Hello to whoever is reading this. This is my first time posting my first story in the internet. I expect to whomever has time to give me a supporting reply about the chapters. Anyways, I hope you all like poetry too it's written by me and, more over, this story was created, yours truly to, me! , Neptune. Once again I hope you all like my creativity and thank you for taking your time stopping by and reading this.

 

-Neptune

 

Enter her world of wonders and the unknown.

 

Chapter 1 : "A winter's curse"

 

In the afternoon of January 5th, year 2020, five children went into an abandon old house. The floor creaks every step they take and the windows were borded up with wood leaving the insides of the house with no light except for the snow that Illuminate the doorway. However, that did not stopped them from entering.

Girl: "What? Scared? I knew you were a chicken!" Girl points at Mayu.

Mayu: "Just..just give me a second chance!"

Mayu regrets getting into this mess ,but she doesn't want to risk being bullied.

Boy: "Go home if you cant handle it."

Boy2: "None of us wanted you to come anyways. You're just a freak with those weird eyes of yours!"

Girl3: "Are you sure you're not blind?"

Their words stab through her heart.

 

They laughed as Mayu looks down at her shoes, remembering why she wants everyone to stop bulling her and calling her names, because her appearance, her white eyes is the reason why they think she's weird. Mayu shakes her head and grips her hand.

Mayu: "I-I'm brave!"

Girl 2: "Then prove you're just as brave as us!"

Boy 2: "Freaks go first." Boy grins at Mayu.

The other boy push her to the stairs.

Boy 1: "We'll be waiting."

Ignoring their whispers and giggles she face the stairs and took a deep breath taking one step at a time walking up stairs. When she arrive up stairs she couldn't look away from a floating pitch-black orb that was floating in front of her. A few seconds later the orb glimmered like a heartbeat which controlled Mayu as she speaks in her trance.

Mayu: "White is good

Black is evil

I'll exchange you a gift

If you bestow me your wish."

 

After that, the orb dissolved into a black gas and entered her left eye.

 

(Mayu narrating)

A loud "no"echoed down stairs. I felt a pull by a person as we tumbled down the stairs. I noticed that the bullies abadoned me. I was mortified yet, I have no idea what happened up there a few moments ago. Everything seem unreal to me now.

 

???: "What did you do? Snap out of it!" The male shakes her. Mayu got a good look on the male, 17 with black hair and caramel eyes. He offered her hand as he helped her up.

Mayu: "Wha- who are you and what happened!?" The teenagers face got serious.

??? : "You made a contract to the most dangerous magic. If you wouldn't gotten my way I would have eliminate it." He ingored the "who" question.

???: "This is extremely dangerous..do you know what you have just done? Your life will be a loop of enduring."

Mayu: "I'm sorry.. I"

 

Mayu groans of pain in her eye. The color of her left eye change to complete darkness.

???: "Crap, lay down there's no time!" Mayu followed directions while the stranger took his jacket off and place it under her head.

???: "Keep opening your eye."

The boy levitated his hand in front of her eye and uses his healing powers to heal her eye. Mayu cried of the pain ,but manage to see with the other eye. Shock to see what he doing was magic.

???: "Give your me hand." He said as she held up her hand letting him grab it.

???: "This might hurt." He grab out his cross chain out of his shirt and opens the cap of the lower part of the cross. Without the other half of the cross, it seems to be a needle. After that he cut her index finger while he's squeezing it, letting blood drip on her eye.

 

Mayu: "It hurts!" Mayu hand trembles while she tries to keep her eye open.

???: "It's gone for now, but be warned, the curse eye will come back." He clips the bottom half of the cross back to normal

Mayu: "Will it hurt again?"

.???: "Maybe, perhaps the second or third time. Therefore, you'll suffer from amnesia when an incident happen. It will be based on the actions of the curse.." He saw her confuse face and rephrase it again. "It's a unique curse that you'll probably forget when your eye does something to people."

Mayu: "Like what things does my eye do to people..?" He sighs.

???: "Get up we're finding your parents." Mayu got up quickly and the boy carried her. He stampede into the exit, running through the snowy streets until her eye shot a beam of dark ray at a tree, almost aiming at the boy. They stopped when they arrived at a park.

???: "Stop worrying too much!" He place her down.

