My story is gonna take place in a planet which is hollow, and has life flourishing on the outside and the inside. The protagonist is a girl, and she lives in a forest like area, her parents and brother are lost, and she thinks they are dead... She soon finds friends, their names are Kirito, and Kion. Kion is a pervert, while Kirito is philosophical, and believes in conspiracy stuff, he finds clues, and hidden symbols, he studies, and reads a lot. In this world there are 7 sages, or elders which control over all life forms, they used to love their creation, but they turned eveil when they partook in an expirement to remove their spiritual cord, like a nobody they were empty inside, and lacked emotion, yet they were evil. The use tyrants to control over most life in the Interior of the planet... Each land has boundaries which seperate the lands, and Permeria, the huge continent which is in dominion by the Tyrant, Nagato(or a diff. name). Nagato is the brother of the protagonist.. they don't know they are related, but soon there will be a clash of the siblings. The protagonist is hurt when a whole village is destroyed, very little in sight, but a knights armor, which holds a symbol of the Tyrants army. She researches, and then runs into Kirito. Kirito is rather shy so he makes it awkward for the Protagonist, but soon when they get to know each other they communicate better, Kion the pervert infuriates the Protag. at times, leading her to punch him in the face a lot. The protagonist finds clues with Kirito, this leads her to a sourcerer, and the lady tells her to find the emerald of truth, and the flower of life. When the protagonist gets into her brothers temple, she then finds a room and finds a circle engraved on the wall...she touches it and... kindof like t his... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w41c_s8gdHk
Then she holds the emerald within her grasp, the emerald of one of t he Elders. Inner wrath releases to her soul, and she unleashes anger. She cannot control the anger, and goes insane, killing or hurting people her hurt herfeelings, o r threaten her, or even her friends... She flees to the sourcerer, and she is there dead... her friends gone, like they left to find her, or escape some trouble. She tries to find them, but they are nowhere to be seen. ( this could be a little different...not final, the sourcerer can still be alive.) She remembers that the Sourcerer told her to leave the boundary, and go to the Prophecy palace. She tries to leave the boundary, but is captured by her brother... she gives him a beating, and she suffers pain, severe pain! She flees, and the tyrant sends armies after her, so this makes it harder for her to cross the boundary. Close to the boundaries are ruins of villages, and advanced buildings, palaces. She crosses the border, or boundary, and ends up in a sand like area, like a dessert, she lacks water resources, and is left without much water, so she suffers also from thirst, even hunger. Some well dressed men, and women, they bring her to the palace, and she wakes up in a bed. Confused she wakes up, with a cloth put on her head by a bald man. She learns that the prophecy Palace predicts future outcomes, and some false prophecies as well. They contact life forms from higher realms, some call them the Creators. They tell her she is destined to restore the thrones of the elders, and if not kill them. By restoring the thrones it means getting new elders, or making them good once again. The protagonist learns the Crystal Emerald is one of the Elders... the good side of him, the spirit which was cut was placed in 7 emeralds, and she has one. They notice she is the Prophecy girl, and says she has the mark of awakening, she is the new candidate for a blade wielder, like a keyblade, but it's not a key, just a sword. These swords summon inner wrath from prevoius users of the blade, it passes down through the ages and ages of the users of the blades. There are 13 blade wielders in each age. 13 lights against 7 darknesses. The other prophecy is that peace to be restored, or the Elders will unleash wrath on all lands... They teach her the ways of the blade, and tell her to meet her father in the Outer Planet, throught the next boundary, the caves of crystals. But there is a problem! The Cyphers, creatures without souls, and love, they hate, feed on fear, and even kill humans, turning them into Cyphers, like zombies, but they are not human form, more alien type form, like a heartless, but instead killing them releases souls. These souls return to the Elders, and they use the souls for energy, and power!
My story is gonna take place in a planet which is hollow, and has life flourishing on the outside and the inside. The protagonist is a girl, and she lives in a forest like area, her parents and brother are lost, and she thinks they are dead... She soon finds friends, their names are Kirito, and Kion. Kion is a pervert, while Kirito is philosophical, and believes in conspiracy stuff, he finds clues, and hidden symbols, he studies, and reads a lot. In this world there are 7 sages, or elders which control over all life forms, they used to love their creation, but they turned eveil when they partook in an expirement to remove their spiritual cord, like a nobody they were empty inside, and lacked emotion, yet they were evil. The use tyrants to control over most life in the Interior of the planet... Each land has boundaries which seperate the lands, and Permeria, the huge continent which is in dominion by the Tyrant, Nagato(or a diff. name). Nagato is the brother of the protagonist.. they don't know they are related, but soon there will be a clash of the siblings. The protagonist is hurt when a whole village is destroyed, very little in sight, but a knights armor, which holds a symbol of the Tyrants army. She researches, and then runs into Kirito. Kirito is rather shy so he makes it awkward for the Protagonist, but soon when they get to know each other they communicate better, Kion the pervert infuriates the Protag. at times, leading her to punch him in the face a lot. The protagonist finds clues with Kirito, this leads her to a sourcerer, and the lady tells her to find the emerald of truth, and the flower of life. When the protagonist gets into her brothers temple, she then finds a room and finds a circle engraved on the wall...she touches it and... kindof like t his... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w41c_s8gdHk
Then she holds the emerald within her grasp, the emerald of one of t he Elders. Inner wrath releases to her soul, and she unleashes anger. She cannot control the anger, and goes insane, killing or hurting people her hurt herfeelings, o r threaten her, or even her friends... She flees to the sourcerer, and she is there dead... her friends gone, like they left to find her, or escape some trouble. She tries to find them, but they are nowhere to be seen. ( this could be a little different...not final, the sourcerer can still be alive.) She remembers that the Sourcerer told her to leave the boundary, and go to the Prophecy palace. She tries to leave the boundary, but is captured by her brother... she gives him a beating, and she suffers pain, severe pain! She flees, and the tyrant sends armies after her, so this makes it harder for her to cross the boundary. Close to the boundaries are ruins of villages, and advanced buildings, palaces. She crosses the border, or boundary, and ends up in a sand like area, like a dessert, she lacks water resources, and is left without much water, so she suffers also from thirst, even hunger. Some well dressed men, and women, they bring her to the palace, and she wakes up in a bed. Confused she wakes up, with a cloth put on her head by a bald man. She learns that the prophecy Palace predicts future outcomes, and some false prophecies as well. They contact life forms from higher realms, some call them the Creators. They tell her she is destined to restore the thrones of the elders, and if not kill them. By restoring the thrones it means getting new elders, or making them good once again. The protagonist learns the Crystal Emerald is one of the Elders... the good side of him, the spirit which was cut was placed in 7 emeralds, and she has one. They notice she is the Prophecy girl, and says she has the mark of awakening, she is the new candidate for a blade wielder, like a keyblade, but it's not a key, just a sword. These swords summon inner wrath from prevoius users of the blade, it passes down through the ages and ages of the users of the blades. There are 13 blade wielders in each age. 13 lights against 7 darknesses. The other prophecy is that peace to be restored, or the Elders will unleash wrath on all lands... They teach her the ways of the blade, and tell her to meet her father in the Outer Planet, throught the next boundary, the caves of crystals. But there is a problem! The Cyphers, creatures without souls, and love, they hate, feed on fear, and even kill humans, turning them into Cyphers, like zombies, but they are not human form, more alien type form, like a heartless, but instead killing them releases souls. These souls return to the Elders, and they use the souls for energy, and power!