Ok, for those who know "The Domo Chronicles" series, this is the next Sequal to the first story. This is about Veinxs Poisenberry, a time machine, and an experience of a thousand life times....

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Chapter 1- Veinxs The Inventor:

 

Setting: Poisenberry's Blacksmith Shop, Domopie City, England

Year: 1516

 

It had been a year since I had traveled the lands of Domo, and defeated that demonic creation, D.O.O.M. I still think about those times, and Doom's last words which still haunt my memory today. The wolf pups Seever The Beast Merchant had given me are almost to full growth now, I tought them many things, like how to speak (For Werewolves are one of the few creatures able to speak to wolves and dogs). The Black coated wolf I had named Robuck, after my deceased guardian. The Light coated wolf I had named Bane. These wolves are brothers, their mother died fending off Doom who she was apparently, in the way of. Robuck was a short tempered wolf, always wanted to get into a fight, but Bane was very peaceful and quiet, a very shy wolf. They are each other's opposites, which is how you can tell brotherhood I guess. I made them pillows to sleep on, and so they lay upon when bored or tired in the main lobbey, in front of my counter top.

 

I am now tinkering with a small bronze box, about yea larger than a Gnome (Gnomes are generally 15 cm tall with their hats on, their hats are 3 cm tall) *A bell was heard, signalling the shop's front door opening, two familiar faces walk through*

"Hey Veinxs." Ron and Seever said in unsion, waving their hands at me while walking heather to the row of wooden chairs I have against the back wall, they sat down. "Hey guys." I said, not looking up, too busy. "Hey wolves." They said in comical unsion once again to my pets. "Hey guys." I heard them say through my transformed ears. "Thou and wonder'st Poisenberry, what device has thine possed in hand?" Seever asked, looking at my invention. "Its a time machine i'm making." I said. "Oh...." He replied. It took a moment...

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"A TIME MACHINE?!!!!1!1!1!" both exclaimed, rocketing the shop. They dashed to the front of the counter. "Why-how would'st, for tangible?" Ron babbled. "Indeed my friends, what I have before is a time machine, set to send me through the world and its many stages in life, I wish to see it all." I explained. "How can one obtain to control such devices?" Seever asked. "The elements." I replied. "Ah, of course." He said, facepalming himself. I then completed the box by medling with my own hands, the outer wall of the box to the machine, completeing.

 

"Gentlemen, I have before you, the finished time box!" I said, proudly holding it up. "It probably fails in working." Ron said passing it by. He sat back to the chair he was sitting before. "I mean, thats just as impossible as Alchemy dear Poisenberry." He said gesturing his hands. I then stared at him, while touching the time machine with my index finger, causing it to turn into gold, and then releasing my finger, it changed back. Ron had a stupid expression on his face. I could hear the wolves silently snickering to themselves, along with my dear Vampire friend, Seever. "Indeed, well, dost thou wish me to accompany you to this voyage?" Ron asked, but before I could answer, Siofrine barged through the doors and walked over to the front counter. "I think not Ronald, if you were to go with Veinxs on his trip through time, there would be a better chance of exposure from the past. We must keep the trip, a secret." Siofrine had said, and I nodded with him, for it was my answer as well. (If you want a better mental image of what Siofrine might look and act like, think of a taller, skinner medieval version of Zexion, and Siofrine is an Elf as well so...yeah)

 

"Exactly Ron, I must go alone." I said. "Who will run the shop while your gone heather?" Seever asked. "My dear wolves shall protect it, I trust." I said. "Then when will you leave?" He asked. "Morrow by sun rise." I said.

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Chapter 1 completed, any comments?

Of course as always, I'm anxious to see what will happen with Veinxs when he travels trough time

(Wow...two chapters in one day? This is crazy! Oh well, just call me a Lunatic. )

 

Chapter 2 - The Day of Decades:

 

-The next morning, at the strike of sunlight-

 

I stood on a rocky platform in the center of the city, a huge crowd of everybody was gathered around me, itching to see the device in action. "Hail Domopie! I, Prince Veinxs Poisenberry, am before ye all today, to show you the extent of the elements! Behold! The Time box!" I exclaimed to the crowd, holding up my inventions in my hands before them. "Siofrine! The powder!" I called forth towards Siofrine, who emerged from the crowd of myths to give me a small purple bag full of magical powder. "Remember Veinxs, drown it in water, burn it in fire, mix it with sand or throw it in the wind. To be able to use it, just don't use all of it." Siofrine reminded me, on how to activate the magic powder.