Mayu: "How am I suppose to worry if I almost.." She gulped. "I don't wanna have this curse get rid of it! Please!" The fear in her eyes made her left eye glow returning to it's dark color.

???: "Then you leave me no choice." he touched her forhead casting a forget spell on her. The little girl fell the floor laying on a pile of snow.

 

???: "I didn't want this to end this way but you left me with no choice. I erased your memory ,so you can forget what happened. I'm sorry." He crouch down strokes her hair, then he carries her, making a grunting sound placing her down on a stone bench and covers her with his jacket.

Man: "Mayu!"

???: "Mayu. Could it be you that they're looking for?"

He made himself invisible.

Woman: "Mayu!"

Man: "Let's get her home."

The boy made him self visible, watching a man what it appears to be the girl's father carrying her away with the jacket. Mayu opens her eyes watching the Teenage boy standing in the middle of the side walk waving good bye at her. Mayu reached for the boy and went back to sleep. He stops waving after she fell asleep.

???: "I found her." He said to himself.

 

 

"Hoping to cross paths again.

I've been yearning too long.

I must wait until more years end.

I hope that day will come ."

That was great! I enjoyed how you wrote it as a play instead of an essay, very unique! If you ever want tips or just to discuss ideas message me.

That was great! I enjoyed how you wrote it as a play instead of an essay, very unique! If you ever want tips or just to discuss ideas message me.

I'll gladly discuss with you any tips if I need it, thank you so much for reading it.

Wow, this is a pretty intense first chapter!  Whatever that black orb was, it sure cursed Mayu pretty bad!  I felt bad for her because she was being bullied!  That made me feel sad for her!  And I wonder who the mysterious boy that helped her is?  I'm guessing this won't be the last time they see each other!  But well, the next time, she won't know who he is because of the forget spell he cast on her!

 

My favorite part of this chapter was this little poem at the end: 

 

"Hoping to cross paths again.
I've been yearning too long.
I must wait until more years end.
I hope that day will come ." 

 

That poem just reminds me of...never mind.

 

*Clears throat.* Ahem, anyways, excellent chapter!  I'm looking forward to reading more!

Chapter 2 : "A new world"

 

8 years later, Year 2028.

 

An older Mayu woke up by the sound of her alarm clock she slowly opens her white eyes. Mayu turned off the alarm clock, got up ready for school. After, brushing her hair a flash back appears in her head of her dead family.

Mayu: "Forget about it Mayu, its not important..."  When she moves her head up she saw herself in the mirror, noticing her left eye changed to a black color. It's not the first time that happens. "White and black eyes a weird combination" she thought. Her diversed eyes gazes on her phone then rush yo find her eye patch behind the mirror, tieing the straps behind her head and rushing to the front of the door, grabbing her bag, slipping her shoes and open the door of her apartment closing it then locks it with a touch screen device next to her apartment door.

 

-She walks through a wide path filled with crows and doves flying away as she steps in the college campus.-

 

 

(Mayu narrating)

My name is Mayu Eiensei, 18 years old. Orphaned since I was 10, the cause of my orphan childhood was my left eye... But all I know I accidentally killed my classmates in my old Elementary school. I didn't told anybody about it because.. The truth is..that I was a coward and I still am in some ways.

 

-She enters her class on time-

I know that one boy survived ,but he is not "sane" anymore. He turned into a complete lunatic, prisoned in a mental hospital. From what I can recall nobody knows that I did it. That same day I killed my parents too -A distorted flash back appears in her head as she tries to make it through her classes-when I try hard to think about what happened  to my parents my black eye re-appears. If I try hard enough to remember people will know my "dark" secret. It is true that this eye taught me the arts to master my powers , but.. it doesn't change the fact that I am monster. A monster disguise as a innocent girl.

 

That same day after the lost of my parents and the children. I was one of the first cases of having powers and, of course, the only one with a black eye reappearing every now and then, but between me, myself, and I, this is my secret. Regardless, 7 years ago they developed an organization called The AMO (Administration Magic Organization) is a government approved, educational school for "Astral's'" (females) and "Zane's" (males). And do you know how we get these powers? By touching a certain colors of orbs that are not a threat. Even if we did not noticed it's presence, we can still obtain it if we get lucky. They can be invisible as well. Everyone is blessed with a power ,but my power has distruction... I'm starting to accept this eye. Despite of having a curse I can copy other's ability when my eye turns... white to black.  I vow to use this talent of mine for emergencies only. The only advantage I have to use it, is in my missions or when in serious danger.

