Villi1997 1,832 Posted May 20, 2015 I am working on a novelization of BLEACH, and i decided to share an excerpt of dialogue before i am going to upload the first chapter. Feedback is very much appreciated. ‘’What the hell, bro?’’ ‘’You think you can just go around kicking one of my boys and command us to leave like that?’’ ‘’Do you have something to say?’’ ‘’Alrighty, then! First question, you over there! What is this thing?’’ ‘’Um, I think it’s supposed to be an offering for a girl who died in a car-crash few years ago?’’ ‘’Correct!’’ ‘’Question two, why is it suddenly knocked over?’’ ‘’We were skateboarding through here and Yamcha accidentally knocked it over…’’ ‘’Correct!’’ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Iamkingdomhearts1000 1,170 Posted May 20, 2015 "Its true to the original English Dub adaption but the thing is, is this a novel about the series itself or an entirely new work, based on the series?" Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