 

I then nodded and took my eyes on the machine, I then transformed into my werewolf attribute and activated the machine. Electricity sparked all around it, it tremored and shaked, I got a little scared. Then a portal sprang open in front of me and the crowd. Guards and Knights haulted the crowd away from the portal and its amazement. "It works." I said, I could have thought that a smile crept within me, but it diddn't show. I then took a step forward, but before my foot reached the portal. There was a dark voice heard in the background, it was deep and demonic: "Hi sa' nun ' sunna' yehi ' hadionyagenonon HA!" Suddenly a dark bullet of sorts emerged from the crowd of people and struck me as I was entering the portal, I then fell inside, noticing the portal close. And fell to unconciousness.

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(Screw it, i'm doin' 3 chapters in 1 day! -.-' Someone stop me please!)

 

Chapter 3 - Ahoy! Werewolf on the starboard bow!:

 

Setting: A bay near an ocean-sided town or village

Year: 1523

 

I was falling, I fell straight through the clouds, there was a pain to my side as I fell for these many minutes, I managed to open my right eye, to see wind rushing past me, the ocean spread out, sunlight glistening it, it would have been peaceful ,except I was covered in what seemed to be darkness, the darkness was sparking and electrifying my entire body, then it formed into some sort of needle or crystallic structure to the right half of my body, it glowed with an aura, after that it shattered into a strange ameoba shape and reformed in the form of a human! A human boy, long black hair, skin as tan as mine, no shirt, he was a skinny boy like me, peaceful face even if it was closed, he was wearing some bit of tattered pants, brown cotton I think. Who was this guy, he looked somewhat like....me? And the same about age too. I was strikingly in human form again. I noticed because I had just crashed into the bay along with this boy, and I looked at myself underwater to see a human skin once again. I was weak, and couldn't carry the boy with me, so I used what bit of strength I had left to swim upward to the dock of the bay. There I pulled myself out, and passed out again, but at least it was in air and not in water.

 

Later I awoke, I was lying in a comfy bed, in a small wooden cabin, there was a man sitting in a chair in front of my bed. "Ahoy there son, looks like you fell in the water." He said, his voice muscular and somewhat courageous. The man was wearing a bandanna, white cotton shirt, leather vest, brown shorts, and leather boots, he had a belt that held a dagger and some sort of contraption...a throwing weapon? I do not know. He saw me looking at the thing. "Oh, are you curious about this? Its a pistol boy, just bought it fresh off the market." He said bringing it out and twirling it around with his fingers, so it was a play toy? "Pi...stol...." I managed to say. "Thats right." He said, then another man walked through the door. He was an old man, and wore glasses. "Your lucky son, it seemed you would have died if old Sinbad hadn't found you lying on the dock." The old man said, I guess he was the medicine keeper of the village. "But your healthy from what I can tell, and your clothes fully dry, you can leave anytime you want to." He admitted and threw my pile of clothing on my bed on top of me and left the room. "Salty old fool, but he helps. As you heard, the name's Sinbad, Sinbad the Sailor." Sinbad said raising his hand at me. I grabbed it and he shook it. "You have a name child?" He asked. I was going to say Veinxs Poisenberry, but then thought I shouldn't have, Siofrine said to keep low in identity, so I thought of a different name. "My name...is...uhh...Kevin.....Packwood!" I scrambled from within my head. "Ok Mr. Packwood, do you have any mother I can return you to?" He asked. "No, everyone is dead." I said, partly saying the truth. "Oh, i'm sorry to hear that boy, well, then you can get dressed and follow me on my ship. Prepare for a new life boy, your gonna get one." He said and got up, then walked out the door. I had a bad feeling about this. -.-'

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Thats enough chapters for the day lol.

I know that name Sorage This were good chapters too, I wonder if Veinxs will go back soon.

Chapter 4- Cabin wolf:

 

I quickly transformed and threw my old armor and weapons into sand, the found some stray clothing and dressed in just some shorts and sandals. Then I exited outside the door into the gleaming sunlight.