 

After school in the cafeteria a girl startled Mayu by touching her shoulder. It was Mayu's human friend Hana Gayabora who's intrested in studying magic.

Hana: "Mayu, ditch your AMO mission's so we can go shopping"

Mayu: "Hana, my night missions is-

Hana finished her sentence "Is important to keep humans safe, I know ." She sighs.

Mayu: "I see you got it memorized."

Hana crossed her arm.

Hana: "Seriously Mayu when was the last time you had fun and you're wearing that eye patch again?" Hana reach for her eye patch

Mayu backed away

Mayu: "You shouldn't be to nosy."

Mayu's expression changed calm to serious.

Hana: "Sorry. About. That. "

Mayu: "Um..i'll see you tomorrow at school."

Hana: "Oh...Okay."

Mayu waves at Hana and walks away without looking back.

 

Mayu is on top of her school building and looks at the city she took of her eyepatch, her eye turned back to normal. She took a deep breath smelling the cool air in the dusky sky. Moments later she slowly turned around making a teleported passage and crossing it. She arrived in the AMO building to what it seems to be a training room. She first encounter her team partner Ivy Crawford, the first Astral friend Mayu ever had and her adopted brother wearing gloves is Sak Crawford, an American talent who speak fluent in Japanese he is also Mayu's childhood friend.

Ivy: "She's here."

Sak turns around noticing Mayu's presence.

Sak: "Let the mission begin." They group in a circle.

Mayu: "What's our objective?"

He looks at the tablet screen.

Sak: "Looks like they're Zequcus's wandering 3 metros link located on the east of the city, Ivy you can take care of that" Ivy claps her hand and vanished.

 

(Mayu Narrating)

Dark orbs (Zequcus) pronunciation {sec.q.cus}. Used to be Astrals and/or Zane's. But we do not know how they became a "Zequcus". AMO agents know they can never go back to their human form. They're motives? Neither we know. They just chase humans or us sometimes. Although it is true human do not have magic they still consider to have energy of some sort.

 

Sak: "Mayu there's a Zequcus controlling a human in a city square, down town. Think of it as training, good luck."

Mayu: "Thanks."

Mayu teleported to her mission's location. She noticed the people running in one direction and walks throuh the panic crowd the opposite way and found the enemy.

Mayu: "Mission commence!"

She summoms her spear pulling it out of her left eye.

Mayu: "I summon this weapon to stab your remains and banish you to the dark place."

She slowly rubbed her palm on the spear creating sparks.

Mayu: "Be banish from this world!"

She quickly teleported behind the controlled man's body and with the palm of her hand she summons an word sign circling in front of her, dozens of arrows appearing through the alchemy sign, stabbing the Zequcus until the human is set free. She slices the orb with her weapon until it disappears, she looks around and stands up normally and unsummons her spear.

Mayu: "Is it over?" She suddenly felt a pinch in her head she moan and kneel down.

 

The Zequcus regenerates and turns large then shot flames directly at Mayu, she turns around until a stranger pushed her before she gets attacked and they were blown off by the explosions of the flames.

???: "YUKI!!" The stranger cover his mouth before he say anything else then to face the Zequcus. He put his hand on the floor summoning a sign, sending electrical lines going toward the enemy and blows it up until its remains splattered every where. The stranger cleans up the place with a big summoning sign.

 

???: "You look Exhausted." Mayu's vision is blurry from the explosion but feels like a dejavu by looking at him.

Mayu: "Do I know you?" She walk wabbly.

???: "If you cant remember clearly then we have not met.... Also, remember to breathe when you summon a elemental sign you're putting to much energy you can fainth from it." He walks away after.

Mayu: "Wait...wait! who's ...Yuki." She fell uncousious.

 

"The world has changed, people change, but my eyes stay the same."

Edited April 7, 20169 yr by Neptune

Oh wow, this was quite an awesome chapter!  And I really love the whole concept of Medeis, Astriaus, Zains and Zequcus!  It really establishes the whole world building concept of your story!  I also love Mayu's combat style, it's quite badass!  I feel sad that she accidentally killed her family and lots of children, but at least she knows it was an accident!  Wow, great work so far!

