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Oh wow, this has been quite an interesting story so far!  I love how you've nailed the characters personalities perfectly!  I especially love the parts Xehanort appears in! He's such a boss!  I was imagining the late Leonard Nimoy's voice as I read the parts he was in!  It's so awesome! X_X

 

But wow, I really like how you're integrating Kako into the story of Ventus's early days before ending up in the Land Of Departure!  Reading this really makes me wonder how it would be like if Kako were actually part of the games!

 

Great work!

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Fascinating. So I guess we are also seeing all three pasts of Ventus, Terra, and Aqua. Even though really Aqua and Terra had been already at the Land of Departure, this is in your universe. Still nice though. I am wondering about Kako here. His name is Greek for "evil". I do wonder if he ends up on a dark path entirely.

Fascinating. So I guess we are also seeing all three pasts of Ventus, Terra, and Aqua. Even though really Aqua and Terra had been already at the Land of Departure, this is in your universe. Still nice though. I am wondering about Kako here. His name is Greek for "evil". I do wonder if he ends up on a dark path entirely.

 

Does it really? That's actually really interesting. I picked Kako because it translates to "Past" or "Past Days" in Japanese. That Greek translation is pretty intriguing and coincidental.

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This was nice. I do wonder about this Twilight Knight and what he did that was both good and bad. Why can't he be spoken off?

Does it really? That's actually really interesting. I picked Kako because it translates to "Past" or "Past Days" in Japanese. That Greek translation is pretty intriguing and coincidental.

Yup. Actually, we are both right. It is the same word in two different languages, but mean two different things. The word in Greek means evil whereas in Japanese is means past.

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Wow. I did not expect his best friend to return. I thought he was dead. I have to say, you're doing well with your story. Keep up the good work. If Key and I both like your story, then that is the biggest compliment you could get.

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Interesting. I recognize when this takes place. I wonder though how this interconnects with BbS.

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Wow... that was... stunning... O_O Some turn of events. You have grown in your work. Be proud.

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This was nice of him. So that's how the wooden Keyblade Terra uses was made.

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This was nice. I could definitely see that the way Kako obtained is armor is how it's properly done. Nice job.

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Wow... O_O

 

What craziness. This Yurei is a maniac. He's much worse than Vanitas. Who is this boy exactly?

GOOD GOD, WHAT A THRILL RIDE!!!!

 

My deepest apologies for having taken so long to catch up to your story, but here I am, caught up to the last chapter!  And good lord, this story has been amazing! I love how you've made Kako feel like he's an integral part in moving the story of Birth By Sleep along!  It's definitely something that I really love while reading this story! Everything is top notch, and I love Kako's struggle with Yurei!  Kinda reminds me of Ichigo and his inner Hollow!  Nice work!

 

Whenever you update your story, I'll happily be awaiting to read more of it!

I apologize for the long overdue update. It's been a while since I've written a chapter for this story. I'll try to get it done as soon as possible.

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Oh wow, this was awesome!  Another great chapter!  I especially loved how you mixed in Katharos with Skuld and Ephemera!  That was genius on your part! I could see them as another trio set of characters in the vein of Sora, Riku, Kairi and Roxas, Axel and Xion!  Great work!

 

And it's about time you posted a chapter!  It had been a while since you posted anything, so I'm glad you've still got more chapters coming for your story! I can't wait for more!

What a nice refreshment. Boy, I didn't think I would ever see the Twilight Knight. He's cool! So interesting, the Knight and Yurei are both in Kako. That's fascinating. Wonder how Yurei will be defeated.

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Nice to see a chapter. I love how you managed to integrate the HD2.8 XBC trailer into this. Nice job.