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Camp Freak [An original RP]

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This RP is for OCs (original characters). And it's not KH based, sorry. :<

It's my first attempt at starting something like this; and it's fairly daunting on a board so jam-packed with KH roleplays. I'm really hoping this doesn't get shot down instantly.

 

[ -- First off;

 

A few basic ground rules before I even start to get into what this is about.

[align=right]Please, PLEASE try to keep your spelling and grammar in check. Paste it in Word or something if needbe, just make sure that people can actually read it without a headache. A typo every here and there is no problem- barely spelling a single word right is. Sorry, but it seriously bothers me. I've had years of English teachers slamming grammar and spelling rules into my head, and now any kind of icky writing just... grates. Although I'm a hypocrite and do tend to start sentences with "And". It's not much of a grammar rule, anyway- basic stuff like forgetting full stops and paragraphing is what is just irritating.

 

One liners are to be used sparingly here, too. Short replies to long posts are kind of heartless. Even if all you can do is "Soandso jumped in the elevator along with Beezlebub", at least try and stretch it all beyond just one line. Like, if you're stuck with a one-liner response... how are they feeeeeeeeeling? What are they thinking?

 

Also, no serious God-modding or killing other characters unless you ask permission and they THEN ACTUALLY SAY YES. I've been in roleplays before where someone has asked another person of they can kill their character, has had a no in response, and then killed them off anyway. Gah.[/align]

 

[ -- The Concept;

 

There are monsters in the streets, the stores, everywhere. But they're not rampaging around, killing and causing havoc. In fact, they are relatively accepted. Evolution and mutation has caused the human race to have to grudgingly make way for their new equals. A lot of hatred still exists for the non-humans, and more for the half breeds. So much that scientists studying them have noticed how hard it is for those of us not entirely human, growing up and living around such prejudice. So a small group of them set up a camp, so to say, a sanctuary for the younger generations. And so, they brought in the kids that had been victimised or targeted, asking parents of such creatures to send their kids in, so they could have somewhere to live where they WEREN'T just freaks. Where they could be themselves. Not a lot of them were willing to stay, however... Once you're sent there, you need your parent's consent to leave until you're twenty. And not everyone feels like holding hands and staying in with the den of monsters.

[ -- Character Sheets;

 

Name: (Uhm, can really be anything.)

Age: (Bearing in mind the RP is set inside the camp and most people there leave at 20.)

What Are You?: (Half-breed, were, etc, etc... Any kind of creature.)

Appearence: (Picture and/or description)

Past: (Anything significant.)

 

The rest? I think it's better you work on and show during the RP. If you wanna participate, just fill out the sheet.

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Zerex looked at the weird boy, amused at how he couldn't swim; he was also quite sympathetic towards him.

"Don't worry about it, the water can't be that cold" Zerex said whilst watching the boy shudder, "I think I'm going to go and train for a bit now, care to join me? What's your name by the way? Mine's Zerex."

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"Okay!" Sebby bounced up to his feet. "Oh, it's S'bastian. Sebby if you want. And training?! Ooh, what for?" he asked, bubbly and over-excited.

Aaron jumped off the tree, holding his blade up as he fell, it sliced the branch clean in half, and Zane had nothing to land on

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Instead of grappling for a hold on a branch or tree, Zane kicked against one of the trunks and latched onto Aaron's back in a split-second moment of panic at the fall. Clinging to him, Zane struggled with the blade, trying to press it against Aaron's neck.

"I have a mission," Zerex said in a stern voice. "It's to bring an equilibrium to this world, to stop this hatred between races." Zerex's back started to burn, causing him to cry out in pain, falling to the floor as he did so.

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With a wail of surprise, Sebby crouched down next to Zerex, grabbing his arm with both hands. "H-hey! What's wrong?! Wh-what hurts?!"

Within a few minutes, the White Rabbit had spotted a vending machine. She ran up to it and stared through the glass, gazing at a small bag of Funyuns.

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Zack strolled up behind her, slightly amused. "You not got any money, or somethin'?"

Aaron shifted his weight, and rolled over in midair, the force of the impact on the ground on Zane not Aaron

The White Rabbit looked in her bag, and all that was in it were shreds of Crayon paper.

Wait a minute...

"Zane still has my sketch book!" she exclaimed.

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Zane landed with a deafening thud and an audible crack, but clung hard to Aaron, rolling over and slamming the other boy's head against the ground.

 

Zack blinked. "The idiot took your sketchbook to a FIGHT?! Are you kidding me?"

"G-GET BACK!" Zerex screamed. He ripped off his T-shirt, revealing the large scar running down his spine. From this scar crimson wings sprouted and his right eye turned red. "I-IT'S HAPPENING AGAIN! GET BACK SEBBY!" Zerex felt that man within him, the monster that had imprinted itself within his soul. Scimitar, a demonic angel (like Kross out of D.N.Angel), was trying to take over; Zerex had to do something...