 

I can't wait to read more!

Hiya readers, well I guess its just Key reading this but I am happy I am getting support ffromone person. This is a remake of the 3rd chapter. I completely trashed the old one because I thought it was sucky. Anyways here it is.

 

 

Chapter 3 "Destiny"

 

A few hours Mayu's friend brought her to her room.

Hana: "mayu?"

Ivy: "just let her get some rest she needs it after all she was put in a tough mission."

Hana: "this might sound weird but have you noticed she wears the eye patch more often?"

The group was silent

 

Sak: "..ive been wondering about it too. She worries me sometimes."

Ivy: "mayu.."

Sak: "we should leave now and let her get some rest"

The group left her room Mayu opens her eyes and summons a mirror and looked at her self in the reflection noticing her eye turned black. Seconds later the silence was interrupted by a males voice.

 

???: "hello again."

Mayu was taken aback by the voice and saw a male figure standing on her balcony. She got a closer look of him and it was the same man from the mission. He shows her eye patch dangling from his finger.

???: "looking for this?"

She got a better look at him. Handsome and attractive and chestnut eyes that seem somehow hes been through great distress. Everything about him seem perfect. Tall, narrow face, and a degnified figure. He seem like a prince from a fairy tale.

Mayu: "Its you again!"

She covers her eye. The stranger slowly walk to her direction

He talks by himself and gently grabs my hand and put his hand on my eye.

???: "Seal."

Mayu: "Huh?"

She doesnt feel pain or sense of any danger of her eye.

(Who is this guy? And does he know about my eye problem?)

She was still hanging her mouth open and looks at her strange visitor.

???: "That will do for now I no longer need to extract blood from me like I used to."

(He makes no sense. Is he talking by himself? But what he said seems familiar..)

Mayu: "Thank you.. But you looked staight at my eye...

???: "So?"

Mayu: "how is that possible for you to be alive?"

???: "..Easy your a astral and im a zane we both have magic abilities. Havent you learned that from a Magic academy?"

Mayu: "Actually I will be soon. You see im just a pupil from one of my team leaders and he's my best friend. And I was the first astral to be introduce in public."

???: "I see... so youre one of the new generations."

Mayu: "Huh? You mean.. There are others before me?"

???: "Yes we were too cautious to reveal our selfs we hid our society because Humans use to hang our kind as punishment.."

Mayu: "But then..how did the word astral's and zane's were annouced as official names for special people like us?"

His expression had no emotion.

???: "The director of the ASO original was a Zane before any of this happened."

(Wow now I really look up to him more.)

???: "He doesnt like to show off his magic nor his past. So youre better off not telling him about it."

Mayu: "Okay wont...By the way what is your name?" the man and Mayu stared at each other for a long time.

Our minutes of staring was interupted by a knock.

Mayu: "Y-yes?"

(The strange boy disappeared in thin air)

Sak: "Im coming in."

Sak opened the door and entered. His eye were focused towards Mayu.

Mayu: "What is it?"

Sak: "I thought I heard you talking to someone when I walked back into your apartment."

Mayu: "Actually I was talking to myself."

He chuckles.

Sak: "Weird as always huh?"

His face got serious again.

Sak: "Mayu..Sorry that I put you on a rough spot. My supervisor told me to give you a harder mission to make you stronger."

Mayu: "oh.."

(My heart felt a sharp sensation)

Sak: "Dont feel bad. Youre improving your magic."

Mayu: "But is not better like Ivy's and the people at the AMO will probably laugh at my mission score."

Sak sat next to Mayu and tilt her face up and made eye contact.

Sak: "Dont let people get to you."

He stand up and opened the door and stopped.

Sak: "Never think like that okay?..good night."

Mayu: "..Good night"

He closed the door behind him and stood there facing a picture frame of younger Sak and Mayu.

 

 

(Flash back)

Sak and his friend besides him noticed a surrounding crowd of students at the front of the school gates. He got close to the crowd and push himself forward and eavesdrop.

Girl A: "Youre a witch!"

Girl B: "Why do you even exist!!"

The girls push her back and forth to each other. Sak turn to a boy who hysterically laughed at Mayu.

