Chapter 1: Falling into the Black...

A smoky haze covered the air in the small tavern, the room was barely decorated except for a few odds and ends placed on shelves, the room smelled of dirt, smoke, and alcohol. Drunkards sat in their chairs and played poker while the bartender dished out concoctions as if they were water. A man came into the tavern wearing a tattered brown hood. He walked up to the bar and sat down on a stool,

I <3 this. You're an amazing writer! Besides minor grammatical errors, this was great

HAR HAR DERES AN ALEXIS IM PART OF DIS HAR HAR /shot

 

Thanks butterflylexi, I know this is my unedited draft. not the real one.

Ah, I get it. My drafts are always full of that kind of thing

And just call me Lex or Lexi ^^

Get some more chapters up soon!

Thanks to everyone who has been reading this, it means the world to me!

Before I continue the next chapter I want to know everybody's theories and criticism. If you all have any suggestions on anything I could add to the next chapters, please tell me!

 

Thank you so much!

this is just amazing, keep it up

this is just amazing, keep it up

 

Nothing bad to say? Or is that it just good?

It's just that good ;D

It's just that good ;D

 

really? cause I think it may need some drastic work...

Meh, you said it was just a rough draft, right? I see some spots that could be written over to be improved some, but discounting that, it's great <3

Meh, you said it was just a rough draft, right? I see some spots that could be written over to be improved some, but discounting that, it's great <3

 

Well of course but thanks for your response and criticism, like I said it means a lot to me!

np ^^

GET ME ANOTHER CHAPTER UP >:]

np ^^

GET ME ANOTHER CHAPTER UP >:]

 

I will soon, lol

Chapter 6: An Apprentice, a Master, a Brother.

I like this chapter! ;3

I hope Brox'll be okay D:

thanks I worked really late last night to finish it for you guys. Only time will tell if Brox will recover

I think the same as Lexi, you're a genius. Your work with this story is just getting better.

I think the same as Lexi, you're a genius. Your work with this story is just getting better.

 

Thanks Gizelita, it means a lot to hear these things from people like you and Lexi.

Why me?

 

Post another chapter! 8D The suspense..

 

You asked for reccomendations, right? I have one, if y'all don't mind You don't have to use it, of course.

Why me?

 

Post another chapter! 8D The suspense..

 

You asked for reccomendations, right? I have one, if y'all don't mind You don't have to use it, of course.

 

K give it to me

O.K, All new chapters will be posted in a new thread so please continue there!

Anyway I just love this story and keep curius about both: Brox and Erik. Just keep writing :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

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Hey new thread will be posted today with the new chapter and the rest of Antrium: REDEMPTION, so please follow it there!

Chapter 7: River Bank Battle

IT"S BACK!!!! That was great!!