this is bloods story from vampires vs werewolfves for some that dont know the rp ill try to make soo you can under stayd as will

 

blood was born as a wolf his family loved him hes mother sinclear and his dad wet there familed hated each other but blood keep his mom's and dad's sides of the family from fighting each other he was there prid and joy he was always happy even when he was sad he keep a smily in front of them.

 

the pack was full of family only over 50 peoply there they all where happy when he was born but later on thignes whent worng with blood he started scholl and everthing whent worng whith is vamp best freindwas named cold

 

later on his family learnd to love cold but when they hit 13 years old something happened to cold he changed and one dark night him and other vamps came and attacked bloods family blood was the pack leader he killed most of them but he couldnt save his pack osme of them got away but most of them died .

 

his mosther was killed and his father was killed right in front of him by his best friend the only ones that are stell aliv are the young ones and him but he doesnt even know if any of them are still alive

soo he keeps lookign for cold for he can kill him for what he did to his life and the pain he had to feel.

 

here is cold if you wont to see him http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs46/f/2009/230/3/d/Anime_Boy_by_chibi_kiro_cb.jpg he looked soo not evil this is blood http://img2.ak.crunchyroll.com/i/spire4/01152008/a/8/5/d/a85dbe26616ec0_full.gif heres his wolf form http://quizilla.teennick.com/user_images/L/LY/LYC/LycosLittleWolf/1128261651_ingenBlack.JPG

This is starting off sad...... But its still REALLY good!!!

Cool story bro

ok im wirting more to it first part is boring a little

chapter 1

child or grace

 

a few days after blood was born he was already trying to run places when he was two little "ha come on back blood"sinclear said she picked him up with one hand and sat him back down"but..mo-m"blood was complaning but stayed there.

 

it was ten days befor wet brong the family out there to see the new baby even when they hated each other they whernt fighting then wet walked in the cave "....."sinclear looked at him"will did you get the them to come out here "wet shoke his head and the family walked in they all huged the little one and held him they all left slowly after a wheily of playing seeing the little one and metting him seens it was night they just stay out there.

 

after they left blood walked over to wet"dad!"wet loked at him "......." blood tryed to pull on his ear"son..you need something.."blood just keep bitting him"i wont to play.."wet picked blood up and thorw him blood landed on his feet".............."blood ran up and headbutted him but wet just looked at him then pushed him to the side they sat there playing for a long time"now you two stop playing soo rough!"she was eating on a deer wet brong in the other day wet sat down and blood did the same later on they curld up togther and whent to sleep as a family"..goodnight..mom dad.."

but what was to come later on would be hard for him to deal with

end chapter one

this is rly good so far. keep writing

This is awesome! Write more!

really good dude

Nice story

It's really good

Not to be harsh or anything, but could you capitalize right and put in some punctuation marks where its needed? I mean, if you have the time to write it, then you have the time to make it grammatically correct.

 

Just sayin.

 

Its pretty good though I suppose.