The Rabbit became ashamed of herself when she found herself more worried about her sketch book. "N-no, it's fine," she said, "really."

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[D.N.Angel! :'D]

 

Zack rubbed at the back of his neck. "I swear my brother used to be intelligent..." he muttered under his breath. Then he looked up at the White Rabbit. "D'you want to go get it from the big idiot? It could get torn out there."

He was worried about Zane- worried to the core. But he'd never show it.

 

Completely bewildered and out of his depth, Sebby just kept fighting to stay next to Zerex, completely horrified but at the same time taken over by his usual ridiculously high amount of curiosity.

The White Rabbit nodded. She could wait for her Funyuns.

(I know right :'D)

"Idiot," Zerex thought to himself as he went within his soul. He had to gain control of the Demon if he wanted to survive and save Sebby who didn't run. "Idiot."

 

"Yo Zerex," Scimitar said, the Demon was around 7 foot, had Crimson wings and a Crimson body. He wore black jeans and boots and had a Black Mohawk. His yellow eyes, piercing through his dark soul. He carried a dual bladed Lance, as black as his soul.

 

"This is what's going to happen Scimitar," Zerex said, keeping his cool. "I'm going to defeat you and take your power, I like your abilities."

 

"Well Zerex, you play with fire you will get burned." Scimitar replied, a weird smile on his face

 

"Lame pun" Zerex replied, "I'm going to fight fire with fire," he said, summoning flame to his hands.

 

"Now who's using lame puns?" Scimitar replied.

 

Zerex threw the fireballs at Scimitar, using them as a distraction to draw his sword.

 

Scimitar waved away the flame and darted towards Zerex, lance aimed at him

 

Zerex dodged past the lance and sliced at Scimitar

 

Scimitar dodged and knocked the sword out of Zerex's hand.

 

Zerex threw fireballs at Scimitar's head and broke his lance as the flame hit his face.

 

The pair engaged in hand to hand combat that seemed to last an age, until Zerex got the upper hand and assassinated Scimitar with his hidden blades. As Scimitar fell, he said "don't think this is the last you'll see of me, I will be waiting when you use my power I will only grow stronger and return to take your body."

 

"Yeah?" Zerex replied, "well I guess I'll have to be the stronger one then." He said, absorbing the demon's power. He felt power that he knew would help him on his journey.

 

"Now to get out of here."

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Zack started to head towards where they'd last seen Zane, and turned to her, walking backwards. "Promise me something?Leave getting it from Zane to me, okay? I'm less likely to get hurt permanently."

 

Sebby just clung to Zerex, nails digging into his shoulders as he shook him. "C'mon, look at me, you're scaring me!" he cried, but wasn't exactly going to run off and leave Zerex there, no matter how scared he was- this was the kind of thing he could never see or experience properly watching from afar like he usually did.

"Umm... Alright," the White Rabbit agreed.

Zerex awoke, his eyes had turned a blood red, the after effects of taking a demon's power. He turned to Sebby, "I'm so sorry about that Sebby." He said apologetically. He got up and felt the scar re-seal itself. "Sebby, I came to this camp out of my own will, I have no parents or anyone to look after me. I arrived here 3 days ago, after the demon Scimitar had attacked me I had to find somewhere safe to go. This place is amazing, there is no pain or hatred that I've seen so far unlike the world outside, you stayed by my side although I told you to go and for that I thank you."

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"Zane has a tendancy to lose it if you interrupt him," Zack added, biting his lip. And pushing that beserk button with him is a really bad idea, remember, Zack? a small piece of common sense reminded him. He ignored it.

 

Sebby seemed to snap out of all the worry and fear instantly; giving Zerex a warm smile, he replied; "Hey, it was scary, but you were in trouble. And if I left you when you were like that it would be totally mean, you know? 'Sides, I know what it's like to look after yourself." He pointed to himself, smile widening. "No family. Jus' like you."

"Well thank you Sebby," Zerex said. "May I ask a favour of you?"

"Alright," the White Rabbit simply said. She couldn't really find a reason to argue about someone's personality, so she didn't.

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(O.e Kind of trying to wait for RoxSox before I make Zack go charging in... Which is getting tricky...)

 

Sebby plonked himself down properly on the grass- crouching like he was, his legs had been starting to cramp up. "Sure, whatd'ya need, Zerex?"

 

Zack thought for a moment. "He's got to have shoved it in a pocket or something... Surprised it hasn't fallen out. Which it might've."

Aaron sat down next to Sebby, "Sebby, there are others here, right? I need to meet them. I need to find out more about this place and why it appears to work so well, I mean, the last half-breed I met tried to kill me... but I know for a fact that there is so much innocence here from what I've seen and heard from the outside."

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Sebby stared at him for a moment, then shook his head.

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