This is a new story i've thought of - i'm going along with it as it goes.It's basically about an un-named mercenary and his work with a mysterious organization - read throughout the story to find out more about the plot.Feel free to give your opinions,since im new to writing.Enjoy!
-Chapter 1:The messenger's challenge-
The mercenary was at Norlis village,in the inn's bar.He was drinking a bottle of moonshine,and was enjoying himself.He wore a black robe and black cape,which hid the heavy armor he was wearing under it.He had short black hair,which was neck-length down,and was smooth and spikey.He had 2 giant swords that looked like dragon jaws,which had glowing orange runes on them.He looked behind him,and saw the doors barge open.Some looked to see who it was,others simply ignored it and continued to drink.The man walked up to the mercenary.The mercenary looked to his right at the man,and then realized who the man was.It was Artius Morshen,the local mage of the village.Artius was panting,and took a drink of the mercenary's moonshine."What is it,Artius?",the mercenary asked.Artius stood up,and looked at the mercenary with some sweat on his forehead."Ther'es a man outside who wishes to see you",Artius said.He then took the moonshine and drank it all.The mercenary rolled his eyes,and gave the bartender 15 gold coins.
The mercenary then walked out the door,and sniffed up the fog's air.He then opened the village gates,and looked 20 feet out in him.In front of the village was a house,which was the hut of the village elders.In front of the hut was a man in heavy black-armor,who was wearing a black cloak and black hood.The man was roasting a boar on the fire,while sittin on a stump which served as a chair.The man stood up as the mercenary approached him.
(I'm going to use this sort of way when people are talking)
Mercenary:Who are you?
Messenger:I am a messenger for your employer,who contacted you last week in the blood-sealed letter.
Mercenary:Methinks that was not human blood?
Messenger:Aye - it was blood of a bear.
Mercenary:Ahh,bear blood.-chuckles at his own ignorance-
Messenger:You know the Gorm's cave northeast of here,right?
Mercenary:Aye,that I do - why?
Messenger:There is a gorm in there that we need killed.
Mercenary:If the gorm is of such a burden,why not kill it yourself?
Messenger:I told you,i am only a messenger - and it is a test of your strength - my master wishes for you to kill it.
Mercenary:Alrighty then,i shall go rid of the Gorm now.
Messenger:Very well - I will await your return.
The mercenary then headed northeast.He approached a big,back cave entrance,which led deep into the hill.The mercenary then slowly walked into the cave,and murmured a Elven enchantment,which lit his swords on fire.He then continued to walk through the cave.He heard a creek behind him,and quickly went into a blocking stance with his swords.A giant club then slammed down on the sword.The flames of the swords revealed the Gorm's hideous face.It had 3 eyes,pale green skin,and 2 ivory horns.It roared in anger and continued to slam on the mercenary's swords for 2 minutes.
The mercenary then ran to the left wall,and watched as the gorm chased it.The mercenary then did a backflip off the wall,and landed perfectly behind the grom.He then thrusted his sword into the back of the gorm,and then drew it out of the back.The gorm slowly got up,and quickly spun around and reeled a punch into the face of the mercenary,knocking him back.The mercenary got up with a groan,and snapped his nose back into place.The gorm quickly ran to the mercenary,but fell.The mercenary walked out of the cave,and left the gorm to bleed to death.
The mercenary walked out the cave,and saw a familiar figure.The messenger was standing 10 feet away from the mercenary,clapping at the mercenary's performance."Well done,mercenary - you're ready for you're task",the messenger said.
This is a new story i've thought of - i'm going along with it as it goes.It's basically about an un-named mercenary and his work with a mysterious organization - read throughout the story to find out more about the plot.Feel free to give your opinions,since im new to writing.Enjoy!
-Chapter 1:The messenger's challenge-
The mercenary was at Norlis village,in the inn's bar.He was drinking a bottle of moonshine,and was enjoying himself.He wore a black robe and black cape,which hid the heavy armor he was wearing under it.He had short black hair,which was neck-length down,and was smooth and spikey.He had 2 giant swords that looked like dragon jaws,which had glowing orange runes on them.He looked behind him,and saw the doors barge open.Some looked to see who it was,others simply ignored it and continued to drink.The man walked up to the mercenary.The mercenary looked to his right at the man,and then realized who the man was.It was Artius Morshen,the local mage of the village.Artius was panting,and took a drink of the mercenary's moonshine."What is it,Artius?",the mercenary asked.Artius stood up,and looked at the mercenary with some sweat on his forehead."Ther'es a man outside who wishes to see you",Artius said.He then took the moonshine and drank it all.The mercenary rolled his eyes,and gave the bartender 15 gold coins.
The mercenary then walked out the door,and sniffed up the fog's air.He then opened the village gates,and looked 20 feet out in him.In front of the village was a house,which was the hut of the village elders.In front of the hut was a man in heavy black-armor,who was wearing a black cloak and black hood.The man was roasting a boar on the fire,while sittin on a stump which served as a chair.The man stood up as the mercenary approached him.
(I'm going to use this sort of way when people are talking)
Mercenary:Who are you?
Messenger:I am a messenger for your employer,who contacted you last week in the blood-sealed letter.
Mercenary:Methinks that was not human blood?
Messenger:Aye - it was blood of a bear.
Mercenary:Ahh,bear blood.-chuckles at his own ignorance-
Messenger:You know the Gorm's cave northeast of here,right?
Mercenary:Aye,that I do - why?
Messenger:There is a gorm in there that we need killed.
Mercenary:If the gorm is of such a burden,why not kill it yourself?
Messenger:I told you,i am only a messenger - and it is a test of your strength - my master wishes for you to kill it.
Mercenary:Alrighty then,i shall go rid of the Gorm now.
Messenger:Very well - I will await your return.
The mercenary then headed northeast.He approached a big,back cave entrance,which led deep into the hill.The mercenary then slowly walked into the cave,and murmured a Elven enchantment,which lit his swords on fire.He then continued to walk through the cave.He heard a creek behind him,and quickly went into a blocking stance with his swords.A giant club then slammed down on the sword.The flames of the swords revealed the Gorm's hideous face.It had 3 eyes,pale green skin,and 2 ivory horns.It roared in anger and continued to slam on the mercenary's swords for 2 minutes.
The mercenary then ran to the left wall,and watched as the gorm chased it.The mercenary then did a backflip off the wall,and landed perfectly behind the grom.He then thrusted his sword into the back of the gorm,and then drew it out of the back.The gorm slowly got up,and quickly spun around and reeled a punch into the face of the mercenary,knocking him back.The mercenary got up with a groan,and snapped his nose back into place.The gorm quickly ran to the mercenary,but fell.The mercenary walked out of the cave,and left the gorm to bleed to death.
The mercenary walked out the cave,and saw a familiar figure.The messenger was standing 10 feet away from the mercenary,clapping at the mercenary's performance."Well done,mercenary - you're ready for you're task",the messenger said.