 

I stumbled onto a stoney street surrounded by houses of wood and humans all around. "Where are all the other races?" I thought to myself, but then I heard a loud whistle to the left of me and saw Sinbad the human wave towards me with a smile. I ran over to him. "Boy, what be ye in such clothes?" he asked looking at my simple clothing. "They were all I could find." I said. "We'll deal with that later boy, for now, just look over there-" Sinbard pointed my head to the direction of the docks, a massive wooden ship was held there, unloading and loading supplies. "A ship?" I asked. "A home." He answered and lead me to the front deck of the ship.

 

I was rushed into a crowd of massive humans, some skinny as me, others bulging with muscles. Some were to be frightening, others were to be skillfull and cunning. Sinbad pushed me to the center of the deck, where a massive crowd then formed around us. "Here me my crew, this boy has arrived with no home and no life. Welcome our new cabin boy: Mr. Packwood!" Sinbad said, presenting me to the crew. I was a little embarrased and nervous, strange feelings, I guess they were not lost with the other feelings back at the other time period. "I then spent the time meeting the crew one by one, introduced as "Mr. Packwood" always, I guess i'd have to live under such identity. The sun was setting, and the crew were leaving below deck and through doors. "Its about time to go to bed." Sinbad said putting his hand on my shoulder with a smirk. "But where would I sleep?" I asked. "Overe here." He said leading me to a door that was on the top deck, when he opened it, there were two nets tied up next to a wall, then a desk and a lantern. "What are those?" I asked pointing to the nets. "Those are hammoks boy, you sleep in them." He told me, and then spent a few minutes explaining the hammok and how to use one. Sinbad then left me within the room and I fell to sleep, it was...peaceful. Better than my bed back at home.

 

Before I knew it I heard the major crash of a large bell dinging back and forth across the corridors of the ship and deck. I quickly spun out of my hammok in suprise and collapsed stupidly onto the floor. I got up from my rude awakening and found new clothing left upon the desk next to my hammok and the other vacant hammok. I guess Sinbad left them for me. I put them on: A leather vest, no shirt, brown cotton shorts, leather boots, and a rope for a belt. He also gave me a red bandanna to wear, from what I saw on some other sailors, I guessed it went on my head. I then walked out my cabin door to the front deck.

 

"What's happening?" I asked the sailor with the bell. "Well its breakfast Mr. Packwood, the crew is leaving off the ship, to the village and towards the nearest Inn." The sailor replied. "Would you like to join us?" He asked. "Uhh, no thanks. I'll stay here." I said and walked along the deck. I then went to the front edge and began to stare out to the rising Sun, yawing a good morn'.

 

A few hours later I heard my fellow shipmates walk along the deck, back from a good eat. "Hey crew." I greeted them. "Hey Kevin." They moaned, obviously their stomachs full to burst. Sinbad came to my side. "Enjoying the view?" He asked. A smile on his face and his hands behind his back, he was wearing a big and strange hat. "What be with the hat Sinbad?" I asked, looking at it. "This is a captain's hat, boy. I'm the captain of this ship." He explained. "I see. So what now, captain?" I asked. "We head out to sea, and sail the oceans looking for new lands and new treasure." He said. "Now we must shove off boy, and depart to our next destina-" Captain! We have a route!" yelled a sailor running to Sinbad with a map at his hand. "What now Hinks? Do we have a ship?" Sinbad asked. "We have three, captain." He said, opening the map along the deck flooring, and pointing at a large circled area in a blue background. Sinbad then got into action, He rose from his crouching position. He began shouting to different crewmen. "Jared! Alarm the crew! Busk! Prepare the sails! Hicks! Throw onto lookout! Packwood! Your with me." He said and fast-walked to the stairway leading below deck, I followed.

You really know how to do a great story i willnever could write like you do. Great story.

Chapter 5: Inner weapon-

 

I followed Captian Sinbad down the wooden stairway and across the corridors of the ship. He then reached the very last dorr, at the end of the corridor. "Mr. Packwood, its time to prepare yourself in the art of swordplay. Can you handle a sword?" He asked. "I know my way around the edge captain." I said, trying my best to hide an inner smirk. "Good." He said and opened the door which lead me into a large room. There was a woman and a man behind a huge counter. Around them were swords hung on walls and those strangely shaped metal things laying about the counter. "Terry! Timmy! We need a fitting." Sinbad said putting his hand on my shoulder and leading me to the front of the counter. Terry and Timmy were identical twin siblings, they sure looked like pirates. Sinbad explained to me how Terry was skilled with creating and using ranged weapons, like bows, crossbows and pistols (those strangely shapped objects) and Timmy was skilled with the melee weapons, swords, axes, anything not ranged basically. "Timmy, Mr. Packwood here is our new recruit, needing a nice sword to fit his heart. I'll leave the rest to you." He said and with that, he walked out the door.

