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Rated 17 For: Blood, creature violence, brief smoking, brief innuendo, brief sensuality, and language. 

1. 

The night fog drifted across the grounds of the campus as she hurried home, cheeks flushed from the sudden move from the heat of the library to the cold chill of the night, her breath hanging in a small cloud before her as she walked on. 

She sighed, shivering slightly in her thin coat, and closed her eyes against the night.

She sighed again, and stood at the light, waiting for it to change from red to green, a lone car idling at the corner, the driver obscured by dark tinting. 

As it changed, she felt a cold draft, and thought, almost positive, a soft thud echoed from the alley, but she saw nothing.

Suddenly spooked, she began to run, dashing across the wet cement, her boots clicking.

She didn't see him until she slammed into him, falling gracefully on her ass in a puddle. 

He laughed, a deep chuckle, and she looked up, prepared to deliver a scathing comment, but took a breath: 

The man standing above her was tall, dark stubble darkening his cheek bones and chin, his eyes kind, one blue, one deep emerald. 

" You ok?" He asked, a soft smile on his lips. 

" I... yeah.."

He held out a hand. " Need some help." 

She took it, not allowing herself to admit she was internally screaming. " Thanks." 

" You take care. "

He walked on, his coat covering any good views of his ass as she watched him walk away, a dreamy look in her eyes. 

A sudden thunder burst snapped her back to reality, and she hurried on, clutching her books to her chest.

But fate is a fickle mistress: there was no such thing as a chance encounter. 

 

2.

He walked on, sighing: she had been...

Get grip: it was a female. Good, ok...there are thousands. 

He main priority at the moment was to get to the woods: his stomach panged with a deep, aching hunger. 

He jogged down an old hikers trail, leaving the main road behind as he raced through the dark trees, a light snow falling around him. 

He spotted a deer, a young buck, horns barely budding. 

He tensed, crouching on his haunches, then pounced, taking the buck down in one swift motion.

It struggled, but he snapped it's neck, hungrily digging his teeth into its neck.

But..it wasn't teeth that filled his mouth, not at all....

It was fangs, the fangs of a wild dog or stalking cat...

He wiped his mouth, his coat smeared with blood and gristle: not much remained of the buck at this point. 

His hunger sated for another night, he walked on, whistling a small tune to himself as he went. 

Edited by TheTimidLight

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I wanna read more!!

:S

I didn't think anyone would like it. 

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3. 

She couldn't sleep that night: his face wouldn't leave her mind as she tossed and turned, heat lightning illuminating her bedroom with quick flashes, a glimpse, then gone again. 

She didn't see the door to the dorm open, oh so slowly, oh so carefully...

or the figure sneak in. 

As she fell into a light doze, deep enough to not awaken suddenly, the figure crept to the side of her bed, breathing heavily.

A hand, fingernails long and knarled, laid something on the pillow besides her sleeping form, and then the figure was gone, the room silent again. 

Lightning flashed, showing the item to be a red rose, thorns neatly picked off with a knife... or teeth. 

The rose was as red as blood, beautiful, darkly enchanting...

as it lay there, a red droplet ran down the stem, and plished darkly to the pillow. 

 

4.

" Roses don't just freaking SHOW UP, Susan: you have an admirer! " 

" God, I so do not, shut up." 

" You're blushing, you're blushing. "

" I'm going to kill you, Janet." 

Susan twirled the rose in her fingers, despite her room mate: who.. who had left it? 

Her thoughts turned to the man, the incredibly beautiful man, she'd run into the night before, but that wasn't possible? What was she to him? 

She puts the rose in a vase, pouring some water in to preserve it, then dresses for the days classes. 

Edited by TheTimidLight

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5.

He watched her, not daring to come too close, hiding in the dark trees that grew close by the college: he knew he was slowly, stupidly, but inexplicably falling in love with her, a fact that nearly broke his heart: After Emily....

Don't you dare... that's in the past... let it stay there. 

He sighed, scratching his cheek, wincing as his nails drew blood: he looked at his hands in shock, surprised to see the claws still there on the ends of his fingers, even after he'd fed. 

Day after day he became more beast than man ,his hunger hardly sated by just deer after a time: the girl was now considered a runaway a year later, but he still knew the body... what was left of it... was buried in the runoff creekbed by Miller's, the local bar. 

He sighed: who could ever love a beast? A monster? He was wasting his time...

But the rose: she'd kept it, blood stained petals and all. 

His heart leapt at this, wild hope bringing new life to him. 

Maybe... maybe it would be different this time. Maybe....

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(This music kinda sets the mood for this chapter:)

 

 

 

 

 

 

6.

He walked through the trees, alone, the wind the only noise, her class in another building. 

He could only watch her once a day, when her writing course took her to that old building of vines and stonework overlooking the forest, the oldest building in campus. There, he watched her write, long, delicate fingers creating beautiful universes on the page, every stroke of her pen feeding the fire that burned in his heart for her, even as a chill of despair covered it at the same time. 

He walked through the afternoon, aimless, lost in thoughts of how the sun glinted off her strawberry blonde hair, showing golden highlights and tints, how she'd chew her pen when grappling with a tricky sentence, how her eyes... 

her eyes... delicate, emerald eyes that make him feel... made him feel..