Girl C: "You're too weird. No boy will go out with you." Girl A pushed her into a puddle and got Mayu soaken wet with mud as both Sak and his friend watched her being bullied.

 

Sak's friend: "Serves her right for being weird.."

Sak slowly turns to his direction.

Sak: "Wha-"

Sak's friend: "I heard she was the cause of the dead birds that have been laying on the court yard and tried to posion a teacher."

Sak: "I dont believe she would do that. She's looks weak and too innocent.."

Sak's friend: "Wrong, she's weird humans are not suppose to look like that thing. She has to be put out of her misery."

 

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The girls kick her aggressively as she cries in pain. Watching this made him sad.

Sak: "...You know what?"

His friend gave him his undivided attention.

Sak: "Screw you! Our friend ship is over!"

Sak runs towards to the group while a boy gets in his way.

Sak: "..Get out of my way."

Boy A: "Or what?"

Sak punched his face fiercely and the boy backs away frightened. He stands in front of Mayu's face as she looks up and faces the girls who frooze to look at him.

Sak: "You.... disgust me. You should be ashamed of yourselfs!"

Boy B: "Youre just pretending. I hate hypocrites!"

The boy laughed and sak gave a glare then afterwards the boy ranaway.

The girls took a step back.

Girl B: "Take it easy Sak we're just giving her what she deserves."

Sak: "Why are you doing this? She doesnt deserve this!!!"

Girl A: "she stole my boyfriend."

Girl C: "...and shes a animal killer and a teacher poisoner."

Girl B: "and she looks at me funny."

Sak: "One, you are too young to have a boyfriend and shes doesnt seem to be that type of girl. Two, if you dont have any evidence then is just a stupid rumor. Three, she got eyes too. By the look of it, she was looking for a friend to play because you bastards ruining her life!!!"

Sak's friend steps in.

Sak's friend: "Get away from her she will curse you. Dont betray us she is worthless!!"

Sak helped Mayu up and faces his friend

Sak: "I dont care what you think!! You mean nothing to me! If you oppose me then rot for all I care!!!"

The kids got silent and watched them walk away.

Sak looked at her about to burst out of tears.

Mayu: "Why... Why did you help me?" She sobs.

Sak: "Well I couldnt let you get totured you look weak and I bet your body is covered with bruises."

She covers her self like shes been exposed.

Sak laughed

Mayu: "So why did you decided to save me?"

She sniffle and Sak looks up and thinks.

Sak: "...Because watching you get totured makes me feel like a coward..so do you..how do kids say it..uhh, want to be friends with me?"

Mayu's eyes sparkled and looks at him while he stares back.

Mayu: "We used to be friends but you forgot about me.. so does that mean we're permanent friends now?" she nods innocently and smiles warmly. Sak gasp and stopped walking.

Mayu: "?"

He looks down and hugged her tight and tears roll down from his cheek.

Sak: "I'm sorry...Mayu"

(Mayu didnt cry she just smile that time and wiped my tears with her handkerchief. And for the first time..when I saw that girl smile. I was destined to protect her no matter what...)

(End of flash back.)

 

Sak wipes of his tears

Sak: "dammit.."

He leaves her apartment. While at Mayu's room the strange man reappeared in front of Mayu making her jump from her bed.

Mayu: "!"

He held up his index finger on her lips and cast a sleep spell on her.

Mayu: "ugh...." he turns to look over the balcony and watch Sak leave.

 

???: "...!!"

He carfully looked at his face

???: "No..not again." he clenched his hand.

 

His cold face formed into a serious expression and his eyes glowed yellow.

 

???: "I vow to protect Yuki for eternity.."

He walks back to Mayu's bed and gently rubs her head and kiss it.

 

"Two promises. Two rivals which of them are telling the truth?"

Edited April 10, 20169 yr by Neptune

Oh wow, poor Mayu faced so much discrimination back when she was a kid!  I find it admirable that Sak stepped in and stood up for her!  It's interesting that the two have a past together, as it makes things more intriguing!

 

BUT WHOA!!!!!  Why does the mystery man call her Yuki!?  What is this!?  She goes by two different names!?  Or is one of them lying!?  They both want to protect her, but which of them is the real deal!?  I believe in Sak, the mystery man seems suspicious to me!  Hmm, this will be very interesting indeed!  I can't wait to see what happens next!