 

"Ok Mr. Packwood, let's see what fits you..." Timmy said.

 

*5 hours had passed, within that time I was fitted with different swords and weapons, one by one Timmy said diddn't go for my heart, my "Inner Weapon" he called it. But then...*

 

"Ok Mr. Packwood, lets see you handle this broadsword." Timmy said giving me a leather handled broadsword, immediatly Timmy saw the spark in my eyes. "YES! TERRY! WE FOUND THE MATCH!" Timmy yelled, rushing to get his sister. He pulled her with him to the front of me. "Oh really? Give the sword a few strokes boy, show us what you both can do." She said, disbelived that Timmy found the right weapon for a mere boy of my age and stature. I then presumed a few attacks with the sword. Slashing, dicing and spinning in the air and on the ground. Terry was amazed as well as Timmy. "Ok brother, we found it." She told him, and patted him on the soulder, then got back to the counter. "Since you already know how to use the sword boy, go up to the captain and give him the news." Terry said with a smile. I nodded and walked out, my new sword starpped to my back by a leather chest-belt. I walked up deck to find some of the crew gathered around Sinbad, I walked to the front of the crowd. "Ahh Mr. Packwood, so good to see you. Your just in time to see the plans of attack." Sinbad said. "Ok boys, were going to give those merchants a run for life. Broads go in 3 for the first wave, have the seconds of rapier cross blades on both ends and in middle, lastly another wave of broad to overflow their battles. You got that boys?" Sinbad exlaimed. "Aye!" The crew routed in the air, they were excited enough for the raid. I still was a little unsire o the plan of attack. "Arr...Captain, what be Broads and raipers?" I asked, a few laughs were noticed in the crowd. "Mr. Packwood, Broads are Broadsword-weilding men like yourself, i'm asking for 3 of you to enter the first ship and start killing, then 5 raiper weilding men come from the other side of the ship and invade. Lastly we're having 3 more broads come in from the front to kill the last of them. We're aiming to kill the crew and not the ship so don't knock off the mast boy." Sinbad chuckled. "Clear as a diamond now?" He asked. "Aye Captain." I said.

 

Suddenly there was a huge shaking of the entire ship as it sailed on the ocean. "What be this?! Busks! How is she?" Sinbad immediatly said, getting ahold of his balance. "We might have his coral and reef captain! But none were known to be in this area." Busks reported to the captain, reading the ocean map below him. Crewmen started looking out the edge of the ship, and a few started yellin unknown words. Sinbad ran towards them. "What be?" He asked. "Captain, man overboard!" One man said and pointed to a figure slapped along the bow of the ship. They spent the next few minutes wrangling him up. When they threw the body on the ship's deck I was suprised. It was that boy, the one that fell from me when I entered this place. "Captain, he's coming to." said Bert, the ship's doctor. "U-ughh...w-what is this?" siad they boy of long black hair. slowly sitting upward with a hand to his forehead. "Boy, what is your name?" Asked Sinbad, concern about the boy and down on one knee, his hat taken to his hands. "M-M-Mo...od..." The boy managed to utter. And fell unconcious once again. "Mood? What be. Jared! Take this boy to th nearest cabin and have him rest in dry land's skin. We don't want a dead child by introduction." Sinbad said. "Aye captain." Jared, a large-muscled guy said. Then we heard shouting from the crow's nest up above. "Captain! Merchants 'head!" Yelled Hicks - Hicks was a scrawny kid. A red and white-stripped bandanna on his head, golden hair, glasses to the maximum and a keen eye for lookout. "Aye! You heard the boy! Throw to position!" Sinbad yelled and we scrambled to our places, I was lead to the last wave of broads, crouched behind the back of the ship. Its time to show these bloody humans of the future what a Werewolf can do!

I can't wait fopr the next part of the story, I want to know what Veinxs will do.

Chapter 6: Sweet, Sweet Blood!-

 

I heard in front of me as our ship crashed into the merchant ship next to us, almost immediatly the fellow crewmen of my ship gathered rope and tied us with them, the first wave of pirates jumped, swinged and walked across large wooden boards onto the other ship and began killing. The merchants were so suprised and confused that they diddn't notice the raipers entering from the other side of their ship, the crewmen were able to do this by diving quickly into the ocean itself and surfacing on the other side of the ship, which by there the first wave of broads would lower ropes and nets for the raipers to climb in. A few minutes later it was my group's turn. I wasn't afraid though, of course, and was the second in my wave to jump across.