Like when Emily was alive, admit it: Admit it to yourself ,or the pain will kill you.

He would never admit it: chance encounter or not, he couldn't allow himself to get close to her... to Susan... his blonde angel from the night rain...

he cursed the day he was born... a freak. 

:S

I didn't think anyone would like it. 

No I love it!

It's perfect for Valentines day! 

do more! 

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No I love it!

It's perfect for Valentines day! 

do more! 

I plan on it. :S

Might not get it done by V day, though. D:

I plan on it. :S

Might not get it done by V day, though. D:

okie dokie :D i love it though! it's amazing! I tried doing a rewrite of Beauty & the Beast, but it was the Norwegian version. I didn't get far and it doesn't sound any where close to yours! your writing is amazing!

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okie dokie :D i love it though! it's amazing! I tried doing a rewrite of Beauty & the Beast, but it was the Norwegian version. I didn't get far and it doesn't sound any where close to yours! your writing is amazing!

:S 

Thanks. And mine's based more on the 80's tv version than than the original, where Beast was more human like. 

I'm glad you like it so far. 

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7.

The day passed: another exam. She'd only made a 90%, and that put her in a bad mood: her writing professor was riding her case about getting the next chapter done in The Castle Of Vines, and she was getting lazy on it. 

Susan sighed, holding her arms close against the dank chill of the evening, as she walked out of Edward. B. Forest Building to head back to the dorm, positive Janet would be waiting to tell her about her newest " Secret Admirer " ideas, annoying the crap out of her. 

A light rain had started to fall, making light mist across the campus, the forest beyond the sidewalk dark and mysterious, looking like something out of sleeping beauty. 

She almost expected to see Maleficent stalking through the dark trees, staff aglow. 

Oh, get a grip, girl: This ain't no fairy tale.

None the less, she had a faint smile, her thoughts full of enchanted princesses in locked towers, and the handsome princes who rescued them. 

:S 

Thanks. And mine's based more on the 80's tv version than than the original, where Beast was more human like. 

I'm glad you like it so far. 

In mine beast is supposed to be a polar bear. as in the Nordic fairy-tale. and i love polar bears so it works out good ! :D

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8.

That night, she had a strange dream... a wonderful, frightening, enchanting dream....

 

A ballroom, dusty with decay, tattered wallscrolls depicting a once lavish house, and some sort of..of curse placed on it, turning the youngest son into a half human, half monster.

A noise; she turns, realizing she was in a floor length ballgown, as red as blood, white gloves halfway up her arms. 

" May I have this dance?" 

She smiles, as he walks into the light, dressed in a white tux... but... blood stains the front.

" May I have this dance?" He asks again, eyes glinting, feral, in the light, a deep yellow.

She nods, and they waltz to haunting music from unseen musicians, dancing away, even a claws sprout from his fingers, tearing her gloves, 

even as he digs fangs into her neck....

 

She jerked awake, covered in sweat, rubbing her neck in fear there would really be a wound. 

Outside, a gentle rain fell. 

Edited by TheTimidLight

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9.

" You look like shit. " 

Susan glared at Janet over the table, smearing her oatmeal around on her tray. " Gee, you really know how to flatter a girl, Jan." 

" Sorry..." Her friend reached over to snag a few chips from Susan's bag. " Didn't sleep?" 

" I... had weird dreams. "

" Good story material?" 

Susan nodded, swallowing a lump with a grimace. " Very. It was a weird...but..good dream. "

" Gonna let me read it when your done?" 

" Sure." 

The bell rang, and the both dumped their trays, Janet heading off to Social Studies with a little wave. 

Susan walked slowly down the hall, the sunlight shafting through the windows in God rays, the heat nice. 

She sighed, and put her head against the coolness of the glass, eyes closed. 

She opened them, and looked out: he stared back in at her, a soft smile on his lips.

She smiled back, but he freaked, running, coat flapping like wings behind him as he ran away. 

Sad and confused, she hurried onto class. 

I lovvee ittt!! best birthday read ever!

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I lovvee ittt!! best birthday read ever!

It's your birthday? 

It's your birthday? 

Yup! its my birthday. :) turned 15 today  :3

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Yup! its my birthday. :) turned 15 today  :3

Happy 15th Bday, Amber! 

 

Posted Image This is for you. ^-^

 

Happy 15th Bday, Amber! 

 

Posted Image This is for you. ^-^

 

Thanks, Timid! I love your story btw. but you can probably already tell that xD

is that how you imagined Susan?

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Thanks, Timid! I love your story btw. but you can probably already tell that xD

is that how you imagined Susan?

Yes. Do you like it? 

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i do! Looks exactly how i pictured her too!! :D

Happy birthday. ^-^

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TO THE READER:

Due to the writer having a ton of shitaki going on at the moment, BEAST is on ( temporary ) hiatus. 

I will post a new chapter later: I'm just dealing with mild depression currently. 

Thank you for reading. 

Good day. 

-Timid

: I hope you get better soon (and not just because i want to hear more about the story, I genuinely hope you get better) :)

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: I hope you get better soon (and not just because i want to hear more about the story, I genuinely hope you get better) :)

Thank you. 

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