Edited April 11, 20169 yr by The Transcendent Key

From the next chapter you will find better understanding of the mystery man. And I will probably include a drawing of his appearance.

 

Edit: And you'll find out what is his name as well.

Edited April 11, 20169 yr by Neptune

From the next chapter you will find better understanding of the mystery man. And I will probably include a drawing of his appearance.Edit: And you'll find out what is his name as well.

 

Awesomeness, I can't wait to read more!  I'm all fired up!!!!

I kinda rushed into this Chapter. Enjoy.

 

Chapter 4 "Aeros"

 

It was morning and the engines of the cars were roaming. Mayu open her eyelids and stare at the cealing.

Mayu: "...Was it just a dream?"

She looked over her shoulder and noticed a paper shaped butterfly

Mayu: "huh?" she grabbed it and unfolded the oragami.

Mayu: "Could it be a letter from the stranger?" she unfolded the paper and read it.

 

The letter was in calligraphy.

"A place where there are no contact

I am there

A place that has life

meet there

Follow the path of the sun and when it ends

I'll be there."

 

The paper dissolves like it was put on fire.

 

Mayu looked up perplexed and scratches her head.

(A place that has no contact...could be...the Emerald Forest? That place is dangerous to go through is like a maze there but sun path could mean the light is leading me to him? Anyways, I must be careful with this man. He could be evil.)

 

Mayu got dresed and rushed out of her door. In 10 mintues she arrived

At the forest entrace.

 

Mayu took a deep breath and exhales.

Mayu: "Here I go..." she walks in the entrance and followed the path where the light from the sun appeared.

 

Everything was according to plan until..

 

A bunch of Zequcaus chase Mayu and she had to run faster. Mayu shot a gust of wind behind her by summoning her spear into a minimized size to get prevent from getting killed by the enemies.

 

Mayu: "Hya!" it had no effect on them. Mayu didnt concentrte on her magic. She is basically vulnerable.

Mayu: "Oh no! Control your emotions Mayu..control" she closed her eyes and triped on a root coming out from the ground. A bright light appeared in front of her. For a few moments it shaped into a male figure.

Mayu: "It's you!"

The myster man held her up with his strenght. She took a brief moment to stare into his eyes ans snapped back to reality.

Mayu: "They're coming!"

???: "Stand back."

He put his hand out and cast a very difficult summoning spell as a big circle appeared in front of us. The man hold onto me and said the words out loud as his voice echoe through the silent forest "Obilterate!"

The Zequcaus dissolve into thin air.

When it was over the man let go of her and the man scowled at her.

???: "You could have been killed. You stepped out from the path that you should have followed!"

Mayu: "...Oh! umm. S-sorry You weren't very specific in the letter you left at my room." her frantic voice was trying to calm down but couldn't. He signs and looks at her with no expression.

Mayu: "So are you going to tell me the purpose of the letter?" He stood boldly and looks at me serious.

???: "Mayu Eiensei! My name is Aeros You are indanger of your curse eye." his eyes glowed a bit of yellow

(Huh? What was that just now?)

Mayu: "Aeros....."

She continue "I thought You healed it?"

???: "I thought so to but... It won't hold back for long. I have to treat your eye continuously until you finally can control it on your own..."

Mayu: "So there is no permanent cure?"

Aeros: "Im sorry..that curse is your destiny now."

Mayu turned away from his and tears roll down her cheeks.

Mayu: "*sobs* ahh.."

Aeros: "...What can I do to make you happy?" his tone was apologetic and sincere.

Mayu: "N-nothing.."

Aeros was silent for a moment. Then he walks closer to her as he's facing her back.

Aeros: "There is one way.."

Mayu stops crying and faces him.

Mayu: "Please tell me!"

He looks away from her.

Aeros: "But its something very special to a girl."

Mayu: "What do you mean?"

He grabs her face and he stares at her dead in the eyes. Mayu's heart started thrumping from her chest.

Aeros: "It's called a kiss. Do you accept my offer?"

Mayu: "..! Wa-wait!" her cheeks were blood red. His lips were inches away from hers until he stops.

Aeros: Yes?" she can feel his breath.