 

To the first enemy I see, my blade went right through him. The fear in his eyes, the loss of emotion in mine. He shivered to the floor, and I couldn't resist the temptation of licking the sweet and still warm blood from my steel blade. And with that I got back into action and started my silent swinging one by one, bodies fell, blood arose, and soon enough I was in the center of a massive dead circle of men. With my blade stained by their blood. There was hooting and cheering from my shipmates. "Good job boy, I knew I sensed something in you." said a familiar voice putting his hand on my shoulder. "Load up the ship! We need to suprise the next two!" Yelled Sinbad to the mates, and I helped them carry supplies and treasure to our ship. We then sped onto the next ship and killed them off easily, and then we saw the third ship.

 

I arrived on deck first this time, but there were no merchants to be seen. But there was blood everywhere on deck. I signaled for the rest of the attack crew to come on deck. We searched the ship but there was no sign of life, until we saw a boy, standing on the center of the deck with a dagger in his hand and the decapitated head of a sailor in the other. "Sweet God." I heard a pirate gasp. Others reacted the same. The boy, long black hair, no shirt, tanned skin the same as mine, brown cotton pants, no shoes. It was him, the boy that came out of me when I entered this place. "Ahoy there boy! What be your name?!" Shouted a pirate in the background. The boy merely stood there, and slowly turned to face us. "My name............is.........Mood." He slowly and deeply spoke, there was a shock amongst the crowd. Sinbad arose from the crowd. "Boy, were you the cause of this ship's crew in death?" he asked. "...." there was no answer. Mood then set eyes on me. "You...." he said, pointing a finger directly at me. "Me?" I asked. I could tell something bad was going to happen, but then, a shot of light blasted in Mood's eyes, he appeared to get an awful headache, he dropped his dagger and fell to the deck. "Lets get him on board, we need a good killer like this one." Sinbad said. "No!" I exclaimed, reaching my hand outward. "What?" Sinbad asked. "You don't need us." I said and walked to Mood. My anger rising. "Mr. Packwood! What are you doing?!" Sinbad exclaimed. I picked up Mood underneath my arm and threw my bandanna hat on the deck. "Its time for us to move on, do not try to stop." I said and transformed before their eyes, my clothing ripped and teared off me and I appeared to have my old armor on me again. I threw down my sword. A few of the crew actually fainted. "Mr. Packwood! Wh-what are you?!" Yelled Sinbad. "A Werewolf." I said and brought out my Time Box and lifted it in the air. A blast of elemental energy came out of it and a portal opened behind me. I then walked threw the portal, my ears noticing as every crewman fainted from this unexpected sight of me. Then the portal closed.

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This section of the story that included Pirates would had been longer, but i'm shortening the story. For this forum.

this is awsome! thers no way im as good as you

your excellent keep it up!

Chapter 7: Meet the clan-

 

Setting: A deep and thick forest

 

Year: 1200

 

I fell through the portal onto hard dirt along with Mood. I got up quickly and found I was human again. "It seems the elements consisting within the Time Box affect my form." I said pondering to myself. I then looked at the black-haired boy regaining consiousness next to me. "Uuughh, w-where am I?" He said looking around. Then saw me. "Who are you?" He asked, I saw innocence in his eyes. "I-err...my name is....." I stuttered. I ddin't know if I should lie or say the truth. I guess the secret was out anyways. "My name is Veinxs Poisenberry. I'm the prince of Werewolves, but are also the last Werewolf on Earth." I said. "I see." He said, getting up and dusting himself off. "So, what's a Werewolf?" He asked.

