cross between Heartless and Nobodies, Amity's feature both skill ranges, and are able to utterly possess someone.

Telling Sora he must leave at once, because Destiny Islands are under attack, he and Roxas pack a few things, and leave immediatly. Unknown to them, Destiny Isalnds has been destroyed, and Kairi and Riku are lost among worlds noone even knew exsisted, searching for an answer to end this battle. The foursome travel to Traverse Town to prepare, which is where our story begins.

 

SORA: 20 GENDER: Male WEAPON: Keyblade HISTORY: Former Hero of The Worlds, bitterness has set in over the years. It appears fate is not willing to let him go yet.

 

CEIL, THE PALADIN OF LIGHT: 32 GENDER: Male WEAPON: Sword of The Realm HISTORY: Once the leader of the Red Wings of Baron, fate dropped Cecil into a massive quest, first ot save his beloved, then Baron. Even his might was useless against an Amity attack on Baron.

 

ZACK FAIR: 18 GENDER: Male WEAPON: Broadsword Slasher  HISTORY: Originally a SOLIDER under Directer Lazard, Zack Fair's life was cut short. Recently revived from as yet unkonwn means, his memories are still hazy.

 

ROXAS, THE TIMID LIGHT IN THE DARKNESS: 20 GENDER: Male HISTORY: Once a Nobody, and a member of Org. 13, his " Other", Sora, sacrificed a years worth of memories to resurrect him as a whole person. Still reeling from the gap from 15 to 20, he appears naive and childish at times, but is a dedicated warrior.

 

PLOT: Travel the Worlds, gather intel, defeat the amity's, search for the cause of this new threatm and eventually save Riku and Kairi.

 

 

CHARACTERS FOR RP: Cecil, Zack Fair, Sora + Any OC's that fit

Okay... Well... Why is Sora depressed? And for that matter, how do they extract the memories to reform Roxas, since Xion is the creature made of memories...? What are the rules? Or a way you want us to request a character, which there are few of, unless your including Original Characters, which requires a Sign Up sheet, or a notice of some kind that OC's are allowed or of they are not? And if not, why? And what are people going to do if they want to join and your small roster is filled?

Okay... Well... Why is Sora depressed? And for that matter, how do they extract the memories to reform Roxas, since Xion is the creature made of memories...? What are the rules? Or a way you want us to request a character, which there are few of, unless your including Original Characters, which requires a Sign Up sheet, or a notice of some kind that OC's are allowed or of they are not? And if not, why? And what are people going to do if they want to join and your small roster is filled?

See intire KH series for why Sora's depressed. Namine was reformed as well * SPOILER * she's waiting further in the story. RULES: Get Sora to Riku and Kairi, fight the villians, save the worlds. Characters posted are main: ALL OC's welcome. Just post in my status if you want a character. Only KH/FF relatable oc's allowed. Roster filled? Create a new character! 

PS: I've never done a RP before, so cut me some slack, I'm making this up on the fly. 

See intire KH series for why Sora's depressed. Namine was reformed as well * SPOILER * she's waiting further in the story. RULES: Get Sora to Riku and Kairi, fight the villians, save the worlds. Characters posted are main: ALL OC's welcome. Just post in my status if you want a character. Only KH/FF relatable oc's allowed. Roster filled? Create a new character! PS: I've never done a RP before, so cut me some slack, I'm making this up on the fly.

Okay... But... The entire time of Sora's journey he has never been depressed, and has no reason to be. It's kinda like your inserting a new guy who looks and sounds like him, instead, and there is no such reason for this development. For example, an old RP I made was going to have Sora turn into the final boss, after he had to see many worlds fall, many friends die, and the "die a hero or live to be the villain" style of character development was born, and it had a perpouse to it. Also, the rules ate things to keep in mind when you post. I.E., a rule would be like "No GMing, or God modding" which means you cannot be invincible and all-powerful: you gotta take hits to also deal them. Then there are those weird people who Cyber... But I'm not going to explain that. Never allow Cybering, even if you don't know what it is. But your rules is a somewhat decent story premise that sums up the main story article if you didn't understand the main article. Also, you probably shouldn't have that on statuses, especially of an RP gets popular, since only 100 comments are allowed, including your own responces. My personal way of making RP's is to make an OOC, or out of character and sign up thread, so you can keep things organised and answer questions efficiently.And I can't cut you slack, sorry. I'm not doing this to be mean, but for your benifit if you want to be a RP host. RP's take more work than just slappig a mini-fan-story together and posting it in the RP section(note, everything I've been typing is intended to be in a tone that seems friendly and like I'm trying to help, not yell at you)

Okay... But... The entire time of Sora's journey he has never been depressed, and has no reason to be. It's kinda like your inserting a new guy who looks and sounds like him, instead, and there is no such reason for this development. For example, an old RP I made was going to have Sora turn into the final boss, after he had to see many worlds fall, many friends die, and the "die a hero or live to be the villain" style of character development was born, and it had a perpouse to it. Also, the rules ate things to keep in mind when you post. I.E., a rule would be like "No GMing, or God modding" which means you cannot be invincible and all-powerful: you gotta take hits to also deal them. Then there are those weird people who Cyber... But I'm not going to explain that. Never allow Cybering, even if you don't know what it is. But your rules is a somewhat decent story premise that sums up the main story article if you didn't understand the main article. Also, you probably shouldn't have that on statuses, especially of an RP gets popular, since only 100 comments are allowed, including your own responces. My personal way of making RP's is to make an OOC, or out of character and sign up thread, so you can keep things organised and answer questions efficiently.And I can't cut you slack, sorry. I'm not doing this to be mean, but for your benifit if you want to be a RP host. RP's take more work than just slappig a mini-fan-story together and posting it in the RP section(note, everything I've been typing is intended to be in a tone that seems friendly and like I'm trying to help, not yell at you)

I'm giving up: I'm not cut out for RP. Tell the mods to delete away! I've tried, failed epicly. 

I'm giving up: I'm not cut out for RP. Tell the mods to delete away! I've tried, failed epicly. 

there's no reason to quit making them, the first one is always kinda off. You get better with experience, so keep trying, just make sure to think the RP over a few times before you make it and you should be fine.