So, I did this Patronus Charm for my friend, and I'm looking for some feedback, whether its good or bad or something.

If you happen to like my work, you can request any creature if you're so willing, I have much spare time of my hands.

 

EDIT: If you have an image of something you'd like it to be converted to a Patronus, feel free to post it )

Edited August 23, 201510 yr by Xer

That's rather amazing. I love that mist effect although I feel that it needs to be much more subtle (maybe less smoke) . If you can somehow make it even more translucent then it would be even better. All in all , very good effort and the colour and mood fits the patronus charm perfectly.

That's rather amazing. I love that mist effect although I feel that it needs to be much more subtle (maybe less smoke) . If you can somehow make it even more translucent then it would be even better. All in all , very good effort and the colour and mood fits the patronus charm perfectly.

Thanks for the feedback, I made another one for you to let me know something. I made it less blurry-er, but I thought if I removed it completely, it'd lose that "magic" that it has. Thoughts?

 

It looks a lot better. I like how you trace the mist similarly to the fox body, gives it a fluid look .Though it needs more of those glowy effect like the eagle .Definitely an improvement .