 

O_o I nearly collapsed by the question. "You mean to tell me you don't know about Werewolves?! Where were you even from boy?" I said crossing my arms over my chest. "The planet Mars. Where lushious green life flows across the lands." He said. "Mars?" I asked. Confused. "So your not from anywhere around here? Or even...this planet?" I asked. "Thats correct. The last thing I remembered was...helping my friends build something...and then everything went blank." He said. "I see." I said. and looked around at my surroundings. Thick plants and wildlife. "Well, Mood. Stick closely with me and don't get lost. And lets start exploring our new landscape." I said and began walking forward, Mood obeyed and walked beside me. We wandered for an hour or so and found something sticking out of a tree in front of us. I walked closer and saw that it was an arrow! "Humans." I said, a small grunt expelled from me when that was said. I grabbed the arrow and began sniffing it, "I got them." I said and began tracking northward, Mood followed. Later we came to a human settlement, we hid behind bushes and peeked through. There were many of them, very tan skin, they were dancing around a fire and seemed to be having fun. But that dance looked familiar.....hmmm..."Veinxs." Mood asked. "Huh? Yes Mood?" I said. "What do we do now?" He asked. "We wait for the right moment to pounce, and kill them off." I said. "WHAT?!!!" Mood exclaimed extremely loudly. "GAHH!" I said, the humans overheard us and saw right at us. "Tsa'la'gi!" They said, and charged at us! "FOOL! THEY NOTICED US!" I yelled at Mood, grabbing his arm and running away, but they caught up to us and captured us. We were then tied up to a couple of wooden poles back at their settlement while they gathered around us.

 

"What are they staring at?" Mood asked. "What do you think?!" I said, a little pissed off by him. Then the human leader came from a tent and walked up to me. He looked closely, then looked at Mood. "He then spoke to the crowd.

 

"Wait a sec." I said. "I know that language." I said hearing in. I was certain, IT WAS THE WEREWOLF LANGUAGE!!! "But these can't be Werewolves! There would be transformed men and women walking around then." I said. Then two old women walked out of a tent and came to us. They looked a little menecing. There were also snakes tattooed to the bottom of their lips, so that when they spoke, it looked like the snakes were hissing. They started talking to me in my language, and I spoke back fluently. Mood seemed confused. "What did they say?" He asked. "They think we are warriors of an enemy tribe of humans. And are wondering what our death sentence is going to be." I translated. *For the rest of this time period, all werewolf-speaking humans would be speaking English in this story to translate easily.*

 

"Perhaps we should cut their feet open and fill it with corn mesh, so when they run they would be beating the corn for us while we chase them and kill them." One woman suggested. "No no sister, why not tie their necks tightly and throw them in the river, and watch their struggling for air." The other suggested. "Hi! (Hey!) How can you speak the language of wolves?" I asked. "Wolves? We are the Cherokee Indians, Wolf Clan. This is OUR language spoken by the entire nation." One of the old women said. I was confused. Is this THAT time period then? The period when humans and animals could speak to each other the same language? Where life was beginning? "Hold on! I am a powerful warrior of no one's tribe, and so is my brother here." i siad pointing my head over to Mood next to me. "Could we not help you for our freedom?" I asked. The women pondered, they looked over to our strange weapons and at our cloathing and mishapped moccasins. "Well, the Uktena has been bothering the settlement lately, and we would be in use for its U'lun'su'ti'." One of the old woment said. "Hiyu (yes) sister, we could always do that." The other agreed. "Great! We will kill the Uktena and bring back the diamond!" I said. Mood seemed uneasy. "Very well, but you will need new cloathing for the trip. Your wear is strange." The cheif said in. We agreed and later, walked off. Wearing buck skin clothing and bear skinned moccasins. We brought our own weapons along though. "Veinxs...just what is an Uktena?" Mood asked. I explained:

 

"The Uktena is a giant snake, with horns sprouted from is head and a blazing fire-like diamond on its forehead. The snake breathes fire and can kill you instantly if not careful." I said. I heard Mood gulp. "But no worries, just try to pry off the jewel without looking at it and i'll do the rest by killing the snake." I said. (The Uktena is a real Cherokee mythological creature, it is also known as the "Cherokee Dragon", more information is located in my website, link located in the sig)

 

We walked for an hour long or so and finally heard a snapping sound, then rushed forwards between the trees to see the broken body of a fallen indian in front of the Uktena itself, its snake eyes burning with insanity and killing instinct. "Time to kill." I said and transformed in a blaze of leaves and dirt. I then pounced and dashed for the Seventh spot from the Uktenta's head, for that is where its heart is. Mood leaped from tree to tree and jumped straight onto the monster's head, grabbing his dagger for prying off the diamond, which was on fire all the time. Things were going to get bloody.

This is getting so exciting, can't wait to read more.