Mayu: "I think I need time to wait for my response.. I mean..it's my first time.."

Aeros: "..Very well." he pulls away.

(Besides is not like he'll like me back Once we kiss. He's just trying to help me from my curse..)

 

Mayu: "So was there anything else you want to tell me?"

Aeros: "I don't want you near that boy you call Sak."

Mayu: "But he's my friend!"

Aeros: "Thats an order."

Mayu: "What? We hardly know each other and you expect me to stop seeing my friend?"

Aeros: "Correct." he looks at Mayu coldly.

Mayu: "Tell me one good reason?"

Aeros: "Yuki..I.."

Mayu interrupted.

Mayu: "Oh and theres another thing. Why do you keep calling me Yuki?"

He hugs her.

 

 

Aeros speaks while hugging her.

Aeros: "Sorry..Im. Not myself latley...you remind me of a friend of mine. She died with the same curse as you."

Mayu gasp.

Mayu: "So she died with a curse?"

Aeros: "Yeah, she couldnt control it"

Mayu felt bad for him.

Mayu: "Did you try to heal her?"

Aeros: "That time I was just...a useless human." He clench his teeth and looks down his eyes glowed yellow. Mayu back away while Aeros gaze at her and stopped his eyes from glowing.

Aeros: "My apologizes, I should assist you back to saftey."

Mayu: "Sure!"

When they walk together. He started talking.

Aeros: "I made a contract to one spirit orb to become a Zane."

Mayu: "I remember I did something lie that I was in an abandon house and some one saved me. I sure want to thank that boy who saved me."

Aeros: "..."

Mayu: "I still have his sweater too."

Aeros was silent as they exit out the forest.

Aeros: "Mayu.."

She looks at him

Mayu: "Yes?"

He covers her eyes and whisper to her ear.

(Music Stops)

 

Aeros: "Youre friends are looking for you and... be careful with Sak."

Mayu felt his hand pull away and she turned around and the spot where he was standing on was empty.

 

Hana was yelling at Mayu's name while Sak did the same.

 

(Oh...I better make up a good excuse..but I can't help but wonder about Aeros' history. He's so mysterious and I felt like he opened up to me a little. His eyes look sad no matter how cold he looks the eyes can't Lie. I misunderstood Aeros I bet he has more intresting stuff to tell me. I hope he can tell me more about Yuki and his contract with the orb and why was he warning me about Sak he's not dangerous.)

 

"A man with no words

Can simply tell what he is saying

By reading his sorrow eyes."

Edited April 11, 20169 yr by Neptune

Oh wow, this was very intriguing!  So it seems that Aeros had a friend that looked just like her, who suffered the same fate she did with her cursed eye?  Hmm, how very interesting!  But it seems odd that he requests Mayu to step away from Sak!  Could be he's just jealous!  But still though, it's good to finally know who the mystery man is!  Now let's see what happens next!

And as I said before here is the drawing of Aeros with Mayu

 

It was part of the conversation of chapter 4.

 

He said: What can I do to make you happy?

Mayu: N-nothing.

 

Edited April 12, 20169 yr by Neptune

Good God...your drawing...it looks amazing!  That attention to detail with the hair and the eyes!  Aeros and Mayu look amazing!!!  I'm jealous of your skills! >3<

Happy that you like it! ^^ I still need pratice but I'm glad the drawing turned out awesome.

Edited April 12, 20169 yr by Neptune

Happy that you like it! ^^ I still need pratice but I'm glad the drawing turned out awesome.

 

Pfft, you're being modest!  Your drawing looks superb!  The only thing though, is that the pencil you use seems to be way too light, or it may be the lighting of the picture! When you make your drawings, after you finish them, try marking the borders of the lines of your drawings with your pencil so that the lines can be darker, that way, the drawing will look more detailed, ya know? Also, slight shadows in certain areas like below the neck and in some parts of the clothing are also cool things to do!  But yeah, other than that, your drawing looks amazing!

Ok well thanks for the tip Mr.helpful pants. I appreciate your help. I will do my best to make the next drawing look breathtaking

Ok well thanks for the tip Mr.helpful pants. I appreciate your help. I will do my best to make the next drawing look breathtaking

 

Haha, you're welcome! I'll be looking forward to the next drawing and chapter!