Giginha

10/10 Love it, specially the colors. 9/10 I'm not a big fan of AkuRoku, I think the background on this one could've been a bit different. But the overall is good.

I'm sad you're leaving Rox, hope your life gets better soon. T.T

I'm here!!!!!!!!!!! I want to know the next part of the story and also my character. I wonder how you describe a character based on a person like me. ^^

Mikage (07-GHOST)x Tamaki (Ouran High School Host Club) Come on, they look alke and they would be cute toghether. *gets idea for fanart and starts drawing *

9/10 She looks like Lily from PH 7/10 A bit too simple.

"Cra---- Why did this danm computer have to stop now?!"

"Look at how strange I look when I'm fighting."

5/10 The size isn't right. 8/10 Loved the stock and colors, but the brushes on the left and the text don't blend with the rest.

No prob, do you want a matching signature?

I don't care about it, not many people at my school know that KH exists. But I found out that a girl knew it, and them we started talking about KH and stayed half an hour discussing Axel's sexuality with my brother. I don't know why though.

"HELP!!!!! A FRUIT IS ATTACKING ME!!!!!!!!" /shot

"Look who's naked here!!!"

I don't like to smile.

Akuma looked at the white ceiling of her small room, going to front and back in a repetitive move with her body she awaited for something, patiently on the bed with the same white color. No thoughts went through her head at that time, not anything she could actually notice, but since when did she have anything to think about? In that world of emptyness of hers, where nothing could ever happen? Finally she heard it, the low sound of the old computer announcing a new message on the chat room. Getting up she moved her slim body fastly to the chair in front of the monitor and read it: "Is anyone online?" Typing, a bit slower than usual she answered. "Here we are, waiting for something..."

Decided to post a picture after so much time of my last one. I'm horrible I know. T.T Btw, why does everyone say I look like Claude because of the glasses? (I didn't have them, got last week)

"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!"

Well, I hope you like sincere critiques 'cause here comes one. Well, for the first point I'd like to say that you can't ask someone if they like a story only from the Introduction and 1st chapter, you have to read at least five chapters to make up your mind about the plot. But from this small sample I've got some views, first you ought to try and correct your grammar, there are many mistakes on simple details that should be noticed, that aren't only mispelling, what is pretty usual and almost acceptable. Second, you use too much "THEN" like in this sentence: "Then the captain ran and tackled the dark welder, grabed his tongue and sliced the dark welder's tongue off. Then he picked..." It isn't necessary to use then to make a sucession of actions. 3rd, try to make a few paragraphs, it gets difficult to read and understand the topic of each sentence like this, if I were you I'd make some longer chapters that could give us a better idea of the plot and keep interest. That's all for now, I'll read it again later and see if I have something else to say. Oh yeah, another thing, don't give up because someone (like me) gave you a bad critique, we're not supposed to say that your story is great and that we want to read more while there are many mistakes to be corrected, and no one has achieved perfection yet, so, don't give up.

@KingOFHearts:Li have already got it, if you want I could do another one for you. Sis, here's your sig:

There are many things at religion I don't really agree with, and one of them is about bisexuals and gays, there's no problem in that, they can't just ban something because they don't like it.

"WHAT?!!!!" Seriously, I can't recognize who's in your avatar.

7.5/10 The size and quality aren't good, but since bbs is awesome, we can deal with that. ^^ 7/10 The colors don't blend well with the stock and the text I don't think the size fits for this sig either.

"Oooooooh!!! What is that?" <---epic failure

I'm with Riku! <3

Love it An, your way of writing, the plot, the characters, everything sounds just like a professional work.

"I'm hot and you're nothing compared to me." /x.x