Mood? I know that name: DOOM is back!!! *Veinx, you'll have to get rid of DOOM again:D:D *

Chapter 8- Weird Animals:

 

I dodged a swinging tail heading towards me by the Uktena and stabbed at it with my sword. "GAHHHH!!! SKA TSA'LA'GI!" (Gahhh! Die Cherokee!) The Uktena spoke as it reacted to the pain. "W-what?! It speaks?!" Mood said in suprise, almost being knocked off balance from the Uktena swaying its head back and forth. I dodged backward, unable to retreive my sword. "Mood, all the animals in this time period are able to speak. This was before the great magic wars." I said jumping to the top of the nearest tree and dash/jumping to my sword, but the Uktena still swung his tail at me and knocked me back at the tree. Painful -.-'. Mood then held onto the monster's head by grabbing hold of it's Antler-like horns. "Alright, if thats how you want it..." I said painfully transforming more into my werewolf state, "Then i'll have to kill you!" I said pouncing to its back and clawing my way in. "*hisssss* Yun'Waya?" (*hisss* Werewolf?") The Uketena said in suprise. I clawed myself a good sized hole but the Uktena smashed me into a nearby rock and knocked me to the front of it. "Now you will see my power!" It said, and then breathed a ring of fire around me, I was surrounded by a wall of flames! "Crap!" I said flickering my eyes to different places. But luckily, Mood was just finished prying out the diamond on the Uktena's forehead, when it popped out like a bad zit, I caught the U'lun'su'ti and showed it with pride. For as I knew, the U'lun'su'ti diamond was the source of the Uktena's power. So the giant snake fell dead from the sight. And the fire deceased. I reformed back to human. "Whew Veinxs! That was a good kill huh?" Mood said jumping off the monster's felled head. Blood oozing out of its hole in the forehead where the diamond was. "I suppose so." I said, getting my sword. We then walked off back to the Cherokee settlement. A few hours later, we heard celebrating as they heard the news of the monster's death. We presented them with the diamond and they gave us our lives to leave with us. So after we slept for the night there, we left on the same trail.

 

On the walk, Mood was enjoying himself being able to talk with the animals, even though I had to translate every time. At least we wern't being chased by the Cherokee's Wolf Clan or being attacked by giant snakes. But there were other monsters in Werewolf legend, that had me worried. ....

 

and I was right to be worried....-.-'

Very good, this story is very interesting, please continue.

Chapter 9: Ka Lanu' Ahe' ki liski-

 

 

We treked the forrested area for a few hours more, fending off against some ghosts of past indians, panthers, sceaming little people, and other monsters. Eventually Mood was injured after an attack and I built a small hollow cubed house to rest us in. I layed Mood on a raised stone block and used animal skin along with bird feathers to make a pillow and blanket. I then left the house to climb a tree and get a view of the surrounding land.

 

Ahhh, the fresh breeze in the wind, the pine trees all around this open forest, blue skies, barely any clouds. The sweet smells of the animals and landscape overfilled my nose. I felt at peace.

 

Then I noticed a rustle in the bushes, I looked down near Mood's home, nothing there, I looked around and spotted some Raven Mockers rushing past the forests to Mood. Raven Mockers are Cherokee Myth, they are basically witches that feed off the dying, they must have noticed Mood's wound and are closing in for impact. "This place is becoming dangerous." I said, jumping down from tree to tree to finally in the path of the 2 Witches.

 

"Gahh. Who be there in the path of us?" Said one Raven Mocker to me as they stopped in my sights. ("Crap, I forgot, only a medicine man can drive away the cannabilistic Raven Mockers.") I said in mind. "Umm..." I flinched, then ran at high speeds to Mood's house.

 

I busted through the door. "Veinxs, what's wrong?" Mood said suddenly getting up. He was injured in the leg badly. "We gotta go." I said, grabbing our stuff, his arm, and using the time box to portal us outta this damned place!

 

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This story's gonna get a little confusing later on, so be prepared fellow fans.

This story is way too good, Mood looks so different than the one from your other story. That's one of the things that makes me curious.

Note: There would have been other time places but i'm skipping through to the near end.

 

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Chapter 10- City Wolf:

 

Setting: A place filled with large stone rectangles and loud noises.

 

Year: ...2010...

 

 

Mood and I barged out of the time portal, and landed face-first into some garbage piles. In a spot between two rocks and that smelled horrible.

 

"Ugh...W-where are we?" Mood asked, grabbing ahold of the ground with one hand and carrying his head with the other. "I do not quite know Mood...But be careful." I said while looking around. We carefully watched the terrain, and slowly peeked our heads out from the spot we were to a more open area.

 

"This was a strange place indeed. Ground as black as Hell. With yellow markings. Creatures i've never seen before running as such high speeds! They make terrible noises, they flatulate every step they take. There are people in this place...walking as if strangers to each other and themselves. But I only smell humans. Where are the trees? The birds? The fish? The life? Stone rocks with holes cut into them lined along a path. We were scared.

 

Then! Out from the left distance came a raging beast! Flashing lights atop its head. Strange markings along its body. The beast stopped in front of us, the fear in our eyes, a human broke out of the monster! And ran towards us.

 

"You boys notice anything strange around this area?" Said the human, dressed strangely. Before we could answer another man stepped casually from the monster, he was holding paper and weird rocks, he was a skinny man, white hair as well, he walked to us. "The energy readings are traced around here, these two boys are covered in the residue." Said the man showing his magical rock. "Alright then, lets take 'em home." Said the blue-cloathed man. I smelled trouble.

 

"Mood! Run!" I yelled, grabbing his hand and breaking through between the two men. "Get those kids!" The old man said pointing at us. "I ran with all my un-transformed might, but Mood was slower because of his injury. Eventually he tripped over himself.

 

"Mood!" I exclaimed. "Go forth without me Veinxs! Heather before both we are trapped!" Mood said rushing is arm forward towards me. "I hesistated. But decided to do as he wished.

 

The two men caught up to Mood. "One of 'em got away." One said. "It doesn't matter, lets just worry about this one for now." The other said.

 

I ran through the white pathway, but found too many humans to witness, so I went to a spot between two rocks and climbed my way up. Then proceeded to jump along each building, but as they grew farther apart, I decided to rely in my Werewolf form to get to the other side. As i've been leaping, I can help shake the feeling that...something is following me....?

The first time I read about Mood, I tought he was Doom himself. In this story, on the first time he appeared, I tought he was a liar, that Doom had surviveed and was still after Veinx. When I read the next chapters I saw that I was completly wrong. He's one of my favorite characters now. I'm enjoyng the story very much. Please write more. - fans are waiting - :D:D:D:DD:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

As you insist.....

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Chapter 11 - Reunion:

 

I leaped from building to building under treacherous heat. But then I stopped and turned around, and saw something dressed in white quickly rush up to me and knock me upside the head. I blacked out....

 

*1 hour later*

 

I awoke with a pounding headache in my human form, I was underneath blankets, my head on a soft pillow of white, and atop something....springy and...gentle. I was in a large room, apparently in the center. There were two men standing on both sides of me.

 

"He's awake." Spoke the one on my left. "So it seems..." said the one on my right. "Speak thineselves and reveal my location. TAKE PART FOR YONDER WAYS!" I said yelling and wriggling around. I was tightly roped and bound to the bed. "Hold on there Prince, don't get your fur in a curl." said a familiar voice. What? Who be there? Face me!" I said angrily. "Untie him." The voice behind me said. And so the two men did, once my ropes were unbound I I quickly punched the one on my left away from me as I did kick the one that was to the right of me away as well. Then I quickly turned around to face the voice that is now inches away from my face.

 

"?!" I gasped. "Hello....Prince." Said.......Seever. The Vampire Pet store Clerk from Domopie. "I-I....y-your....." I stuttered. "Yes Veinxs. Its me." He said. Seever, being a vampire, didn't look a day older than the day I entered that time portal. Only he was dressed very differently. "Seever...it IS you!" I said and greatly jumped on him in a dog pile, of course he lifted me with one hand. "Ha ha! I never thought i'd see you again!" I said. When he put me down I looked at his cloathing more specifically. Seever was dressed in a gray T-Shirt, blue pant-leggings he noticed as "Jeans", a ticking contraption called a watch in his left wrist and some "Shoes". "That is a strange wear you have Seever. Is this what the kids our age garment in in this time?" I asked. "Indeed dear friend, it has been too long." He said with a smile.

 

""You young kids already forgot about me?" Spoke an old man's voice in the back of the room. "Ahh yes, come on out....Ron."

 

...To be continued...

I don't beleive it: Ron nad Seever are in the year 2010! This story keeps geting more and more interesting - and so unpredictable :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D Plase write more :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D